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Reviewer: TraciSnow (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Overthrown
I've read TONS of stories about Bella and Edward's second time, but I really like this one because it is so different.
Reviewer: eiroltan (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Overthrown
sweet and deliciously in love!!! emotions and dialogues are done very nicely... keep it up!!!
Reviewer: georgiagirl (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Overthrown
i liked the first one better, mainly cause there was more detail. but this one was good!
Reviewer: MrsEdwardCullen04 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Overthrown
This was nice, with a bit of mischevious humor, i liked it!
Reviewer: AgMag (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Overthrown
That made me smile. Wonderful!
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Overthrown
Great story!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Overthrown
please please please write a 30 or so chapter story !
Reviewer: sleepyhead91 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Overthrown
heyy loved the story! great job! your good at writing it in way thts
romantic and really sexy at the same time. hope yu write more!
Reviewer: attractive_nuisance01 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Overthrown
Sexy and sweet all at the same time!
Reviewer: pipergirl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:21 PM · On: Overthrown
Mmm... lovely little fic. If only book!Bella had been so sure of herself :)
Author's Response: Fanfiction is fun because you get to give Bella a little more credit. ;)
Thanks for revewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 05:49 PM · On: Overthrown
This was so very romantic yet so very erotic all at the same time. You truly have a gift. Great moment!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a sweet comment!
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 11:26 AM · On: Overthrown
You have a gift with words!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this comment!
Reviewer: Brindalyn (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 09:08 AM · On: Overthrown
This was Wonderfully Hot!!!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks!
Reviewer: alison (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 06:02 AM · On: Overthrown
loving it! i like the way you wrote it with bella being in control, in the book, it's always edward so it's nice to see her viewpoint in this kind of story! great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun giving the control to Bella in this story.
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 11:33 AM · On: Overthrown
I like the third person narrative. Oh yeah, and that was delicious. ;o)
Author's Response: Thanks very much for taking the time to review! I tend to lean to third-person narrative most of the time.
Author's Response: Thanks very much for taking the time to review! I tend to lean to third-person narrative most of the time.
Reviewer: FallenFlowers (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 04:14 AM · On: Overthrown
Wooo go Bella! Hahaha that was awesome, I loved it when he said Evil, evil, evil - too smexy for words! Thanks for writing this! It was great (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Bella knows exactly how to drive Edward nuts. ;)
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 03:48 AM · On: Overthrown
haha, i like the "evil, evil, evil" part because i imagined edward saying that.. :))
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 03:29 AM · On: Overthrown
What does PWP mean?
Author's Response: PWP = Porn Without Plot. :)
Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 05:37 PM · On: Overthrown
YAY for PWP!
Author's Response: Amen to that, haha!
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 04:24 PM · On: Overthrown
Nice, short and sweet. I always thought SM's version of thier second time was a bit passive and sugar-coated. I wanted to see Bella take control more, as she does here. Thanks for this!
Author's Response: It's always fun to explore different things in fanfiction. Why not give Bella a bit more control and have Edward play along? Thank you so much for the review.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 11:39 AM · On: Overthrown
cute seductress bella strikes again! We all know he likes it!
Author's Response: Edward LOVES it. He totally finds it hot when Bella takes charge. ;)
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Overthrown
wowo...
Author's Response: Hee, thanks!
Reviewer: MissNebraskaLIVE (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 10:07 AM · On: Overthrown
That was so great. Although it wasn't just a PWP, it's a perfect piece that would have fitted wonderfully into Breaking Dawn-- Adult Edition. You are brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for this review!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:53 AM · On: Overthrown
Mmm, Edward just can't stand being the submissive can he? He's just so dominant and yummy. It's such a turnon.
Author's Response: It's fun to play with different aspects of Edward's personality. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 08:58 AM · On: Overthrown
Bella had to take charge!! or else they would never have gone past 1st base!! this was amazing! I loved it!!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you very much!
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