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Reviewer: AngieDoll (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
loved it
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
I dont know if I have ever read an edward and bella encounter so intense as that. I mean there are some out there that are intense but you kept it going and going longer than usual. I know this is just a one shot but I really think there is a back story or before story that would be really interresting to read. Great job!!!
Hugs, Stephanie
Reviewer: jasam4ever19 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Really really loved this. It was very HOT! Really hope you decide to continue it and make it more than a one-shot because it is really amazing and deserves to be continued. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love love loved it!!! I know its just a one shot, but it would have been a perfect ending to a good 'before' story. You know what happened before the party in their lives. Always curious with oneshots. Great job.
Hugs, stephanie
Reviewer: cullenfan524 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was great!!
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
If one night with Edward isn't enough for Bella, then you need to write more of them! ;c) Great one shot. It felt a little weird to me having Edward call her Isabella the whole time, though...I guess I'm just used to her being Bella.
Author's Response: I'm used to just Bella too. I think that's where the Isabella came from, actually. I keep trying to think of something good I can call Edward, but I really don't like the shortened versions that name gets. Ed, Eddie, Ted, Teddy...they just don't do anything for me. I actually don't mind Edward and would rather use that. I do kind of like nicknames though, so will continue to try and think of something good for Edward for my next story....hmmm, might have to make something up that has no connection with his name.
Thanks for taking time to read the story and for commenting too! I really do appreciate it!
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
Damn that was hot!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to comment. When I first started reading fanfiction here, I had no idea what a lemon was. I wasn't sure I could write one myself, and now that I have...still not sure I could write another one, lol. But, as I am currently working on a couple things, I guess I will find out.
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
awesome....i like the question at the end...it makes you wonder what happened between them
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks for taking time to comment.
Reviewer: Biankis (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
ONE SHOT ONLY? WHAT A PITY!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive comment. One shot only, yes. However, I am actually working on a couple of longer projects. One is a real person fic that I can't decide what to do with, lol...and the other is another Edward/Bella story.
Reviewer: pr_honeybun81 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
you should keep writing more for this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I did consider it. However, I've decided to leave it as a one shot.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was bloody brilliant,I will put you i my favorites.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed my little one shot.
Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
I would like more....very good!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: Nrbl (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
this is excellent i would love for you to continue and see what happens after...
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the story!
Reviewer: 1baldchick (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Absolutely delicious!!!! I want an Edward like that!!! I hope you continue the story. Would love to hear about what happens in the morning.
Author's Response: Hahaha...I want an Edward like that too! Glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
really really good!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was really good! You should consider expanding it!
Author's Response: Sorry, no plans to expand. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: SamasaurusRex (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was way hotter than I should have read at almost 12 at night. I hope you feel the need to turn this into a multi-chapter fic.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I was debating on whether to expand the story, but have since decided to leave it as it is.
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