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Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 28

Me encanta esta histoira es fantastica me la ha aconsejado una amiga y tengo que darle las gracias en 3 dias me he leido todos los capitulos y no puedo esperar para leer el prosimo 

me gusta sobre todo porque las cosas las resuelven entre ellos si meter terceras personas en el medio 

 

Reviewer: Shimca (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 28

I really love this story and have read it about 4 times and it's not even finished yet! You make the characters so funny. You know when you don't feel like reading something really heavy, that's what this story is for me. It makes me laugh out loud. Congratulations and I can't wait to read the end. 

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 28

Often times when I get to the proposal or the assurance that it will end happy I loose interest in the story and just quit reading it. That will not be happenig with TNGUS. I love this story. I found myself cooing and sighing and just felling overall general cotentment that are togther now. I

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 27

Guh, I completely forgot to add the proposal.  Total face palm.  I loved it.  The crossword was so orginal.  It was the perfect way for him to ask her, or at least start to ask her.  Again this is such a completely happy story.

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this week I couldn't get to this chapter but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about tngus. I was looking forward to easter with the cullens. Once again I loved rose and alice. Those two slay me. I just love the relationship edward is building with his dad and even his grandfather. I loved the part at the church and after where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. This story is just so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 27

I have been so busy this eek I couldn't get to this, but everytime I had my phone in my hand I thought about TNGUS.  I swear I read a paragraph or two every chance I got.  I was looking forward to Easter with the Cullens.  Once again I loved Rose and Alice.  Those two just slay me.  I love the relationsgip Eward is building with his dad and even his grandfather.  I loved the part after church where she realizes he not only has a family but a community as well. 
This story is so magi-fantisti-wonder-ifical!

Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 9

The more I "hear" him calling her Brown Eyes the more I like it.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

LOL - this is funny, I'm liking it already!!!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 26

This chapter had so much win in it. From the knee kick to the driving range. To have a family that loves you and the feeling of belonging is one of the most amazing things in the world. I'm so happy edward has that now. As for bella, I felt the same way when I married my husband, I gaind a grandfather again. I had lost my only grandma, who I was very close to, a year before. To have a realtionship with a gradparent again was wonderful. I'm sure bella will always miss her dad but carlisle will help fill that empty space in her life, plus esme will be the too. Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 25

She wanted to raise him to be the man they should have been to her. - that is so beautifully put. I'm still sad he had the childhood he did so devoid of love except from his mom but I'm happy his life is being filled with now. I'm tired so this short even though the chapter was amazing.

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 24

I figured carlisle would be thrilled cause he's carlisle but I still held my breath and my heart raced as I waited for to call and all while she talked to him. Its sad that he didn't have him in his life but at least he has him now. You amaze me with your ability to write great lemons chapter after chapter. This story is in my top 10 favorite fan fics. Its just WIN!

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 23

You are so witty with the phrases you use. I love how edward and bella banter back and forth. Its cheesy and absolutely adorable. The beatles songs were perfect what a fun idea. It was good edward went to see his grandma. Alzheimers is so hard on family members. My grandma in law had it abd I was a companion to 2 other ladies with it. Grandma and 1 of the others were very happy. They lived in a happy time in their past. The one thing we noticed is they both wanted to go places all the time or they were waiting to go somewhere. The other lady I worked with was much harder. She would cuss evryone around her out and accuse any females of sleeping with her husband. Sometimes it could be very amusing. I learned quite a number nasty name combinations from her.

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 22

I was kinda mad at edward in this chapter. I realize he has a bad past with his grandparents but its his grandma. You can't turn your back on your grandma. I'm glad bella set him straight. The tent scene was sweet. Very romantic for edward to do that.

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 21

You are so right. You can't choose love it chooses you. I loved all the illeteration and then agin the sexual inunndos while bowling. I love how they got lost in themselves and everyone was staring. My favorit part was the comment on roses change purse never being empty of two cents. That was killer.

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 20

Edwards past is so sad. I think he needs a few extras hugs from all the rest of us too. We can just channel them through bella. Still loving this story.

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 19

"You don't know you've been missing something the whole time...until you have it.". That was beautifully put. I hope it sinks in. Renee telling charlie it was his brown eyes was so sweet. Yay! They are halfway there not its edwards turn to admit it.

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 19

"You don't know you've been missing something this whole time...until you have it.". That was beautifully put. I hope it sunk in. Renee telling charlie it was the brown eyes was sweet. They're halfway there. Now edward just needs to say it too.

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