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Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 15

Oh crap, anything else I was going to say just went right out of my head...I think shit is about to hit the fan, and things were going so well...But then again, my guesses are always wrong so maybe she won't kick his ass, tell him to get the Hell out of her life, and slam the door in his face...Too much? I'm such a drama queen...I'll just go read the next chapter and find out how Bella will react when she finds out that Edward has been reading her tweets, maybe it won't be that bad?

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 14

I totally love your chapter notes! *I have so many thoughts on this chapter, (not that I don't feel a lot of these things in other chapters too, but this one...) Grrrr, sometimes I wanted to reach into my computer screen and strangle those two, (yes I know they aren't really in there, but sometimes it seems that they just come to life) and I want to slap them silly too! Their analyzing is so maddening! *Boobkie? That is classic, what a keeper, I love it! :D *I found myself chanting 'God he's clueless' quite a bit as I was reading...I have too many thoughts in my head, this review will be a novel, so I'll just throw out a few more thoughts: to Edward: open mouth, insert foot...to both, but mostly Edward: overthinking much?...I almost gouged my eyes out, these two are driving me crazy! But I love your story so much!!!!!!  :)

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 13

I look forward to 'Dun Dun Dun!'  seriously, it makes me smile every time! :D  Well the banter kills me, it never gets old; I laugh my ass off...Ya know, these two do a lot of assuming about what the other is thinking, feeling, and what they mean about some of the things they each say...I wonder if they'll ever get around to actually saying what they mean or what they feel...Some of it comes out, but it seems to me that it's mostly in the heat of the moment; I really hope that river in Egypt dries up pretty soon...So Bella, was that really just a vivid dream of Edward saying 'I love you?' Hmmm, I can't wait to find out....

Reviewer: Robs_Muse (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 29

Wonderfully written and I love the word play and banter. I finished this lil ditty at work and laughed out loud. Literally. However, I'm not bout to explain what I was reading. Hahahahaha. Thank you for the laughs and the warm fuzzy feeling. *le sigh*

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 29

Loved your story.

Reviewer: obsessivebehaviors (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 29

AngryBadgerGril,


 


I’ve followed this fanfic from the very beginning.  You may (or may not) remember a few of my reviews along the way. 


 


I could not be prouder of the way you’ve tied these two together with a perfect wedding (rock, paper, scissors) vows.  Funny stuff. 


 


I was surprised that you decided to smut the marriage consummation.  But pluueez, giving head, fingering and a tilt over the sofa?  I guess these acts sume up this couple’s approach to love making?  You have to know their history.


 


It’s been an exiting journey and your story has been the topic of more than one water cooler moment in the office. 


 


I look forward to the Epi and the self-fulfillment of more than a few of Edward’s “flash forwards”.  What's with the invetro comments?   Will he deliver his own children?   

Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 29

*tears* Awwww this was one of the best stories I've read in a while :) I loved every minute of it !! :D

Reviewer: potterchick86 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 29

thank you for this wonderful story! TNGUS will stay with me always

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 12

Ok, it's official, these two are killing me! I love it though!

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh man, *Heavy sigh* Not sure what to say, can't find the words...Great chapter as always

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ok, I love your story to death, but I'm not leaving anymore reviews, I'm always wrong! Just kidding about the reviews, but I am going to stop guessing as to what I think is going to happen because I am always wrong! :O 

 Edward is so sweet wanting Bella's first time to be special (going out to dinner first and what not) It seems that he cares more than he's really willing to admit to himself...I'd love to know what's inside Bella's head about her feelings for Edward...I wonder which one is more in denial...Again, I'm probably way off base :P

Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 29

awwww....

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh shit, here we go...I get the feeling I need to say "Fasten your seatbelts. It's going to be a bumpy night"...I love that quote, but I think it might be more than just a bumpy night for Edward and Bella...I wonder what his reaction to her tweet will be? Eh, maybe I'm just being a worry wort...

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 8

Bella's a virgin? I did not see that one coming any more than Edward did...I think Professor Big Unit gave Bella a pretty damn fine Happy Birthday...She has no idea how much better, intense, and more fun the 'lessons' are going to get from here on out, and frankly I'm looking forward to them too! :P

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 7

*Whimper* *Moan* *Sigh* This is and will continue to be all kinds of seductive, sexy, hot, (and on to the next chapter, hurry up please) but, (I hate it when people say 'but' when things are going so great,) and I don't want to be a buzzkill but, I have an inkling someone is going to get their feelings hurt even though there has been nothing but honesty between them both...I wonder how long each of them will be honest with themselves about their own feelings as this 'favor' continues to play out...I wonder if Edward will read Bellas tweets for a while longer before he tells her he's been reading them all along, that should go over like a lead balloon...I'm rambling now so I'll shut it and continue to enjoy the seduction...

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 29

This has been a fantastic story - funny and romantic.  I'm so glad it's a happy ever after.  Edward found his family with love and guidance from Bella, they each found their soul mate in the other and made it through their difficulties, wonderful.  The wedding was lovely and funny, just what you'd expect from them and *phew* that honeymoon, well you just wouldn't want to come home would you?  I know I wouldn't.

Thank you for sharing and I can't wait for the epilogue.  xx

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 6

First I have to tell you how much I love your sense of humor, you are so damn funny...Your characters wouldn't be half as good if you didn't possess that wit of yours...

Not only do I love the sexual innuendo laced banter between Edward and Bella, but the stuff that flows between Bella, Alice, and Rose is priceless too...I was going to mention in last chapter's review that I hoped Alice and Rose would help Bella with her 'date' attire, so I wasn't surprised to see them out shopping together in this chapter...Poor overworked, exhausted Edward, Bella is so nice to invite him in for dinner and didn't that work out quite nicely...For cripes sake, the favor Bella wants from Edward, well isn't that just every man's fantasy...This will be good and bad I have a feeling, good as in, (come on, this is Edward we're talking about) and bad because one or both will undoubtedly regret it on some level, (and be all conflicted and shit.) Oh, I have faith that it will all work out in the end, I'm so excited to go along on this journey and see just where you are taking them...This is so much fun! :)

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 29

Great ending!!! luv the humor, banters, etc... gonna miss this story very much! ^_^

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 5

Laughing my ass off! I so saw this coming, as much as Bella was tweeting about TNGUS, and then when Jazz started following the Dr., I thought oh crap, this is gonna be good! :D What a small world...Hmmm, wonder what the good doctor is going to do with this bit of information? I'm giggling like a school girl, I love your story so much...Can't wait for the first 'Date', I just know Bella will blow Edward's mind, he'll undoubtedly be impressed with the way she'll handle herself, she will absolutely not be a doorknob like his previous 'Dates'

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

I want Alice and Rose to be my best friends :) ...Awww, Edward was so sweet, he made Bella feel better and let her build a fort...That kiss was so chaste, there better be tongue next time, dammit...Oh wait, that's right, they're just going to be friends, uh huh, when pigs fly...Can not wait to read EPOV...

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

*Heavy sigh* Still laughing though...God, I love Alice and Rose...

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ya, um, he's just a bit full of himself I'd say...I wonder how long it will take him to wear down Bella (if that's his goal) I'd love to hear Edward's pov...It's too early in your story to know his motives, ok maybe I'm just being naive...He can't be that arrogant, or can he? Bella deserves better, and he better deliver...I think she's going to need more wine...I really love your story, even two chapters in...

Reviewer: 2journey (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 29

Great ending and nice to see such a compassionate and romantic Edward.  Hope you write again.

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Still laughing from their initial meeting, and it's only chapter one! Looking forward to reading your story, it's been highly rec'd. I can see why already...I need a break from all the damn angst I've been reading, I think this is just what the doctor ordered, oh God, seriously no pun intended...

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 29

Sweet, funny, sexy, touching story.  Loved it.  Thanks so much for sharing.

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