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Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 15
Loved the chapter! I think I'm gonna cry alot in the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks, an yeah, you are probably going to cry a lot in the next one.
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 14
I loved it! I caught myself tearing up in a couple of parts also.
Loved the date and teared up at the phone call.
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 13
I could never hate Alice just glad she is coming around. Loved the chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you aren't one of the pitchfork-wielding people who is out for Alice's blood. :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 18
Hey great chap i loved the idea about irina going through the same thing as bella and the emmett part made me giggle and i loved the ending lol bellas not going to be happy
Author's Response: Thanks, R3. I'm glad you liked it.
Bella needed someone from "outside" to help her, and Irina volunteered for the job. She's going to be a huge asset to Bella and Edward's healing process.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 18
I love Emmett's students. Noah's poem was so funny and I can imagine a little boy singing that while he's doing his business lol. My guess at what Edward's present is going to be...a music composition about the tragedy and rekindling of his and Bella's relationship along with some sort of slideshow to accompany it. Wild guess though! Though he should just get her a pony lol
Author's Response: Oh damn it! Why didn't I think of getting her a pony?! *giggle*
You're kind of warm.
I have so much fun writing Em's students. I really should write them in more often. :) They're cute and sweet and you'll see them again in about ten chapters.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 18
I sure hope they do the support group. This would be very good for both of them.
Author's Response: It WOULD be very good for them, and I was glad when Irina suggested it to them.
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 18
hmm maybe a song its hard to say thanks
Author's Response: That's a very good guess...you'll have to wait a bit to find out. :)
Reviewer: DeeDee81 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
I have no clue what he'll get her as a present, possibly something to do with Emmas memory or maybe getting Esme and Carlisle to visit. I'm shit when it comes to guessing so I'm probably way off Lol.
Aw I have a feeling that Irina will be Bellas rock in helping her cope with everything. She seems really nice ;)
Author's Response: Irina is going to be a real blessing for Bella.
I'm not so good at guessing things either, DeeDee81, so no worries...but you're warm.
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 18
Like Dr. Garrett already...she comes off as putting newbie masters students at ease, which is a big help :)
Nice...Irina can identify with Bella...I suspect she will be both mentor AND therapist...
Well, maybe Irina never had a reason to NOT be such a hard nose before...I really like her :)
"Shirking his house wench duties"...what a scream :)
Haha, Emmett is spacing out at school...that's hilarious!
I like how Emmett reads the story and the name of the author like a good reading teacher is supposed to :)
I honestly have no idea about Bella's present...I am sure there have been hints and I am sure I will feel like an idiot when it is revealed for not thinking of it, but we'll see!
Love the chapter and as always, give me more :)
Author's Response: Thanks, bb. I'm glad you liked the chapter.
I really like writing Em at school...the kids are fun and cute.
Bella's birthday is coming up!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 17
Haha, Em is so awkward with the whole love thing :)
Fred is killing me! That whole furry ass thing is hilarious!!
Well, of course Bella would be freaking out! Sometimes, if my schedule isn't followed to a "T" I freak that something will go wrong...
Great one, of course :)
Author's Response: Ah, Fred is modelled after my own furry guy, Sir Frederick K. Knuckles Stinkbottom, and he LOVES to put his ass in people's faces.
Glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 16
Well, it seems as though Mr. Varner has some deeep seated issues...he could get in serious troubl;e for speaking to a student like that...
I have lost my voice and it hurts to laugh too much, but I'll deal..."baloney pony" is too stinking funny to not laugh at :)
Rosalie is cracking me up! My sore throat is taking a beating from the laughing and I'm not complaining a bit :)
I bet Bella DID look like crap...hahahaha :)
My heart is breaking for Emmett...and I don't think Rose's confession could have been timed better...
The way you are writing this feels right, so I don't think that it was too much. I assume you are going where the story leads you and ending where it tells you, etc. If that's the case, then this is perfect!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you didn't drown in chapter 16. Some people find it a really hard chapter to read.
Ah, Emmett...poor guy. You're right, Rose's timing couldn't have been more perfect.
Sorry to hear that you're sick! That blows. :(
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 10
Holy crap I don't need to be reading this at work while on break cause it is hard not to tear up!
Author's Response: Then you probably should consider this a warning: don't read chapter 16 at work. ;)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 17
well it was definitely a bit lighter, Bella's clothing Houdini was a crack up; but Edward got her even before that. And he was still wearing something!
It's a good thing that Bella's used to leaving herself notes to help remember and keep track of things... seems to me that'd be a valuable life-skill to hold onto around Edward ;)
Author's Response: LOL! You're a cheeky monkey, Daylen, aren't you? ;)
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 9
I don't like Adam, but I think that is because I'm team Edward and will always be. Liked the chapter it's starting to get complicated!
Author's Response: You'd be hard-pressed to find anyone who likes Adam, and you're right, things are getting complicated. Hang in there... :)
Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 17
WOWOWOWOWOOWOW!!!!!!!!!11
IM OFFICIALY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!1
WOW I LOVE IT XD
Author's Response: Thanks, spidermonkey_09. I'm glad you love it. :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 17
Hey this chap was really great i am glad it was a bit lighter and i loved the rose and em bit
Author's Response: As much as it seems like it, this story isn't ALL sad. ;) Just mostly. ;) I'm kidding.
Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 17
Thats right dont expect a review.
JUST because it took you five seconds to type the 'A' word warning, I checked the time (notreally) DOES NOT mean I will be compelled to review. You creative types always thanking and didanyonesruvive?s *scoffs*
BUT omfg Emmett is so freaking adorable with his 'Because I love her.' That was really sweet.
And I feel Bella made huge headway into getting better. She recognizes what has happened and how her coping skills were not coping at all. I believe that medication is prolonging the issues, with emotional issues though not physical ones, I think that we have to be strong enough and teach ourselves how to cope without pills. But that belief comes from personal experience.
And I think that she will learn to do that. I hope she does.
Edward I feel has an instinct to protect her. He is always asking her to talk, to open up, to let him in. Which is paramount to their relationship working now.
Edward... he better get used to seeing her naked... haha ;P
Yeah, so you see?
Not a review. :P
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't figure you'd review, and really, I put that warning there to make you not want to review even more. I'm a horrible, cruel, mean person, you know, and this isn't really a response either, it's more a musing ramble.
Emmett IS adorable and I want one of my own. For reals.
You hit the nail on the head about the pills. I've been there too...I didn't like it and never really dealt with the reason behind needing them until I stopped. There's a time and a place for being numb, and her being numb for five years is not good.
So yeah, you see? Not a real response, just a ramble.
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 17
Enjoyed it. It was nicer to have a bit of lightness after that last chapter. It's funny how E reacted to seeing B naked...guess 5 years is a long time :)
Author's Response: Five years IS a long time, and I think that Edward was more shocked than anything (and probably aroused). :)
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 17
hey there another fab chapter, so their now learning to deal drug free which is a good thing, i mean how long can you be on that stuff anyway before it begins to harm rather than help? and it was edward bella asked help from to stay the night it's got to be hard for alice to step back after all this time even though she wants to, it gives alice and jasper so much time to just be a couple in love, love the scenes between rose and emmett, him getting all tongue tied and being so loving, bellas musing was sweet her recovery could have so easily not been so good i glad she can do all she can, thanks everso tracy
Author's Response: Thanks, tracy.
After being numb for so long it can be hard and overwhelming to deal with the things you'd been hiding from. It's a HUGE step to want to face things without them.
Emmett deserves Rose and someone to love him unconditionally. Again, it's a big thing for him to confess his love.
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 7
Finally they are gonna try!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: There's SO much more, my friend. :)
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
What can I say this story is so different than most of them I have read and I really like it. Looking back helps fill in the details to figure out what happened. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: It makes me happy to know that you find this story to be different than most of the others you have read. It's hard, in a sea of a gazillion fanfics, to come up with something that hasn't been done a million times.
So, thanks. :)
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 17
Dude! The clothing houdini was awesome! LOL I bet Edward was about to cum in his pants. So awesome about Em & Rose... made me "awww". Loved the chapter. I'm glad B&E are able to be around each other more and spend time together even if their thoughts tend to head south of the border (but its such a nice place there, i think).
Author's Response: Yes, I think it's very nice south of the border. In fact, I daresay it might be so nice that it might cause extreme joy and ecstasy. :) This IS fiction, and it IS Edward Cullen's BIG YES we're talking about. ;)
Glad you're liking the Em and Rose moments. I like writing them.
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 17
great chapter, it really opened up alot into emmett and also to alice. the fact that edward went all bella, when he saw her naked is great. cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, piperann! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: DeeDee81 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 17
I love blushing stuttering Edward, it makes me giggle like a schoolgirl and I have no idea why!! Lol
I love how your moving them forward, slow burn is so much more realistic ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the slow burn. It didn't seem logical that they would just jump each other after being apart for so long and for the reasons they did.
Some people have told me they wanted to stop reading the story because of the slow burn. No amount of intimidation will make me speed this up, I'm afraid.
But...Edward's "Big Yes" will get some action at some point in the future. I'm just not saying when. ;)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 17
The whole writing on the mirror made my girly parts sigh...if that's even possible. And how adorable are Rose and Emmett. Seriously?
Author's Response: Oh, I'm a firm believer in girlie bits smiling, giggling, and shrieking in horror. It just happens at a sound frequency that we can't hear. Thank God...could you imagine?
Rose and Emmett are awesome. I adore them. Am I allowed to say that?
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