Aside from her rather quick change of mind... This was really cool!  Are you sure you wanna just keep it as a one-shot?  Now that's its been like a year since you wrote it :p Heh.

I really enjoyed this, and the idea has a ton of potential.  Maybe you could make a book out of it someday!  Just a thought.  Anyway, kudos for writing and sharing an original fic on this site!  

The name Amelia bring up great memories for me too!  She was one of my favorite book heroines back in the day :)