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Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

I really like the story its a shame you stoped writing it. Maybe in the future you will write some more. I hope so.

Reviewer: aaahhhtwilight (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm really confused about what happened to Bella. Does she have a eating disorder? Its really unclear.

Reviewer: TwilightFan2010 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

When are you going to update?

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 7

Update, please?  I'm begging here <3



Author's Response:

I don't have a beta... I'm sorry!!!

Reviewer: MonCherie (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 7

i love this story hope to get an update soon. I love that you took such a serious topic to explore and its great!

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 7

Please update?

Reviewer: Painfully_Addicted (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 7

More please =]

Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

Love your story! As far as all the anorexia/depression/cutting stories go (and there are so many of them), this one is by far the best. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oooo, this was soo good.  Yeah, poor Chariie, but at least he wised up.  I love that Edward is still attentive to Bella.  A lot of guys get kind of creeped out with the skeletal girl disease.  Sad, but true. 

Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 7

Poor Charile hell, poor everybody. I like that Edward still loves her.

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hmmm... Bella's not moving in with them? I wonder what's up with that...

I'm got my seatbelt and I'm ready for chapter 8!!! It looks like you know what is about to hit the fan!



Author's Response: oh yes, I know exactly what is ahead of us.  Writing it as we speak, actually.

Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wow! Poor Charlie. That is a harsh revelation to get.  I am glad that he decided to call Carlisle for help. It was great that Carlisle and all stepped up to talk to him.  I thought it was out of character for Carlisle to admit he knew Bella had a problem but did nothing. I feel so bad for all involved. It must be horrible to see your loved one doing that to them and be powerless to stop it. I think that you are doing a good job so far of describing the pain this is causing everyone. 

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

Well I am glad that Charlie has come to terms with it already. I am also glad that they all love her so much and are willing to help her.

Reviewer: mottmom (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

I read all the chapters today... this is a very interesting story... I'm glad Charlie came to his senses, although I had a feeling he would.  i look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

such a great chapter for sooo many reasons!

1~i loved the vampire comment! hehehe

2~Charlie Charlie Charlie...his reactions were perfect

3~Alice trying to dress Edward

 

just to name a few;)

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter!!  I am glad Charlie came to his senses!!  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

OMG, thank you, thank you, thank you! It is about time for an interference. Now I can't wait for chapter eight so please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 6

Finally an intervenion of some sorts. And she wanted to eat... that is good!!!!

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 5

I ache for Bella. And seriously... they need t intervene!

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is a good story. Though I think that Alice and Rosalie should intervene.  I mean they have waited four years....

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh, bella... you need help!

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

Anorexia... that explains everything. My sister has it... she says she is in recovery, but she has lapses.

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't understand. She wears her hair differently now. She dresses differently. Wears make up. Edward isn't that superfcial.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 7

This is a really scary story! You are really brave for writing a story like this I don't think that I could!! It is a well written story though and I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: KellyCullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 7

Poor Bella!! Well written :)

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