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Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 27

I loved the crossword puzzle! Edward's proposal was wonderful, and their banter, as always, is so much fun. Thanks for the smile today!

Reviewer: bellabee66 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 26

I've fallen in love with your story....please update soon.....Can't wait to see how it all happens.

 

BellaBee66

Reviewer: bellabee66 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 11

I so love this teaching point of view....it gives me ideas with my husband.

Hahaha with me being a teacher and all!!! *WINK*

Reviewer: skipabeat (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 26

Excellent story....It's not the typical love at first sight, which I like. They grew into each other. This was nice. Please continue soon!!!

Reviewer: bellabee66 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh La La ...Yummy

 

 

BTW - Love your penname

 

Reviewer: deaner (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 26

I must say that I am really enjoying this story, being a life long  Bostonian and a person who used to love Fat Albert. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter. Very well written.

Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 26

as always- a pure pleasure!!!

pls continue- i love ur work!

Reviewer: tracilatc2003 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 26

Absolutely wonderful story.  Just started Friday and have hardly been able to turn off the computer since.  Keep up with the amazing writing! :)

Traci

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 26

man, this chapter broke my effin' heart, in a good way. I spent today devouring this story, and it's just KILLED me. There aren't any men like Edward - and there should be. No lovers like Edward - and there should be. I WANT ONE! 

My heart broke for him over and over...his cluelessness over having a crush, falling in love....the "like-making" he couldn't recognize for what it was...then the confessions of love...finding his old stuff in the storage room, Bella reading the diary for him...I wanted to dig up his grandfather and slap the living SHIT out of his skeleton!! and then spit on the old bastard's grave. gah!  The harm he's caused to 3 generations...the group hug/walk toward the sideboard had me snorting thru my tears. The epic Love of Eggs? incredible (and edible) The Boa Hugs? sniffle sniffle. Granddad's blessing? Sent me over the top, wailing happy tears as I went.  For Edward to find love, acceptance, family...priceless!  Sigh. 8)

BTW, stop saying you're old, 'cause I get every freakin' reference you throw out there, sista!! lol....lord knows I'm feeling geriatric these days!  I was looking at a bin of discounted DVDs yesterday. as were 2 young girls. I grabbed one video and said "oh my god, that's Rob Lowe!" they had NO CLUE who he was....so I had to kill them. >:>  Alas....

Now I'm out of chapters and weary from my emotional road trip thru CT, MA, and NH. lol!!  Can't wait for the Big Proposal....hey, are you gonna have things hit the shit first?? I hope not....

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 26

WOO :) Can't wait for Edward to find his balls and ask Bella :P It's way quick in their relationship, but things cannot always be measured in time.

Reviewer: JennyMo0209 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 26

aw... this chapter made me cry like a baby!! so good!!

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 26

Oh my god! I am so freaking excited for the next chapter! Better be soon! Cannot wait! Gahh!! :) I am so god damn happy that he has had some sort of closure! I am estatic and i cannot wait for the next chapter! Please hurry :)

Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 26

Thank you for this wonderful chapter in which I've succesfully unclogged my toilet several times.. sniff.. sniff... It was beautiful and I just want to give grandad cullen a hug... I love him so muchhhhhhhhh

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 26

ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod! I'm such a girly girl right now...they're gettin mauwied?? ;) *le sigh*

Awesome chapter...wish I could put in words more of what I loved about it, but since I'm having a lingering residue of migrane I'm quite out of words at the moment...

Love! That is all! <3

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 26

i am glad that edward realizes bella is the one for him....after all they have been through together it only makes sense...i have to ask though she hasnt tweeted in awhile or seen friends...whats up with them,,..just curious...i am glad however that we havent seen jake since!!...i love that carlisle is his dad...it always seemed right that he was his dad....its funny how in most stories edward senior is always the villain...not a good dad or good guy...i wonder why that is,,,,

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 26

The first meeting was so heart warming. It was just aww. lol

Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 26

I have to say this is one of my favorite chapters so far. The only thing that would have made it better would have been a more detailed lemon! LOL! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 26

Loved it...laughed...cried...a little something for everyone!  can't wait till next week...

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 26

another great chapter: hot aerobic movements and you just gotta love the Cullens, now please let him propose and I would like to read of Rose's and Alice's reactions

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 26

Ahh! I can't wait for more. So cute!

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 26

ahhhhh i can't wait for the propose part!!! any pictures of the cullen ring look like? i'm curious of how the ring looks... this chapter is so touching! ^_^ v

Reviewer: potterchick86 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 26

all I can say is...i do!!!

Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 26

I want to know what Carlisle asked!

Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 24

This chapter needs a tissue warning! Ah...that letter was great and it sounded so...Carlisle!

And now we get to meet the senior doctor, yes? I love Carlisle *sigh*

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Bella sees his…uh…swella…and gets an urge she can't quella

OH MY GOD, that fucking cracked me the hell up! :) good chapter, you are kinda funny as hell.

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