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Reviewer: Tracy_100 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Friends
So far I'm loving this story. Clearly Edward has figured it out. Can't wait for Bella to see it. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Friends
I like this - he's sweet and I hope he can help her get over the crap tht she went through in Phoenix.
Would be nice to get an EPOV too - wonder when he'll start trying to match up his Cyber g/f with Bella? Or does he not have enough clues? Will Bella tell him once she's figured it out or will she continue to be dumm.
Achilles
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Friends
Great chapter!! :D I love Edward he is SO awesome.....and hot. :D hehe I can't wait until Bella finds out about Cyber Edward and Regular Edward.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Friends
Can't wait till Bella discovers cyber and real Edward are the same.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Anew
really great 2nd chapter....can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Anew
loved it
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Anew
I like how you switched up Rose meeting Bella first and introducing her to everyone since it is usually Alice. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Anew
Hm this is going to be an awesome story!! :D Great story idea and chapter.
Reviewer: StupidShinyVolvo17 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Anew
I like where this is going :) Write more!! lol
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Breathe
looking forward to more
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Breathe
a great start...can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Breathe
I think this sounds like a great beginning to your story. I can see it taking shape in the first few paragraphs. Good luck and you can count on me to read each chapter and review! Thanks for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the chapter and are interested in the story. Just to let you know, it's already about seven chapters (soon to be eight) deep on fanfiction, so if you want to find out a bit of what happens, you can go there, and maybe leave me some reviews :) I write under the same pen name there--KatieJane4815, just in case you go to look for it :)
Thanks, KatieJane4815 :)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Breathe
i really like this start
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it! Thanks so much for reading! This story is already seven chapters deep on fanfiction, so if you want to go over there and catch up and leave me some reviews, it'd be greatly appreciated :)
Thanks, KatieJane4815
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Breathe
first fic I have read with this premise.. sounds llike fun.. online buddies but dont realise they know eachother in real life.. lol.. you arent gonna make edward mean are you? i suppose you need a bit of angst in their real life.. so funny if they are 'venting' to their online selves about how much they hate eachother.. lol lol
Author's Response: No, I don't intend on making Edward mean :P. Trust me, wherever my Bella is concerned, there is tonnes of angst in her life, as well as in Edward's--they don't need the extra angst of hating each other lol! This fic is already seven chapters deep on fanfiction, soon to be eight since I'm writing chapter eight at the moment, so if you're interested in reading ahead, please feel free to move on over to fanfiction and leave me some reviews :)
Thanks :) KatieJane4815
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