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Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
just a question would edward not aready know about this and would be more polite to lauren
Reviewer: Alice_is_my_leader (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
Jesus Christ even though i know this is fan fiction i sorta hate charlie right now. I feel awful for Lauren even moreso because even though she is fiction there are girls i am sure had something like this happen to them. Especially in small towns because everyone knows everybody.
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is pretty good, it really fleshes out Lauren's character. Ta Master of the Boot
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, Hadn't ever given lauren a thought. How sad. This was definitely a unique story and well written. WTG!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
You know, I can believe this of Charlie. He LAUGHED at his own daughter's broken hand. He CONGRATULATED the boy who assaulted her. Of course he would shut his eyes to a girl being molested by her father; such things don't HAPPEN in his perfect little town.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow. that's not something i've ever considered for lauren. But it does work. I like how you made her insecurities be about something deep instead of something artificial. you don't see alot of fics that understand lauren, but this one's great.
Author's Response: yeah, who would have known, right? thanks -koda
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh, that was so sad! I never imagined something like that being the real reason for Lauren's innate bitchiness. After something like that, who could blame her?
Author's Response: I know right? when I read her parts cropping up in the books, I wondered if she really wasn't as shallow that SM put her to be. so thanks for your review -koda
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was very good! And also very sad. Poor Lauren. What a way for Chief Swan to really drop the ball, in your story! Well written! I liked it!
Author's Response: thank you! -koda
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yay for cybercookies! Pretty good, I wish you would of have interaction with Bella so we could feel the hatred more than just the last few lines. But overall, I enjoyed. :)
Author's Response: you took away my review virginty. yay! I wanted to keep the focus on this "background" 'cause in the books there's so little about her. but thank you nonetheless. -koda
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