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Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2018 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Now it makes sense as to why you had Alice be the surrogate. Not going to write much else cause I’m crying hard.
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2018 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 34 Winter White
I’m reading this Story on both FanFiction dot com and here on Twilighted, because sometimes this site gives me trouble! As I said on FF, I really thought that Jamie’s mom would be the surrogate kind of as paybacks for Jamie’s gifted heart. It would be something that she COULD do to repay Bella and Give Bella a reason to compensate Katherine for, who most likely need the money considering the ENORMOUS medical bills she will be getting in the very near future because of the surgery and subsequent hospital stay and treatment. It would have been a great way for all parties involved. Thank you for reading my rant!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2018 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 14 Fan
I thought it was great how Alice found out, but she is being rather annoying.What business is it if hers to let everyone know what’s going on with Bella and Edward’s private relationship. He’s being reallly pushy. She needs to let up on the nosiness and let them be.
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2018 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 13 What the ?
I definitely had a feeling she was a virgin with her youth and school history. I thought she would’ve told him before he pushed in though. A bit of an oversight on her part. I gues she knew how he would react. He would’ve probably treated her like a fragile glass vase. Looking forward to the rest.
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 3 Time to Go
Bella is a take charge lady, interesting----.I'm eager to see where this goes, sounds really good.
Reviewer: twilightcougar (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 21 Hef
Photo shoot was hot;)
Reviewer: Pianogirl05 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 40 Outtake 1
This was an awesome story. Once I started reading I was hooked the entire time.
Reviewer: Dutchie La Rue (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 6 Neighbor
This just keeps gettin better and better!! thank you for creating these very interesting Edward and Bella characters!!!
Reviewer: Dutchie La Rue (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 2 Driver
I gotta love a bossy Bella and Playboy Edward!!! Can't wait to learn about this Date between them @ the blacktie affair!!!
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 40 Outtake 1
Sorry couldn't review before now because I was too busy reading---loved these characters and the story line was beautiful. It could all be true too, I work in the medical field; see medical miracles everyday. The fact that now they can transplant multiples organs at the same time---and that people survive these surgeries and go home to live normal lives. I worked with nurse who after 14 years she stopped taking her Prograf and continue to have no problem. The doctor claimed that her body now no longer saw her liver as a foreign body. She is now a grandmother and has had no prblems for the last few years. So more outakes would be good, no great!
Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 6 Neighbor
just started reading this story. sounds like a winner. i have read most of your other stories. keep up the good job and stories
Reviewer: Pikapuff (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Ahh! I thought Katie was going to be the surrogate, but now she's the one that died! Wow. Left field my friend. Well done.
Reviewer: windyday (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 13 What the ?
Yes, I felt that Bella was a virgin. I was surprised at how fast their{edward, bella} relationship moved. Alice knew from day 1, I think. I think more detail, {read, lemons}, would be better for this story. I love the plot!
Reviewer: MrsMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 40 Outtake 1
Hey I just found this story last week and I loved it.I cant wait for more out takes.How about 1 when Kat and Mase go on thier first dates.I bet Daddy will flip lol.
xoxo
Reviewer: laria1979 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 34 Winter White
Awww that was the wedding vow my husband and i had lol. Great story!!
Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 40 Outtake 1
Shed a few tears. I did get emotional during the last few chapters. Thank you for this amazing story. It's a change to see a rich and in control BELLA. There is a "girl power" in your story.
Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
Leaving was a very smart move by Bella. She is preparing Edward for the inevitable, her death. You are an awesome author.
Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 23 Give me a Ring and M&Ms
I just discovered your story and it is a WOW. I'm a littlte scared about what's gonna happen to Bella but for now I will enjoy every chapter till the end. You are simply amazing.
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
Grrrrrrrrrr. Taking out the Aussie on the track is not cool. Ambrose will be placing top five just you wait.
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Oh my what an awsome twist!!! Thanks for the great story. I'm trying not to cry. hehe
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
Oh my God I can't believe it's actually over. I only started this story a few days ago but I've just read about years of E/B's lives. Enjoyed every moment of this story and I fell in love with all the characters and the plot. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 38 Little Hands and Little Feet
"Both of them screaming from daddy’s outrageous need to see their mother in a bikini." Haha oh Edward.
Loved this chapter! The babies are here! Edward makes such a cute father. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 37 So Much
Great chapter. So glad Bella made it and E/B took Jamie home with them. Can't wait to read more. The babies are coming!!! :D
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 37 So Much
Great chapter. So glad Bella made it and E/B took Jamie home with them. Can't wait to read more. The babies are coming!!! :D
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Great chapter. I cried two or three times through it. The poem was beautiful! You are so talented. Poor Edward, I can't imagine how he felt watching Bella slipping away. Can't believe it was Jamie's mother! Even with the clues, I never thought she would die! What will happen to Jamie now? Can Edward and Bella take care of her? Can't wait to read more.
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