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Reviewer: MJ Mason-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 22

so sweet please leave them happy pleeeeeeease:):):)

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 22

This is a beautiful story about love.  It is gorgeously romantic. Your witty banter is so well done I swear I'm watching an episode of Gilmore girls half the time, lol. 

I look forward to more.  I'm secretly hoping we get to "meet' Edward's estranged father.

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22

love this story, great part

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 22

Too cute.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 22

Awesome job!

Keep up the great work!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 22

So sweet of Edward to build Bella a fort!  I loved the date idea.  And meeting Grandma should be very interesting...

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Really enjoy watching Edward's self realisations about his feelings towards Bella. He's so sweetly caring and thoughtful, in regards to the fort. They are such fun to make, even when you're an adult - I agree!


Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 16

That was so beautiful - thank you.


Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 22

It really does warm my heart to see Bella helping Edward navigate all the rough things being thrown his way. It has been an interesting journey to say the least for these two and I can't wait to see if Edward goes and sees his grandmother...

Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 22

I'm loving how wonderful Edward and Bella are with each other! I know it can't last forever, but it's so much fun to read now that Edward has admitted he loves her. Now on to Edward's family issues ...

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 22

Hey great chap =] i LOVED the ending

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 22

Gotta feel bad for the guy with regard to his grandparents.  My guess is they disowned his mother when she got knocked up.  I can't wait to find out more about grandma.

Loved it!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 22

They are so good together. I love the banter and the wordplay and the sweet ideas, like the picnic-tent. Hope the meeting with his granny won't be too upsetting and maybe Edward will get some answers to the questions he never asked his mother.

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 21

Aww can't wait for more.

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 21

aw they're so cute and happy...emmett and jasper need to step their game up lol i think bella is about to meet the grandma...interesting

Reviewer: ayyits_lauren (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is really amazing! I love it :) <3

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 21

Awesome job!

Keep up the great work!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: MaK Nd Cheez (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 21

OH EMM GEE!!!(: Great chapter!! Can't wait for the next chapterXD

                      <3 MaK Nd Cheez(:

Reviewer: Singer1940 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 21

I've just gotta say that it's "wicked awesome" that you have this taking place in the Boston area.  Being from that area, I am always disappointed that the fanfic I read is usually set in either the South, California, Wash/Oregon, or Chicago.  Never Mass.  So, just thanks! 

P.S.-  Love this too!

Author's Response:

You're welcome! I went to college/grad school in Boston and it's one of my favorite cities in the world. :o)

Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 21

lol just lol

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 21

Bowling is definitely a dirty sport...grown men throwing their balls around and touching them, lol.  

Great cliffie!  Sounds like we might be meeting Grandma soon.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

My gyno has a unibrow...... Great first chapter!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 21

Hey great chap awww poor edward =[

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 21

Holy freakin Hale! Yes definalty a what will Edward do now that grandmum is in the hospital. This is goin to get intense...

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 21

Candlepin bowling...must be a New England thing...Loved the chapter.  I love that he's finally found his ying...

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