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Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 4
You truly are a gifted writer. I have enjoyed every story I have read of yours. Once again you write a story that just draws me in. Thank you!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Rayday. I was just saying that I was in a shitty mood and the only thing cheering me up is you guys with your reviews and your sweet words. Thanks for the pick-me-up. :)
So THANK YOU for making my day a bit brighter.
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
as always another great chapter thanks
Author's Response: Thanks, seeker! :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
at least they are talking
Author's Response: Yes, thank gods for small miracles. :)
Reviewer: pinkaquaclouds (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
This story is painful to read but I can't stop! Axious to see what happens next!
Author's Response: So I'm going to hope that it's a good painful, right? Seriously, this story does have some lighter moments, I swear. There's no gratuitous heartfail.
Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
I tried reviewing for chapter 3, but my internet connection died. Hopefully I will have better luck next time. This one really pulls at all my heartstrings - I've felt the tears welling up on more than one occasion. You have a great way of involving and developing emotions through you writing.
On Remember Me - you're not the first one I've heard to call it a heartfail, but I'm trying my best to avoid the reviews and comments on it, because it's not out here in Ireland until April! (and, yes, I did wail when I found that out!) x
Author's Response: Nano, avoid all spoilers on RM. Seriously. It'll be so much better if you do.
Sorry you weren't able to review on ch3, but thanks for doing ch 4. :) Thanks for your kind words, and seriously be prepared...it's a rough story.
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
angst, angst, angst you say, i'm getting a headache just trying to process what i'm reading let alone how b ella and edward are feeling as well as their friends and emmett, i also see the small glimmer of hope as their bodies are recgonising eachother if their minds are in denial, edward had no idea what bella went through in her recovery and she had no idea how he felt trying to sort the funeral on his own, must read on as they have so much to sort, fabulously anxious chapter
Author's Response: So, should I be creating an Encore First Aid Kit? It would have tissues, Gatorade (to replenish all the liquid lost while crying) and Tylenol. Maybe a shot of finely aged scotch?
There's a lot to go through...but you're right, there is a glimmer of hope. :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hey really great chap - at least we got to see a bit of edwards oppinions
Author's Response: Thanks, R3. :)
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
Thank you! In all the reviews that I have said that someone needed to either be beat within an inch of their life or simply punched, you finally did it. :)
That was really nuts how they both ended up having panic attacks within the same stretch of time. I wonder where things will go from here. Will Edward try and be there for Bella now and maybe even sit back while she attempts to date again or will he step back again. Something tells me that one of them is going to run. It's just a matter of when.
Author's Response: Edward got a double-shot this chapter, didn't he. ;)
I'm not going to unveil any further secrets. You'll have to hold on and see.
Reviewer: Camash (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 4
well i forgot to save the story to my updates and was wondering why i hadn't seen anything new LOL i love B and E angst it truly makes my day exciting. This story is so sad so far but as ever i'm hooked
Author's Response: Hey Camash! I'm glad the angst is making your day exciting. :) That's the first time anyone has said that before.
Reviewer: PyranicPhoenix (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
*Claps hands excitedly* I LOVE IT! I didn't know what to expect at first, but I'm now rolling on the floor laughing and crying.
Author's Response: *Claps hands excitedly and jumps up and down* I LOVE THAT YOU LOVE IT!!! That makes me happy.
I'm glad you're laughing too...it'll hopefully balance out the heartfail. :)
Reviewer: santa muerte (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
How come all your stories leave me a sobbing mess? I love them though!!
Author's Response: Sorry santa muerte. I think that I owe everyone at least a box of tissues by now.
I'm just glad that you guys keep coming back to read them. I worry that one of these days there's going to be too much heartfail and you'll all die or leave me forever. :(
Reviewer: FanFic4SANITY32 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 4
Ooh, rapid updates!! Is it wrong that I still have more sympathy for Bella than Edward? I fully understand his feelings and thought process with what happened, but I still find him to be an ass...and I am loving it. I know that updates don't come quickly like this all the time, so thanx for that little surprise. Keep up the the great work..waiting for the next.
Author's Response: My beta is superwoman, I tell you! That's two updates in 24 hours!!
It's okay that you have more sympathy for Bella than Edward; it's natural. It's okay. He is still being somewhat of an ass, but I think in time he'll hopefully mellow out. :)
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
Serious HF... i'm glad they are starting to get it out of their system tho... they need to... great chapter!
Author's Response: Holy cow, can I just say that my beta is amazing?! I just submitted chapter 4 this morning!
Yes, serious HF, and yes, they are starting to work it out.
Glad you're sticking with it...it won't always be so hard. :) (and if Emmett were here, he'd laugh at that and say: "That's what she said!")
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
Serious HF... i'm glad they are starting to get it out of their system tho... they need to... great chapter!
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
I got your reply this morning but this chapter answered all my questions. I do see Edward's POV with the whole situation. The thing is, that even though he had to man up and take care of all of the arrangements. He could have asked for help. He could have asked his parents, yeah,they were dealing with the death of their friends but they could have helped too.
I agree that they need to talk but I am hoping that Bella doesn't do anything drastic to avoid that talk. I hope that she doesn't consider running again.
Author's Response: AliceDances is faster than a speeding bullet! I was amazed to see the new chapter up already. :)
And yes, it answered a lot of your questions. More questions will be answered in the next one.
Carlisle and Esme helped Edward as best they could...I think he comes off as if he's saying that he did everything completely alone, but he didn't, they were there when they weren't with Bella.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow don't ever have makeup on when reading this story!
I can't wait for the first conversation between these two, it is going to be a doozy!
I am beginning to understand Edward a little bit more and while he should have stayed with Bella, you can kind of see his point also with feeling left to do all of the "dirty" work with regards to burying their child. Anger and grief are very closely connected and sometimes hard to separate when it is an unexpected situation like a car wreck.
Author's Response: No, you're right, Lil, wearing makeup while reading this story could prove to be disastrous. I've been told that it has a VERY high tissue factor.
I'm glad you can understand where Edward is coming from here. I realize what he did was deplorable, and sadly, so many people are blinded by that that they can't see that he's suffering underneath it all. It wasn't just Bella who her baby, it was Edward's child too. I think he is still somewhat in shock, even after all these years, and rational thought is still a bit of a struggle for him.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love Emmett. He's so sweet...and pervy lol
Author's Response: You're going to LOVE the later chapters. Emmett figures in this story a lot (hmm...can you tell I wrote it? Full of angst, full of Emmett...) and his sweet and pervy just gets better. :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
Ah, laughter right off the bat! Jasper cracks me right the heck up!
Drunk or not, I could NEVER make out in front of my brother...eeewww!!!
I could totally see that scene playing out! I am howling with laughter here!
I love the not so subtle sarcasm in Jasper's POV!
Oh Jasper, it will get easier...
Oh my...good thing I'm alone while reading this, because I am choking up a bit...the little rabbit...
Awww...I am so glad Emmett isn't teasing about Bunny Fou Fou :)
haha, the geniuses at Nike...now THERE's the Emmy I know and love :)
I thought pretty much the same thing when he said it had been five years...
Bronze haired bricks...nice one!
I really like reading stories where Rosalie's bitch factor is practically non-existent. Well, I mean she is still bitchy, but the ice queen factor is missing and I like stories like that :)
Haha, Jasper is so stinking funny! I love how he doesn't mince words :)
Haha again, I said mincing before I read where you wrote it :)
Nice...he didn't immediately deny it...very cool, Jasper!
I really like that Jasper is willing to give Edward a chance and I especially like that Edward was willing to take the punch if Jasper threw it.
Nice...Esme beat the crap out of Edward :) I know it was a sad time and all, but that image made me smile. Not so docile now, is she? :)
Oh, Edward...shhh...it will be ok...
I like how you gave him Bella's habits about holding himself together :)
Ok, I know you are hurting and you had to bury Emma alone, but seriously Edward...wtf? She was in a flipping coma! I know my reaction is not rational...
Well, here goes another round on the emo roller coaster for me :) I was irritated with Edward and now my heart is breaking for him...and kudos to Jasper for comforting Edward even though he was angry with him.
Yeah, Edward...because Bella CHOSE to be in a coma instead of burying her daughter...and don't you EVEN talk about how she shouldn't have left the family...pot calling the kettle black much?
Oh...ok, I am glad you realize it isn't her fault. I am a very reactionary reader, especially when the story is this good. If a character says something that makes me start talking back, I put in the review. The better the story, the longer the review tends to be. Hope you don't mind :)
Hahaha, Jasper smokes anyway...that is hilarious because you KNOW Alice will know :)
I know guys tend to make jokes about stuff like emerald green pools, but I bet most of the good ones are secretly mushy teddy bears about that stuff :)
OME, how appropriate is that ringtone for them? Hahahahaha :)
Aww...poor Alice and Jasper...she's right though, they need to stop babying her. It hurts and will be hard, but she will heal...poor babies...
Nice...I just love this Jasper and Alice...
Do I need to say how awesome I thought this chapter was? :)
Author's Response: Can I just say how awesome your review is! I love the play-by-play reactions; that's freakin' wicked. I don't mind the long reviews at all, I'm sitting in my office laughing right now (well, partially at my co-workers who are affixing St. Patrick's Day tattooes to one another) and partially to your review. Please, if you enjoy reviewing like this, then by all means, continue.
So, yeah, Edward and the pot-kettle-black thing; you'd think that he'd be able to see the parallels between their situations, but I think he's still so blinded by grief that he just can't see it. And him being upset with Bella being in a coma while he had to deal with everything; I had hoped he would have let that go years ago, but again (and i'm not making excuses for him) he's still drowning in grief.
Hold onto your love for Alice tightly...
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
another super chapter, i think bella must have the most amazing friends on the planet i mean alice practicaly did not finish her course and rose got involved to help alice as well as bella, jasper is a saint to stand by and share alice and support as he does considering how much time they spend in bellas bed but all it does is make him love alice more for her devotion and compassion to her friend, not so many men would be that accepting, but after all that they have dealt with there comeas a breaking point for everybody and alice is reaching hers ,m i hope they can solve some of these problems and gain some closure for bella and edwardas they are both as messed up as eachother, edwards story is as sad as bella with emmett (looking forward to him and rose hooking up) who is a great big brother taking on the care of edwards much the same as alice has for bella, poor esme had a breakdown, the big question is will time together reunite them or not? cant wait for more,
Author's Response: Thanks, tracy. Everyone has their burden to bear in this story, and I think that things will get better over time. Of course they'll get worse before they get better, but that's part of the ride, right?
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
thank you another great chapter but i never doubt you anyway yes i used the tissues but its ok i was warned
Author's Response: Thanks, seeker, and I'm glad you never doubt me, although I think you might want to have your head examined for that. ;) Really, though, I appreciate you saying that. :)
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
You call it the twitter... LOL
Great chapter... major tissue/angst factor but good....
You like your B&E's to be messed up, don't you? LOL
I'm glad Alice & Jasper have decided to stop coddling Bella and finally allowing her some much needed closure. I hope we get to see more of the history of Bella & Edward too.
Author's Response: I love calling it "the twitter" although I'm not sure why. ;)
I don't know what to say, really, about liking my B&Es to be all messed up. Truth? You're probably right. I think that writing about someone else's pain takes away from RL. I suppose that's why people read it too.
There's lots o' history to come, my friend, in fits and spurts, chunks and slices.
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wooooow... Edward & Bella had a daughter?! Young family if she's only 22/23 now. And her entire family is gone? Oh poor Bella...
Author's Response: Bella got pregnant with Emma when she was fifteen, so yeah, they were young. The accident happened the year Bella turned 18.
Reviewer: TwilightMom505 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 3
Author's Response: I will assume your silence is a form of protest for the heartfail? ;)
Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
Just wanted to say that this chapter has got my stomach in knots, and almost in tears. I cannot wait for Edward and Bella to get together and actually talk. I know that I will have to have the tissues handy. You are a great writer and I have loved all the stories you have written so far. So keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much, Blkjklady.
From what I'm told, tissues are a good thing to have on hand for the next, oh, 18 or 19 chapters.
I promise there's comic relief in there, but it's pretty rough going.
Reviewer: Tweaker (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh god, I was doing fine until Edward talked about picking out a stuffed animal to bury with his daughter. Then I cried like a baby.
Author's Response: Sorry, Tweaker. You may want to keep tissues nearby for the next whack of chapters...it just sort of creeps up on you.
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