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Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 19

i love this!!! i want more and i cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 19

*full body shiver* Aaaaccckkkk...James is uber creepy and such a slimeball. I hope he keeps his mits to himself. Uuuggg who are we kidding this is James we are talking about.

LoL...Edward was just to cute being jealous.

Wow...what a way to end a chapter. Bella saying the "L" word. I am thrilled Bella has picked the last to the locks to Edward's sweet. Edward better appreciate the trust she is putting in him..l.

Reviewer: Habebti Heather (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 19

I am seriously enjoying Edwards caveman jelousy and his rusty scalpal thoughts towards James. thanks for the post. enjoyed it alot. looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 19


I love this story

I love this chapter

I love everything you write

And off course I love Edward................

Thank you for updating so regularly, it's a real pleasure........

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hey great hap =] wow she finally told him

Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 19

Sha said it!! YAY. So glad that they are talking about their feelings.

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 19

Surpassed awesome with this one.  Can't wait for next one!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 18

Hey great chap loved it =]

Reviewer: 1baldchick (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

You are a feisty one!!!!  I love this Bella.  She has "gumpshun" as the oldtimers say!

Reviewer: MJ Mason-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 19

oh yeah finally now he better say it pleeeease hurry hurry:):):):)

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 19

The conversation with Renee, meeting greasy James, Edward pleasing Bella, their confessions of love...all too wonderful. 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 19

That was soooooo satsfying! I have a ridiculous smile on my face just knowing that they're both in the same place now, and that he wants her to say that she loves him. *sigh* Wonderful stuff! Thank you so much! (And I LOVE that you update all the time!)

Reviewer: OCDE (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 19

it's about got damn time.

Reviewer: CC Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 19

I only recently (about two days ago) discovered your story and I LOVE it.  You have made me laugh out loud as well as shed tears. It is a wonderful story of friendship, growth and love. I don't know how much more is left but I just wanted to let you know I am truly enjoying this.

Reviewer: bellebookworm9 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 19

Yay! He finally figured it out! I was highly amused when denied being jealous of guys looking at Bella...Can't wait to see what Bella is thinking about this whole thing!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 19

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!  Ok I'm so excited for the next chapter:)  I think they might just get their happy ending..but I'm sure there is going to be mroe drama to go with it.  I love this story so much!!!

Reviewer: sarahstokley (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 19

oh, WOW!!!  so sweet!!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 19

i really loved this chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Intricacy (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 19


I started to read your story yesterday, and I love it! Thanks for TNGUS POV, it's always better with it! Keep it coming and thank yououou! xx

Reviewer: enis nomine (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 19

Thanks for the links, I'm looking forward to some new music. You wouldn't believe the variety I've gathered. I'm getting worse,seems I am never withouy my IPOD. Love the story, it's been pleasurable reading. I like your humor in this chapter. Thanks!

Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 19

I found this story last night and I stayed up REALLY late reading it.  I love, love, LOVE this Edward and Bella.  They are so wonderful....and sometimes such a mess!...but you are writing such a wonderful love story.  The writing is outstanding...funny and poignant all at the same time. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 17

Hey great lesson ;p

Reviewer: LC Cann (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 18

I like this Renee - she's balanced. :)

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 18

Edward's Bella:)  I love it!!!!!  Another great chapter...and on to the next!!!

Reviewer: nowayjose (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 18

i think this may be my favorite fic ever. i had to jump ahead on and i freakin love it. it like, makes my soul smile. haha. 



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