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Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 30
I totally called the prego Barbie. But it is a relief she miscarried. I can't believe Rob was actually talking about keeping up two families there for a minute! You are bad.... K the sex tape... Cam must've lost his damn mind. Didn't think of that? Isn't that security 101? Of course they got videotaped! I want to know about her calling him James right before ripping her panties off, though. was that supposed to be some kind of role playing? Kinky, I suppose... as long as he didn't break her leg and bite her, huh? anyway, then to have her daughter be the one to notify them of the video and auction?! Ha! Too funny!
Author's Response: Yep - you nailed that one!!! You could say "my" Rob is about 180 from the real one, but it's fun to make him s self-centered kind of mixed up little boy. I do love RP in real life, and think he's great.
You also picked up on the role playing - J loves her sexy bad boy, and James is the ultimate in that category. Her fav look/pose is his head cocked to the side with the smirky smile ala "You brought a snack" and again in the ballet studio. You've very good!! We think alike, and I love it.
Now that "Big Brother" has come out of the closet, so to speak, we all know on some level there are security camers everywhere. But in the heat of the moment, you just go with it and throw caution to the wind. Never expecting it to go any further than in the security tape archives.
I actually do have a daughter - Ronata - who lives in New York and her personality is exactly that of Rhonda in my story. She loves reading about herself, and has finally gotten over the fact that mom knows all about sex, and seems to really enjoy it!!
Thanks you so much for commenting. I can't express how much that means to me!!
Sheri17Awhile
Reviewer: maddy green eyes (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2011 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 24
hey,
I have actually seen this story so any times but just never read it until now... and I am hooked! I have gotten up to this chapter in just a few hours because I havent been able to stop reading! It is so well written with an amazingly raw and deep story line.
This is why I love this sight because there are genuinely amazing stories and not just stupid little fluff written by 12 year olds that are poorly constructed and spelt!
I look forward to reading the rest of the chapters you have written and the ones that are yet to come.
xx
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!! For reading my story and for leaving a comment. It means the world to hear back from readers.
This is the first "book" of a trilogy on Cam and J - Escape, Escape Into Midnight, and The Ultimate Escape, which
I am currently writing. Please, stay with me and please, keep giving me feedback. Glad you're enjoying the
ride so far - it just gets better and better!!
Fondly - Sheri17Awhile
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 29
Uh oh. Don't tell me Barbie is carrying another Baby Pattinson!
Author's Response: Stick around!! You just might be surprised. Thanks for reading my story and a BIG THANK YOU for leaving
a comment!! It means more than you know!!
Warm Regards - Sheri17Awhile
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 29
Hey soul Siser!
Whoo hoo!! Pam and Ryan are with us, makin' the SS and IS complete! This is one of my favorite chapters...as you know! Loved seein' Cam's ass again and scorin' jackpots with Kellan! Too funny! You really know how to bring us all together in an awesome way!
I know what's cummin' up next, sweetie, and I still can't wait! This is soooo good! So keep us cummin' with MORE PLEASE, ASAP!!!
Love you, darlin',
Ellen xx
Author's Response: Thanks, Soul Sister, for hanging in there with me again. And an EXTRA BIG THANKS for faithfully leaving a
comment. You KNOW how much that means to us. I hope you're enjoying revamping Escape as much as
I am enjoying Keep Me In Your Memory. Love You Lots!!!
Hugs - Sheri17Awhile
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 28
These two just never get old...
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment!!! It really means a lot to know someone is reading my story.
Please stay with me - there's lots more fun and frivolity with Cam and J cuming right up!!!
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 28
Hey Soul sister!
WOW! It was even better the second time around! Sooooo hot and sexy!
The wedding and reception were awesome and the two new hook-ups made me smile!
Rob is an ass here! Poor Barbie! Maybe she really does deserve someone else...Alex?
Kellan and Ellen always thrill me and you didn't disappoint! Loved the teasing by Jackson and Ashley! Poor Kellan! Good thing he's such a good sport!
Beautiful love scene at the end , sweetie, and it makes me want MORE PLEASE, ASAP! I just love the fantasies! lol.
Love you, darlin'!
Ellen xx
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 27
Hey Soul Sister!
Another great chapter full of fun, friends, foolery and fuckery! I'm lovin' the little tweaks to the original and you know, of course, that I always laugh at what you have the prince sayin' and doin'!!
Lookin' forward as always, to MORE PLEASE, ASAP! It always makes me smile when I see that you have updated!
Love yyou, darlin'!
Ellen xx
Reviewer: calicohearts (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 26
I love this story! Tho' I doubt Cam is anything like this, it's a fun story. I don't know why you don't have more reviews, but I really hope you continue to update soon and often! Unfortunately, I am starting to lean more toward finished stories, since some of the ones I really get into, even with lots of chapters posted, for some reason , quit being updated. I really hope this isn't one of them, like I said, it's a fun story!
Author's Response: Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!!! You have no idea how totallyl happy you've made me. I am FOR SURE finishing this story - actually, it's the first in a trilogy - the next "book" is Escape Into Midnight, followed by The Ultimate Escape, that I'm now writing chapter 12 of. I'll probably have to run them all together on here, so I can keep going with my wonder beta Jakeward.
I am a total and complete Cam h00r <blush> so I tend to make him larger than life, but pleeeeeze sitck with me and pleeeeeze post comments. I am so glad you're enjoying my efforts because I sure love living in my little fantasy world!!!
Thanks again - Sheri 17Awhile
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 25
Hey Sweetie!
Another great chapte, althogh terribly sad! That Mark could have been so vile is hard to take! And poor Janelle. How awful to live with such anger and hatred, not to mention the sexual and mental abuse by her father!
Glad that J is gettin' close to her kids again and that Cam is accepting, and has been accepted.
You KNOW how much U love this story and, even tho I know what's comin', I want MORE PLEASE!
Love ya, darlin',
Ellen xx
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 23
Hey sweetie!
As much as I love the private moments betwen you and Cam, I was glad to realize some much needed girl time! Barbie needed our support and comfort. I'm sure that there was a lot of tellin' goin' on and it was fun. And dinner,,,I'm so hungry for Grandma's Spaghetti!!! Yum!! One of my fave "girl chapters".
Now lets see what the immediate future holds in store for all of us!! Lookin' forward to readin' MORE PLEASE!
Love you, darlin' soul sister!
Ellen xx
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 23
Hey sweetie!
As much as I love the private moments betwen you and Cam, I was glad to realize some much needed girl time! Barbie needed our support and comfort. I'm sure that there was a lot of tellin' goin' on and it was fun. And dinner,,,I'm so hungry for Grandma's Spaghetti!!! Yum!! One of my fave "girl chapters".
Now lets see what the immediate future holds in store for all of us!! Lookin' forward to readin' MORE PLEASE!
Love you, darlin' soul sister!
Ellen xx
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 22
Okay sweet soul sister,
I really enjoyed revisitin' Branson and your romp in the Lutz' maintenance shed! lol And the time on the mountain was exquisite!
I think that Cam made the right decision regardin' little Leigh. And he was right about you bein' her favorite people when she gets older. She will bring the whole Gigandet family closer and have a wonderful life...as will he and Sheri!
Now, I'm really ready for the filmin' of Midnight Sun, so get on with it, darlin' and give us MORE PLEASE!
Love ya, sister mine!
Ellen xx
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 21
Hey Soul Sister!
You KNOW how I love this chapter! Sheri and Cam visitin' "the mountain" and confidin' in and askin' advice from Kellan and Ellen. I do believe, however, that the decision to adopt Leigh out had already been made and Cam just wanted affirmation that it was a good descision. Smart of Sheri to think of Kelsy and Jason!
You made me hungry with all the Italian meats and cheeses and peppers and sausages! yummmmm!
So, now they're all off to a fun *wink* filled day in Branson! I know that it will be awesome and very memorable!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Love ya, sweetie!
Ellen xx
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 20
Hey, sweet Soul Sister!
This has always been one of my favorite chapters! A beautiful weddin', an awesome surprise b'day party, and Rob's drunken debaucle, includin' the fart!! :lol: Of course, Eileen's, Barbie's and Linda's reactions were so cute and spot on!!
Excited about your upcomin' trip to "the mountain"...another of my fave chappies!
The arrival of little Everleigh is puttin' a damper on the previous festivities, but I know "the rest of the story". and it's a good one! In fact everythin' about this story is good! I LOVE IT!
Lookin' forward to the next chapter and, of course....MORE PLEASE!
Love you, darlin'
Ellen
Author's Response: You sure know how to make my day, Soul Sister!! Thanks for the love. Amd for staying with me - AGAIN
Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh my God. You seriously had me scared out of my mind for a few chappie there. Like seriously, I was physically distressed. I felt quite nauesous (spelling?) when Sheri's mind had shut down or whatever. But I'm over it and I'm about to go read chapter 12 again (I think) because I absolutely adored it! One piece of advice I have for you: ease up on the comma usage. It's not really bad, but since I'm a stickler for grammar, anyone using too many commas bugs me a bit. Other than that though, I absolutely love this story! I do have to admit that I wasn't sure if I would like it when I read the summary, because I've never really given much thought to Cam, but I adore it and I hope you post soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!! It means everything to get responses!!!! I'm glad you like the story and have given an interest to Cam. I personally think he's the hottest man on the planet, but that's just me. I KNOW I have a comma fetish and I am really trying to keep it under control. I am getting better!!! I used to think "when in doubt - comma" but now it's just the opposite. Glad you're sticking with me. I promise it just keeps on getting better!! There is a sequel called Escape Into Midnight. I'm not going to be allowed to post it here for administrative reasons, but may put it on other sites.
Thanks again for showing some love for the story, and for my dream man, Cam!!! Please comment again on the next chapters. It really means the world to know someone out there likes what I'im doing.
Sincerely - Sheri 17awhile
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 19
FINALLY!!!
Oh yeah, that's what I'm talkin' 'bout!! Yes, Soul Sister, hot hot hot!
So glad that you are finally home, well, and back in Camelot! New furniture in the great room and kitchen, but the King's chamber remains the same! Oh yeah!
You know how much I love this story, darlin', and can hardly wait to read more of it...AGAIN!
Thanks, sweetie, for keepin' me wantin'....MORE PLEASE!
Love you!
Ellen VvV
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh sweet Soul Sister!
You have to come back to us, darlin'! We're all waiting for you! Tell us that you're comin' back by givin' us, MORE PLEASE!
Love you!
Ellen
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh, sweet Soul Sister!
This chapter always makes me want to sit down and cry! Such a sad and traumatic time! I hope we'll get thru this soon and Sheri will be home in Camalot with her Cam! I know there's more to come!! So give us MORE PLEASE!
Love ya, sweet darlin'!
Ellen
Reviewer: ravendiva (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 17
Okay, I feel like I need to go to rehab. What the hell just happened here? Dude totally unexpected
Author's Response: THANK YOU sooooo much for responding!!!! I was beginning to wonder if anyone was reading my story. Stay with me and find out whether or not Sheri's world is real or fantasy. Please respond more - it means to everything to know someone out there likes what I'm doing - or at least has an appreciation for the HOTTEST MAN ON THE PLANET!!!
Sheri17Awhile
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 16
Whoa, soul Sister! That was one heavy chappie! Scarey to say the least! But the end seems to be heading back to normal...or is it? I have a feeling that the angst is just beginning! So, please sweet darlin'......
MORE PLEASE.
Ellen
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 15
Okay, you got ME this time! The tears are flowin' and the snot is flyin'! This chapter gets me everytime I read it darlin'! so emotional!
Well, I'm glad you're home. So what happens now? Do you believe him. It won't be eay to fix the trust--for either of you--but I know you will! And I know I'm gonna cry again!
MORE PLEASE!
Love you, sweet Sister!
Ellen
PS, Glad I was able to help a little! lol
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 14
Hey Soul Sister!
You know that this chapter is NOT one of my faves! I hate seeing Sheri in such a vulnerable state of insecure distress! After everything with his family comes together...then this! Grrr!
Well, now we have to wait til the next chappie before we know...the reat of the story! So please sweet darlin' Get it here so that we can have.........
MORE PLEASE!
Love you!
Ellen
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 13
Okay sweet Soul Sister!
You know how much i love this writty of yours! It's even better the second and third time around!
So glad that Jilly and Ellen could be there for J, even if only to listen and comfort! Glad that Kristen is trying to rebuild her relationship with her mom!! And the lemons? MMMMMMMMM!!
More please, darlin'. and FAST!!!
Love you!
Ellen
Author's Response: Thanks for hangin in there with me - again. I agree with you - we read the original so long ago, it's great to read it again, and remember some of our great moments on paper. We've come a long way, Baby!!!!
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
Damn the parents, soul sister! Cam loves J and that's the end of it! What a come back from Sheri to the older Gigandets! Good job! Hot lovin' sweetie!! Oh VERY Hot! And I think that there's a very good explaination as to why Cam wants to keep J hidden, and it has nothing to do with being ashamed of her!
I'm ready fore More, please!!
Love this and you, darlin'
Ellen
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh yeah, that's what I like sweet soul sister! A little phone relief and a little finger action to help the in-between times! You know how much I love this, everytime I read it!! And I love the beginnings of our special friendship!! Waiting for the next one, as patiently as always...NOT!
More please!!
Love ya darlin'!!
Ellen
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