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Reviewer: vmaale (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 05:43 AM · On: The Hunt
pleaseeeeee update please
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 03:07 PM · On: The Hunt
I laughed and cried and yet, wanted more--just like Bella and Edward! Your fan fiction of their love was some of the best I've read here!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Tick Tock
Well, well....contests were never like this! You sure made newlywed life a wild ride; I'm so ecstatic ( and a bit jealous,) for Bella and Edward!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 06:47 AM · On: The Wedding Dress
You took the moment to the universe and back; ooo, this was hot! I laughed and cried!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 05:44 AM · On: The Meadow
All I can say is....I cried from sheer joy!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 04:43 AM · On: On Top
Owwww! You really showed that Edward has got some skills we never knew he had!! But oh, that gentlemanly behavior--he's an incomparable lover! Delicious!! An enormous "shout-out" for our Bella, who gave Edward a taste of superb, feminine, sexual power! Carpe Diem and Cudos!!
I thought I was watching a "dueling match" between 2 Musketeers! ('Take that and that too!' Wink, wink! ROFL!) LOVE IT!! I only wish SM had written 2 versions of Breaking Dawn: the one we've all read--- for the young people; and 1 for the adults--- like what you did here for the first night at the cottage and for the honeymoon scene. By the way, did you write a version of the honeymoon---if so, please give the link or the title!
I'm so thrilled I saved this to my favorites!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 03:36 AM · On: On The Floor
Juiciness is all I can say!
Reviewer: hoshi (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 03:36 PM · On: The Hunt
I just finished reading for the first time! This story is amazing and you are such a talented writer. I hope the next chapter is still on its way :)
Reviewer: vmaale (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 06:41 AM · On: The Hunt
are you going to finish the story?
please let me know...
I love it
Reviewer: leeses (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 03:11 AM · On: The Hunt
just read this story it was wonderful one off the best i have read so far and it left me wanting more i do hope you finish this i can not wait. She may have invented edward and bella but you really brought them to life . Please keep going its wonderful . Thanks
Reviewer: vmaale (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 05:45 AM · On: The Hunt
please update
I can't wait
Reviewer: blessallchildren (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2011 02:44 PM · On: On Top
You are a fantastic writer! Keep writing! Creative writing is a gift and you have it!
Reviewer: vmaale (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 05:53 AM · On: The Hunt
please updateeee
Author's Response: Hi Vmaale, I promise, I will finish this story eventually. But right now, is my last semester and I am trying to get my thesis done and graduate. I'm afraid creative writing has taken a back burner for the moment. I hope to get back to writing soon, but don't know when that will be realistic. Thank you for your patience and support. I promise happy endings and at least two more chapters of the story.
Reviewer: mamadog93 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 11:44 PM · On: The Meadow
Wow! Seriously, love this story! Can I ask you a question? Where were you when we needed a screenwriter for the Twilight Saga movies? I can only imagine that the movies would then have truly done the books justice had you been in charge! I absolutely love the innuendos in the banter back and forth between Edward and Bella!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for both of your kind reviews. I love these characters and this story so much...just taking a pause from writing to get some school stuff done.
Reviewer: mamadog93 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 10:42 PM · On: On Top
I just found this and I LOVE IT!
Reviewer: Snuffy10 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 04:45 AM · On: The Wedding Dress
Wow who knew that vampire sex could be so very HOT!!!!! Good chapter!
Reviewer: FrenchGirl (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 05:02 AM · On: The Hunt
Can wait for the next chaper!!! I love your writting style! Thanks.
Author's Response: Hello, Thanks! I am so glad you like it and took time to review. I'm back to work on chapter 7 now. Avoidance of writing the final two chapters has had me on Procrastinationville, but I'm back on track now.
Reviewer: gitzie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 08:17 AM · On: The Hunt
I have to bow down to your genius writing skills. You had me so hooked all through the story. I'll definitely be on the look out for anything else you write. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks, I really appreciate all of that. I'm back writing the two closing pieces now (New Years Day 07 and Chapter 7).
Reviewer: mylovedward (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:40 AM · On: The Hunt
Wow there are really no words for what you have written. it is so much great, deeply seductive i was wholly immersed in it while reading this. thank you for giving us such twi-pleasures.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying so. I love their story so much. It has been a joy to "live" in this space of kindness and passion with them. I'm glad you have enjoyed it.
Reviewer: renee m (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:11 PM · On: The Hunt
so good...
Author's Response: And...Thanks again :-)
Reviewer: renee m (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:11 PM · On: The Hunt
so good...
Author's Response: Thanks again :-)
Reviewer: renee m (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:08 PM · On: The Hunt
so good...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: vmaale (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 09:36 PM · On: The Hunt
very animalistic....
I like it
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: austoz (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 12:35 PM · On: The Hunt
Oh wow! great chapter. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Ucjackle (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 02:52 AM · On: The Hunt
And here I am drawing 15 and 54 on top of eachother... it does make 69 when you do that... sort of...
Author's Response: :-)
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