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Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 06:30 AM · On: A little back story

Classic Bella - She is supposed to be able to do whatever she wants and Ed is supposed to take it....


Spending more time with Jake - fine, then, please don't have Ed sitting around looking like a fool, while she is with Jake..

Where's Tanya when u need her.....good grief


Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 12:22 AM · On: A little back story

Welcome back!  I can't wait for more!  I'm glad to see Jake has a shot! lol

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 04:43 PM · On: A little back story

Interesting chapter.  I like the back story.  Edward needs to be honest with Bella

Reviewer: ken7 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 05:11 AM · On: Answers and Questions

Yeah I have to say... Bella thinking its perfectly fine to be friends with a wolf that imprinted on her and would have romantic feelings for her and her basically feeling the same while dating Edward isn't cool... in fact, it annoys me how she can even get upset at Edward for reacting the way he does. I mean how would she feel if the shoe was on the other foot and Edward decided he wanted to hang out with Tanya alot more... I don't think she would like that. Not really fair either.... they say that resisiting an imprinted wolf is close to impossible and you don't know if its a BJ or BE far I don't see it as being BE...and I'm on Edward's side...just sayin.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 11:21 PM · On: Answers and Questions

You go Bella!  It will taker a stronge woman to keep these two in line!

I'm going to keep hopeing for a Jake win in this story...he imprinted!  If Bella rejects him he will have no one.....ever......

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 05:06 PM · On: Answers and Questions

That went better than expected.  I hope Edward will be mature & trust Bella.  And I really hope Bella stays with him

Author's Response:

One would hope with as many years of experience under his belt, Edward would be mature...but jealousy is a troublesome lady!!  We'll have to wait and see :-)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2012 05:39 PM · On: Not Gonna Make the Matinee

Hey thanks for the quick update!  I loved this chapter! I can't wait to hear this conversation! lol  Jake is right what a fucking mess! lol

Update soon!  Dixie

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still here and enjoying :-)  Hope you like the next one just as much -- it's in the que as we speak!  

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 03:45 PM · On: Just Your Average Saturday Afternoon

Evil, Evil Cliffy!!!!!! ....Oh, wait.... welcome back! I'll start my review now...... Evil, Evil Cliffy, that is so mean of you! lol

Please update soon!  I can't wait to see what Edward thinks, also will he be able to tell that Bella is Jake's imprint?  I can't remember, this is a Jake and Bella story isn't it?  Damn, I hope so!


Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Truth Revealed...Maybe

Update soon...I am so anxious to see what happens next....

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Truth Revealed...Maybe

Can't wait for Jacob to get a whiff of Edward!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Truth Revealed...Maybe

oh my...this is going to be good! Update soon!

Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Truth Revealed...Maybe

that was not a good idea sparks is going to fly when jacob and edward meets

Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Lies of the Heart

Aw! Congratulations to you, pregnant lady!

Also, I'm really diggin' your story so far.

Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Lies of the Heart

Please keep updating. I love Edward and I can't wait to see Alice and Jasper. I am also looking forward to Edward discovering Jacob.

Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Lies of the Heart

lovin it

Reviewer: LizAnybody (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Caffeine and Conversation

I admit this story title caught my attention only because when I enter a Starbucks about once a year, I never know how to order either.

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Lies of the Heart


This was an awesome chapter...I'm wondering why Edward is feeling sort of down....did maybe Alice tell him something...I totally love the fact that it was Bella this time that asked if she would see him 2moro...and that she is also feeling a subtle connection between her and Jake.... I am loving this story and I want to see where you take it....

Reviewer: clover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Lies of the Heart

I really hope that Bella is going to choose Jacob in the end, because I don't want to see Jacob suffering I had enough of that in the bokks

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Lies of the Heart

this chappy was great :D i love that edward is such a sweet edward i dont want him to get hurt :( thats ok if it turns out that bella and jake end up together ill take care of edward haha :D cant wait for more

Reviewer: vwbuggin1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Lies of the Heart

For the original Twilight, it's definitely Edward...though the whole Jacob thing is cruel and Renesseme (however it's spelled) is just sickening.  With fanfic, it depends on how the story is written that I pick who I think she should be with.  There are some that I've read for ages and it should soo be Edward but she's with Jake or vise versa.  I guess we'll see here:)  I hope you finish this.  Most stories are never finished.

Reviewer: Tweaker (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:28 AM · On: Lies of the Heart

Oh my gosh, congratulations! I must be hormonal or something, I don't even know you but I'm have tears in my eyes because I'm so happy for you!

Great job on the chapter, by the way :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Lies of the Heart

How sweet, Bella feels the conection too!  I know you haven't determined if this is a B/J or B/E story so I'll put my 2 scents in......Jake imprinted on Bella, the imprintee (Bella) feels the connection as well as the imprintor (is that a word? lol) just not as much.  So how can the imprint not win?  I'm team switzerland I have just as many B/E stories as I do B/J and J/N stories it depends on the story who I want as a couple, but this feels like a J/B story already  any who  just my thoughts!

Congrats on the great news, it sounds like your first one?  You will love being a mommy :)


Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Caffeine and Conversation

Just a thought if this is an imprint story, sense the imprint is to natures way of strengthening the wolf bloodline, why would you imprint on someone who won’t fulfill that imperative? That would make no sense. That is why both Jake and Bella felt the pull.

You story idea is very interesting. I like that Jake and Bella didn't know each other before this meeting. Bella has no idea about the supernatural side of life. All of this will be new to her.

Update soon, I can’t wait to see how your story comes unfolds.


Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Caffeine and Conversation


Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Caffeine and Conversation

Awesome chapter... I am so curious to see how everything turns out... I like the fact that Bella also feels the pull of the imprint... I can already see this is going to be a great story regardless of who Bella ends up with...

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