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Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 14

after what u write and how u do it- well i need to f***k! too bad my 2nd half is out of town! ;(

Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 14

Edward is as totally unaware and/or confused by falling in love with Bella as I thought he would be. It just doesn't seem like it would be in his character otherwise.

The big question now - what will motivate Edward to admit it to himself and Bella ....

On to the Hospital festival!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hey this was yet another awsome cfhap =]

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

LOL! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 14

He's so in denial! I can't believe she's going along with it, too, when she's clearly in love with him.  I guess women can be friends with a guy despite having feelings for them, which can be good and bad.

I know you have more chapters up on FFn, but I'm trying to read this as you update here.  I like the element of surprise. :-)  Great job with this story!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 14

Whew, that was one hot quick fuck.  I think they're more than a little confused about their feelings for one another, and about their arrangement.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter!  Just what I needed on a rainy day!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 14

LOL...Boobkies...LMAO yes only Bella would come up with that for Edward. They are just to cute together...I LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: Habebti Heather (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love it when he growls and declares ownership of her! There is something so irresistable about, in a primal way, a man declaring ownership of his mate. SEXY! Loved this chapter and her soft forgiving ways. They really do complement each other. I like that he is being honest with himself about his feeling reguarding sharing her with other men - too bad this is only fiction. Yummy!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 14

Really loved this one.  Gosh..I feel so bad for both of them. I can't wait for them to admit to eachother that they love eachother!!

Can't wait for the next chapter:)

Reviewer: dani_pattz (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 14

i already read this fic in ff, but.. see it posted here makes me feel eager to reread the chapters.. i love this fic.. is so beautiful, full of love and care..

Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 14

Boobkies! ha :-)

their banter is amazing - i truly love this fic!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 13

OHHHH! Update soon please?! Ahh, I can't wait.

Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 13

I love your story! They are so perfect for each other..even without realising it.

Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

wow , u've done it again!

i hope (for ur sake)that u r writing from the experience!


Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 13

Holy fuckin Hale that was intense!! No i don't Bella will stop until he his her's but I if she only knew that he is already hers, lol I wonder if Edward realizes it or not. I hope he doesn't fight it.

Reviewer: bellebookworm9 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

Ok, I'm coming out of the woodwork to say that I LOVE THIS STORY! It makes my day every morning to see a new chapter up and waiting for me. I love the snark in it, Bella reminds me a lot of myself. On a side note,  today I went over to to see your profile over there. Imagine my surprise when I realized you are the author of Frenemies. That was one of my favorite stories of all time, and it was a sad day when it disappeared from my favorites on here. I'm even sadder now to see that it's no longer available =( Anyway, keep the chapters coming =)

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 6

"Brown eyes," he says softly, leaning into my ear, "dancing is vertical sex. You let me lead and I assure you, you'll forget you even have limbs," he coos. - mmmm... excellent line!

Another perfect chapter... next!

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 13

OMG- I want more! Lol thanks.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hey great chap =] I really loved the ending i hope he tells her when sheis actually fully concious soon

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 12

hry i loved this chap

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

As you said, oh double shiz! There is a nice guy hidden somewhere underneath the womanizing pig, but he still needs to get his shit sorted out. And smart too, I was about to suggest he brings Bella as hid date instead of doorknob Jessica, but he figured that out all by himself, lol!

This story reminds me a bit of Edward Wallbanger by mmm...feathers, check it out if you haven't read it. Somewhat similar plot and as hilarious banter.

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

I think Edward actually likes Bella, he just probably very much dislikes the fact that he likes her, not at all his normal SOP.

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

He's not gonna eat you. Unless, you want him to. You're seriously hilarious, you know that right!


Reviewer: niknox (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 13

I LOVE THIS! Just thought I should say that. They're insanely adorable and I can't wait for more!

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