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Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 11:46 AM · On: Just a Crush
Yay, a chapter to help me recover from heart fail. I love your portayal of Edward.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 10:53 AM · On: Just a Crush
Great chapter...update soon!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 09:36 AM · On: Just a Crush
I love it! It is so cute!!
Reviewer: PreferBrunettes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 09:33 AM · On: Just a Crush
That line from Top Gun is my favorite. It was perfect. I can just envision Bella and Edward on bike somewhere... I like how you're building the story. We know what happens (maybe) but we get to see how they started. And of course Edward is wonderful. How can he not be? I couldn't help but smile with your last line.
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 09:21 AM · On: The Last Goodbye
I am crying this chapter was so emotional, but I need to go and read the next chapter now.
Author's Response: it does get happy in the next one but here's a warning....I've been told the 3rd one is worse!!! get the kleenex out!
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 09:17 AM · On: Just a Crush
OMG, I love it! Love, love, love, love, love it!
[quote]before I hurt myself or did anything stupid like, oh, I don’t know…go run and find him, throw myself at him and yell, “Take me to bed or lose me forever!”[/quote]
One of the best movie lines, ever. And my god, but I am still drooling at the thought of pilot Edward.
[quote]I had just about lost it one time already when we were out on the helipad. It was windy and my hair was in its usual disarray. Bella had almost reached up to fix it. It was like watching something in slow motion; her hand coming up to touch me…I could already anticipate how good that would feel…I snapped out of it just in time and shot my hand up and ran it thorough my hair myself.
I thought I saw a look of disappointment flash across her face for a second and then her face cleared.
Man, if she had actually done that…well, let’s just say I needed to work on my self control.[/quote]
That is such a beautiful scene. Love it. She wanted to run her hand through his hair, he wanted her to. If they both only knew that the other was just as smitten already.
[quote]I grimaced as I thought, [i]I wish I knew where that little voice came from….I would gladly pull its power cord and kill it![/i][/quote]
This just cracks me up. I've often wished the same about my own internal voice.
[quote]I wondered how old she was, was she dating anyone, where she grew up, was she dating anyone, where she lived, if she was dating anyone…alright enough of that. [/quote]
The repetitive "was she dating anyone" cracks me up. The boy has a one track mind.
They are going to be so stinking cute together, it's not even funny. My heart still hurts at the thought of him dead/not-dead/unknown. GAH. 'Tis beautiful!
Reviewer: justagirl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 05:33 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
I am really liking this story... this chapter had me *this* close to crying. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it and leaving a review.... but i was hoping to actually get you to cry....just kidding!! "More" should be coming this week hopefully and it's happy times!!
Reviewer: LivieLove (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 07:00 AM · On: Love Lost
Heartbreaker...but awesome-ness at the same time! Loved it!
Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 04:48 AM · On: The Last Goodbye
Oh bb... I'm sobbing right now, I'm not joking. I don't know what to say. I was beautifully written, I can feel her pain and anguish.
Author's Response: oh lola- i warned you about tissues bb!! This week you will have a reprieve from the crying...trust me!!
Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 06:54 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
Wow, I'm really trying to hold back my tears here. God I feel horrible for Bella and the rest of the family. My heart is breaking for them. Where is Edward and what the heck happened to him? Please update soon.
Author's Response: to tell you the truth I'm not really sure where he is....I'm so glad you found this though! Thanks!
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 05:04 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
My God, C4E, I don't even have the words. My heart is pounding and aching. My eyes are tight with tears. The emotional turmoil you expressed here is heart-wrenching and visceral. I can feel Bella's pain. I can feel her loss as if it were my own. You have a beautiful way with words, all the little details you pull out. Amazing. No hate. I'm holding out for the happy, or at least, happier. I think I need a drink.
Author's Response: PL- I responded to your beautiful review on the thread! Thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: psych926 (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:40 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
So that was oober depressing . . . I hope this story ends well
Author's Response: yeah it was wasn't it..lol ending well...hmmmm, i haven't gotten that far...
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:27 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
Wow! So sad...I needed Kleenex! Please update soon!
Author's Response: it won't be forever....thanks for reading!
Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:25 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
No body??? Hmm.... I really hope he's not dead! Great story so far... I'm really excited to see where this goes!!
Author's Response: i hope he isn't either....lol....who would kill off Edward? thanks for reading!
Reviewer: MidnightSunsLove (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:24 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
OMG OMG OMG... There is no body???? GAH! Maybe he's alive but has amnesia... Seriously, you had me almost crying! This is such a sad chapter and so well written. Give yourself a pat on the back :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much,it means alot to me to hear that! I really wanted you to cry though....lol....
Reviewer: PreferBrunettes (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:13 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
Wow, that was powerful. I was wondering when she would break. I can't even imagine what it would actually feel like to lose your soulmate, but you wrote it in an incredible and heartwrenching way. I was right there with her, breaking stuff and screaming. I noticed that there is no body...hmmm. I wonder where you're going with this. Great job!
Author's Response: I couldn't imagine it either but i tried too....i don't use certain curse words myself but i imagine at a time like that, it doesn't really matter, you aren't yourself.... hmmmm...you're right, no body....did they loose it?
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:11 PM · On: The Last Goodbye
I officially cried.Good though keep goin'
Author's Response: I warned you about the tissues! LOL.....thanks!
Reviewer: EdwardsGirl1117 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 12:49 PM · On: First Glance
wow it is good but sad!! keep going!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 10:30 AM · On: First Glance
Aww...so sweet!
Reviewer: MidnightSunsLove (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 11:54 AM · On: First Glance
Normally I can't read stories knowing that Edward/Bella are going to die... It just breaks my heart! BUT... I'm going to trust you with my heart because I just think pilot Edward is sexy LMAO... Please, be gentle!
Author's Response: i can't read those either....didn't even make it past the first paragraph of Goo82's story LOL....but you never know what you are able to write....Edward is one sexy pilot is he not!!! Have faith and I promise to be gentle!
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 08:46 AM · On: First Glance
lovley
Author's Response: why thank you!
Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 06:49 AM · On: First Glance
I loved this chapter! I loved the interaction between Bella and Edward. Great job, I really am so excited about your story!
Author's Response: Lola came back!!...Thanks so much, I get really excited about it too sometimes, glad others are as well!!
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 06:26 AM · On: First Glance
This is great keep goin'
Author's Response: thanks for reading it!!
Reviewer: nina (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 04:24 AM · On: First Glance
I love you story so far. This is a good Bella with funny inner monolouge. But I can't see how you can kill off Edward?
Author's Response: thanks nina....it's kinda of how i think in my head, sarcastic.....hmmm as for the killing off of E....hmmmmm
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 03:32 AM · On: First Glance
Pilot!Edward is made of win...BUT YOU CAN'T KILL HIM!!! *begs*
Author's Response: Yes he is made of win...sigh....have faith jillapet!!
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