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Reviewer: whyuh (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is awesome! I'm not one for one-shots, but something about the summary - a series of conversations making the whole story intrigued me and...
*sighs*
Truly wonderful talent you have, and I thank you much for sharing it with us all!
whyuh
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
so I've read this twice... but cannot remember if I told how cute I think it is, so I decided to go with saying it again, just in case.
Loveeeeee it.
The personalities you give them compliment each other in such an adorable fashion, and I love the stream of consciousness that come in around the conversations. Kudos.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
that was so cute i loved it lol
i was smiling through the whole thing lol
again u r an amazing author very detail and very very very creative lol
again i look forward to reading more from u i also love that u put such cool history into ur writing it is really interesting
well again i loved this story and legendary
so until next time
mbellaandedwardm
Reviewer: Dewbedewx (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was seriously a wonderful one-shot. I absolutely love straight forward Bella. She beats shy, insecure Bella by a LONG shot. Kudos for the nomination. Again, this is a great story.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i don't know if I can ever write canon, simply because I really don't like shy, insecure bella. I'm glad you like her, I always like someone with a good sense of humor (that's what twilight was missing to me and why I love fic so much). i appreciate your words, and if I'm reading it right, I love your penname :)
Reviewer: Claresta (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
Absolutely adorable ending and hilarious throughout.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Really, really excellent story! It wasn't at all what I expected, but I don't know exactly what I did expect. It's definitely worth reading!!
Author's Response: Why thank you! I think that when people see "17 conversations" they have an idea in their head, but I'm glad to see the story surprised you. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: hwright605 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sigh... made my little heart go pitter pat! Neat mythology twist, and I loved the humor mixed in. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: I always laugh when people say "thank you for writing" because I think its more appropriate to say thank you for reading (and reviewing)! I enjoyed writing this a lot and playing with the idea of "imprinting". I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Nbelle (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved your one shot, it so sweet and humorous and i thoroughly enjoyed it! i also wouldnt mind if you chose to make it a longer fic ;) but its great as a one shot!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! As I have said, I can't deny that I've definitely thought of writing in this style again, something short and sweet so do keep an eye out. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: ladybug123 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
uuurrrrrrgggggg i loved this it was ummmmm cool i guess
Author's Response: umm uhhhh, THANK YOU :)
Reviewer: doodlebug752 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very humourous and rather sweet, I have to say. You totally deserve that nomination with this delightfuly one-shot. It reminds me of a novel called Where Rainbows End, except you've done the opposite, relied almost completly on dialouge to tell the story.
Loved it!
Author's Response: I have heard of that novel, which was in just letters/correspondence style. I actually have read several fanfics in epistolary style but I'd never come across one that was completely dialogue, which inspired me to write this. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: flibbins (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved the flow of this. It isn't easy to make a story come alive when there is so much dialogue and so little description. But you did it beautifully. Great story!
Author's Response: It was definitely a challenge to write without descriptions or dialogue tags, especially since I tend to love using adjectives and third person narrative (like I do in my other story). But the challenge was also liberating and helped me write in a new style. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: sweb (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm new to Twilighted and so this is my first review. I love how you twisted the canon to fit the poem and yet made it even more "canon" if you will. You write beautifully, both Hear and Legendary make my inner ear smile at your linguistic gymnastics.
Author's Response: Welcome to Twilighted! I'm pleased that you decided to leave your first review for my story :) I definitely took some liberties with canon and came up with this whole backstory to explain it, but I really am fascinated by imprinting.
Thanks so much for your kind words and praise and reading both Hear, Say and Legendary. I really love writing and twisting a phrase so I'm glad you enjoyed it as well.
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved it! Great job, Edward was adorable and Bella's sassyness was perfect.
Author's Response: I'm such a sucker for Edward I can't help but make him someone I would adore. And I'm a fan of banter so Bella just had to be sassy. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
I LOVED it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! That's all I want-- someone to have as much fun reading it as I did writing it.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Fantastic job!
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Britmom (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
What a fantastic idea and so well done. Congrats on your nomination and good luck - I'm off to vote now.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and your vote :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
It kind of seems like this could keep going. In fact, when you mentioned Charlie it made me wonder if CHarlie was heterochromatic too. Of course, it is good as a one shot also.
Author's Response: I agree with you that there are a lot of different routes this could go and I can't deny that I've definitely thought of either writing another one shot in this style or continuing it with a second one shot... Charlie is not heterochromatic, just a good old fashioned romantic :) Thanks so muc for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Arizona Hale (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
AWWW! you should do a longer fic out of this!
Author's Response: I think that as a longer fic, it would be really limited and may be become a little stale but I can't say I haven't thought of writing another one shot in this style so keep your eye out. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very cute story. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: bishop (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very cute
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is so cool!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: momtokyle (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
cute, liked the humor!
Author's Response: My beta calls my humor "unique" but I'm glad someone else gets it too haha. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: moshpit (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was pretty damn good!
Author's Response: Why thank you! It was tough but pretty damn fun to write :)
Reviewer: Chalger33 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love this. Very good!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you for taking the time to review :)
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Cute and funny idea!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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