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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 16

love this story. have u taken a break from posting or did u give up? just remember that u have many fans and your an amazing writer and dont be afraid of messing up

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2012 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 16

ive been waiting for more posts for a while. have u finished the story or r u just noit able to post anymore chapters?

Reviewer: Amicia (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 16

Have you given up on this story, or just taken a break?

Reviewer: Amicia (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 16

I LOVE this story!!!  So good! I can't wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

oh gosh.

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the comments! And thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh Dear.  Very enjoyable. The story makes the anomalies inconsequential.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 5

Now that sounds like an Emmett-ism...payback time. 

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 3

I like the way you had Emmett take his transformation...especially his thinking screaming may be unmanly but not caring.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

Short but sweet.  Nice chapter.

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very enjoyable.  I like the use of present day perspective and language...uncomplicated.

Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter - I loved the ending :)

Reviewer: fibrin (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 13

hey ur back but awww small chapter........ waiting for em n rose back soon....

Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great chapter - I can't wait to see Emmett's proposal :)

Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 12

No I like your take on vampire mating, I always got the impression it was a quick sudden thing and then you couldn't go back.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I find the whole "mating" thing really interesting.

Reviewer: fibrin (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 12

wow!!!!! plz update soon.... i like how Em says exactly what he thinks...

Author's Response:

Yeah, I let Em too.  I've completed the story on and am adding it slowly here.

Reviewer: missellie (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 12


Author's Response:

The story is completed on, but I'm slowly updating it here. It takes awhile because it has to be validated, but the story is finished.

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 12

You write Emmett and his positive enthusiastic 'what you see is what you get' attitude so well. Im loving this story!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: SoTeamEdward101 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 2


Reviewer: SoTeamEdward101 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, this is really goof! Well done


Reviewer: vassorules (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 11

ohh i love this story....great job ...please keep updating.....

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: StupidLamb626 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 11

Hmmm, hope Emmett finds out what he wants to know soon...........

Reviewer: fibrin (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

i love this story.....rosalie n em rock...... more humour plz... emmetts style... will be waiting for an update....

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 11

Emmett is surely the happiest vampire ever. I love the way you have written him so content with his new life.

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh you wrote this so beautifully! This is the best sense of closure for Emmett and his brothers, for them to all know each other would be okay about his disappearance and  all would be happy for each one's future. I loved every word!

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

I'd love to read the rest of the meeting between Jack and Rosalie..... I really like your story!!!

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