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Reviewer: ellie82 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 10:33 AM · On: And It All Came Crashing Down
Nice cliffie.
Reviewer: ellie82 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:46 AM · On: The Fight
As I'm reading this, I thought I would leave you a little review too. This is a really great start and a great way of starting an alternate ending. I already have so many questions... with it being three years on what will have happened to everyone and is Edward actually dead?
Reviewer: careolinagirl (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Aftermath
Wow great chapter! I'm so intrigued by your story. I have a Wereward theory...suspecting an Underworld type hybrid thing happening? Not sure, but can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! My chapter is in the process of being beta'd so it should be up in really soon. Good theory. I'm not telling you whether it is right, but it's a good theory... ;)
Reviewer: Gogsnkay (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Aftermath
Working on becoming Canadian! In the process of applying to immigrate there from UK. Originally Irish but hubby Scottish and eh is a very scottish thing too! How's the next chapter coming??? ;0) x
Author's Response: It's coming. I'm hoping to have it done by the middle of next week. There is one part of the chapter that I'm having trouble with, but the rest is finished. So, you're immigrating to Canada, eh? Canada is great. I lived in China for a while and I loved the big city, but when I came back to my small town in Atlantic Canada I knew that I belonged here. I'm a country girl at heart I guess. :)
Well, I better get back to writing ;)
Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer!!!
Reviewer: twifann1975 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Aftermath
I don't know what Edward is going to turn into, but what I do know is this story is getting very interesting! Kuddos!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: Gogsnkay (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Aftermath
Love it!! Not totally sure what to make of what's happened to him. Maybe the wolf DNA counteracts the Vamp DNA to cancel each other out or somesuch? Not sure though why Oscar would go to the bother if he is a true Vamp hating Werewolf?? Mortal enemy, why not just kill him? Therein lies my conundrum! Lol! Great stuff, keep us guessing, but not for long though eh! X
Author's Response: Are you Canadian? I use "eh?" all the time. :)
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Aftermath
edward better not be a werewolf!! no no no, he and bella need to be together!
Author's Response: Don't panic. That's all I'm going to tell you... ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Aftermath
Wow Edward a werewolf? Interesting. Wouldn't Jake smell him? Recognize his scent?
Poor Edward. He has clearly endured a lot of suffering. My heart aches for him. I hope he remembers his past. I want him to remember his life with Bella.
Their relationship is progressing. He is admitting his feelings for her. Hopefully now they will be united in everything. I love this story. It is one of my all time favorites. I am so very captivated. It is excellent!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much. I am so happy that people are liking my story.
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Aftermath
Great Chaper!!! I can't wait for the next one... hey, how long will the wait be??? I can't wait to tell my hubby about this... he will enjoy the twists and turns... Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm trying to get the next one ready for this weekend. It's my prep week for classes, so I'm hoping I'll have more free time. I'm glad your husband likes it too! :)
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Aftermath
interesting chapter. I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to get my chapters ready faster. :)
Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Aftermath
Edward turning into a werewolf would just suck. I still like this story, but it's getting more confusing.
Author's Response: I'm starting to unravel the mystery starting from this point on, so I'm hoping it will get less confusing. :)
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Aftermath
i wonder if they were trying to make a hybrid? could that be possible?
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. He he... ;)
Reviewer: nurseryteacher (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Aftermath
Edward a werewolf? That's just wrong!
If Oscar is some sort of scientist could he have used werewolf genes to cancel out the vampire venom and make our Edward human?
Looking forward to finding out.
Sue x
Author's Response: I can't tell you the answer yet, but it's coming soon. I'm starting to unravel the mystery from here on out.
Reviewer: twilighter279 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Aftermath
this is coooll....but PLEASE dont turn edward in a werewolf, ok!? that would be just....weird?
anyways update fast ! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I"m trying to update more quickly. I'm hoping I'll have more free time in the next week to get the next chapter ready.
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Aftermath
the end of that chapter was very cute but i am really starting to be anxious about what Edward is. i really hope hes not a werewolf!
<3
Author's Response: I know. Everybody is getting anxious. From here on out the chapters will be unraveling the mystery.
Reviewer: fnmom68 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Wait...WHAT?!
Wow, great story so far. Sorry I'm late to the party, but I'll catch up fast!
I can't even imagine the monstrous hope and the fear of being crushed again that Bella must be feeling. And the confusion that Alice is feeling! I mean, why hasn't she been able to see him if he's alive? And what kind of alive is he, exactly? And where the heck could he be?
Oh, wait - I haven't finished reading the chapters that have been posted yet. Maybe I should go read and see if I can find any answers, you think?
Excellent job - must go read more now. Will review again later.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope that you are still liking the story. I'm so happy that people are enjoying it as much as I'm enjoying writing it! :)
Reviewer: amelia30 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Aftermath
it is the greatest human edward story i h read.but y updates are slow keep them coming.i think bella deserves more angst about
how things gone with edward give her pain
Author's Response: Wow. That is a great compliment because I've ready great human Edward stories that I've just loved. So, thanks! :D
Reviewer: melissa109 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Aftermath
I love it. This story just keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate the reviews. It fuels my writing. I'm hoping to get one done this week!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Aftermath
How exciting! I cant wait to read more! Thanks for posting this intriguing chapter :)
Author's Response: You're welcome! :) I'm really enjoying writing this story too. It is my first fanfic and I never thought that I would love it so much. :)
Reviewer: AnnaWinters (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Aftermath
That would be wierd, edward the werewolf? Ten he would fight his family . *crys*
I don't want Alice or any Cullen to die, or Bella or Jake !!
Great story btw
Author's Response: Gasp. I won't kill off any of our loved characters. I just couldn't do that. I love Bella, Edward, Jake, Emmett, Rosalie, Jasper, Alice, Carlisle, and Esme.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Aftermath
Awwww I like it....puzzles falling into place and all. Very interesting. I doubt Edward is a werewolf but I could see how they may have used werewolf to turn him human....very interested. But Hey what do I know?
Author's Response: Thanks. The puzzle is going to get solved from here on out. So, I hope you like it.
Reviewer: xXElle-BelleXx (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Aftermath
I want Edward and Bella to both turn into vamps, Edward to remember everything, and they all live happily-ever-after! lol. But, it would be very interesting if Eddie-boy was a werewolf. Hmmmm. I'm thinking........I'm thinking........yep. Very intriguing.
Author's Response: I can't tell you any of the answers yet, but they are coming! Thanks a lot for the review.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Aftermath
I thought the new pieces to the puzzle were really interesting. I hope Edward does not become a werewolf, but I wonder what Oscar's endgame was. This illness spreading sounds like he may have intentionally left Edward among humans to spread it like wildfire. That reminds me of the movie Mission Impossible 2.
It was great that Bella stopped the fight building between Jacob and Emmett and put the focus back on Edward. I feel sorry for Jake because Paul may be involved because he wanted revenge for a vampire killing his imprint. I am glad they realized that Edward must have surrendered himself to spare Bella. It was good that Jake and the Cullens got active right away trying to involve Carlisle and Sam to get their thoughts on this new information.
It was good that Bella sought comfort in Edward's tent after everyone left. I love how Bella made him realize that it was him that she needed and that he agreed not leave her.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your great review. I worked on this chapter for a long time because it really starts unravelling the mystery. I also wanted Bella to convince Edward that she wasn't just living in the past. So, I'm glad that this chapter worked. It was a really hard one. You write great reviews. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Aftermath
Well they are making progress in the mystery of his disappearance. I know that he doesn't remember her but he does still have feelings for her. i am glad that he is starting to respond to her and maybe letting her in. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm happy that Bella and Edward are reconnecting too!
Reviewer: AngelByEve (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Aftermath
Hmm....I didn't even think of the possibility of Edward turning into a werewolf. I took it as Alice not being able to see him because he's been around Jacob and Alice can't see through Jacob. I did enjoy the interaction between Edward and Bella in the latter of the chapter.
I did think of one thing that kinda make me ponder, lol. If the flu is spreading like wild fire globally, and Edward's immune to it, Jake is cuz the wolf thing and the Cullen's because they're technically dead, doesn't that leave Bella susceptible to catching it if they get close enough to civilization?
-Kristin-
Author's Response: Thank you so much and good pondering!
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