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Reviews For Sleeping to Dream
Reviewer: RebeccaJ1973 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2020 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rules of Time

Bella going along with the threat against her parents doesn't make much sense to me.  I mean, she's supposed to be very intelligent.  Given her experience in Phoenix, why would she dive head first again into the arms of danger without even thinking to ask Edward and the rest of the Cullens if they had any solutions?  It is not like they couldn't secure her parents (though, admitedly, it'd be difficult to keep the supernatural secret from them).  Personally, I had to skim over that whole section thinking Bella should be introduced to the saying, "Fool me once, shame on you.  Fool me twice, shame on me."

Reviewer: renesmee26 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

i love it, thank you so much!!

 

Reviewer: Black Poyzen (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2013 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

Hi I really liked your story. I don't usually like third person but you made it work well. I have one critique which is you kind of rushed it in the last few chapters which is a shame bc I was really 'believing' the story until the ending. Also I do like how fast paced your story was in the beginning it was just right giving enough info without delving the story. Thanks!

Reviewer: JJPattz (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: JJPattz (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 24 Colors of the Dusk

As always, lovely!

Reviewer: JJPattz (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 16 Crawl Inside My Head With Me

I am adoring this story!!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

fantastic.  i found Detruit last nite and sat up until 4 this morning reading it.  Started again about 10 this morning, finished that and then started on this story.  (good thing i'm on vacation this week)  i loved both of them.  hope you have something new real soon. how about emailing me when you do?

Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

fantastic.  i found Detruit last nite and sat up until 4 this morning reading it.  Started again about 10 this morning, finished that and then started on this story.  (good thing i'm on vacation this week)  i loved both of them.  hope you have something new real soon. how about emailing me when you do?

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 2 An Empty Bloody Coffin

Interesting.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Looking Glass

Very nice beginning.

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

awsome story & omg i love powerful bella, the imagination you have is scary lol i loved this story thx soooo much

Reviewer: MrsDazzled (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Looking Glass

Oooooh, this sounds interesting.  And yay, the story's complete, no waiting for updates!  :o)

Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

Wow.  I loved the way Bella took care of the Volturi, especially Jane. I really enjoyed this story.  Thank you.

Reviewer: blackjacklily (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

A final review huh? Let me see...........I LOVED IT. Ok, so its not as eloquently put as your writing, but conveys the meaning nontheless. It was an amazing piece of work and I'm very sad to see it end. I think you kept true to the characters and weaved a fantastic story. Complete with the happy ending :-)

Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

i love it that bella got to do some ass-wooping to volturi, you rock, great story

Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 16 Crawl Inside My Head With Me

“Oompa-loompa? I hope not, those things creep me out,” Shit, they are scary, them oompa loompas arent they?

dreamer. <#

Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 All Part of the Plan

“When Bella walks, it’s dangerously,” snickered Emmett. always such a good ice breaker for serious conversation, is Emmett.

dreamer. <#

Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

Nice!  I really liked it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: hochexplosiv (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 24 Colors of the Dusk

This is a wonderfull story. I think she took him back a bit too fast after her first change. But other than that - just brilliant.

Reviewer: AngelAbrielle (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 25 This Magic

awwwwwwwwwwwwww

this story ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 16 Crawl Inside My Head With Me

so I still have a lot of questions, but basically Bella asked them all herself at the end there :)

BUT awww, I actually got tears in my eyes with this chapter, its was just ...wow..so amazing, im glad that Bella got her say, and hopefully made Edward realise what leaving her did (In New Moon, it kind of pissed me off that she was just a bit too forgiving straight away) but im all for happy endings so im glad shes not punishing him :)

So what next eh.....you're too unpredictable...but honestly....seriously...you have such an amazing talent!!!! I AM HOOKED  

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 15 Goodbye to You

That was sad, that she wanted so desperately her old life back.

How can she still think Edward doesnt want her....

i cant wait anylonger have to read the next chapter..

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 14 BEautiful Mess

WHAT THE HELL!!!

where have they gone???? Im literally sat on the edge of my seat here! and gasping and shouting 'what'!

Why would they need to get Bella away, and without Edward knowing???? OMG..So good, im glad im reading this now that its completed, the suspense of waiting for updates would torture me I think :)

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 13 This Moment Keeps on Moving

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW nice ending there!!! But I wish he'd hurry up and tell her he lovvvvves her!

The Jacob scene was very sweet too, and trust Jacob to put his foot in it and say something like that and push her away!

OKAY...now onto more E/B time....

Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 12 Living in Twilight

Oh my, wasnt expecting it to be this bad!! How will they gt around it, please dont tell me she dies in the end?!?! My heart cant take that :)

Great chapter though, and you can really feel the emotion coming from Edward, that must be just utterly heartbreaking for him to think about that happening to her. She needs to know he still loves herrrrrrrrrrrr

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