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Reviewer: Twirob (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2022 12:45 PM · On: Elevators, Strangers and Surprises

AWESOME !!! Great little story ;) Thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: petmom1213 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2020 05:54 PM · On: The Naked Guy Upstairs

I love this story. It's hard for me to read as I have only ever read on fanfiction. I was really hoping there was an epilogue because I wanted to se the flash forward come to fruition. Anyway this is a great story. Thank you.

Mickey Hall

Reviewer: Luna4ever13 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2020 01:56 AM · On: Illegal Contact

I absolutely loved this story!! It was amazing!

Reviewer: ImYours1901 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2020 05:26 AM · On: Beautiful, Dirty, Rich

Ohhhhhhh!!! i loved this fic so much, so soo good. really good character development as well bc what edward and bella were doing at the beginning was not healthy at all.

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2019 01:10 AM · On: Illegal Contact

I don't think I would touch Edward f I found out he went out with Lauren gross. I would have to ask for test proving he does not have an STD

Reviewer: janekatz2468 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2019 03:52 PM · On: Nineteen Canvasses

Inspiring love story

Reviewer: janekatz2468 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2019 03:52 PM · On: Nineteen Canvasses

Inspiring love story

Reviewer: kfoll (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2019 03:38 AM · On: ...Becomes the Swan

Bollocks. He f**ked those women because he wanted to and they wanted him to. All this crap about not wanting to feel anything is absolute hogwash. That is why Bella is NEVER allowed to deal with her issues the same way. DOUBLE STANDARDS and they stink. Shameful. I’m out.

Reviewer: kfoll (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2019 03:30 AM · On: ...Becomes the Swan

Yep virgin. Knew it. What absolute bollocks. If staying untouched is proof of Bellas pure love for Edward, what does that say about him? This idiot needs a psychiatrist. What kind of retarded idiot allows what a boy says to them in the heat of the moment affect them for eight years like this? Ridiculous moron.

Reviewer: kfoll (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2019 03:25 AM · On: ...Becomes the Swan

Hope he makes an appointment at the STD clinic too. Don’t tel us? Bella is still a virgin? Cliched.

Reviewer: kfoll (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2019 03:17 AM · On: ...Becomes the Swan

Drama queen.

Reviewer: campyrs (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2019 11:32 AM · On: Illegal Contact

This was an awesome story!! Thank you very much.

Reviewer: petmom1213 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 11:09 AM · On: The Naked Guy Upstairs

Beautifully written. I love this story. I wish I could download it.

Mickey

Reviewer: petmom1213 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 11:09 AM · On: The Naked Guy Upstairs

Beautifully written. I love this story. I wish I could download it.

Mickey

Reviewer: turtle1954 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2018 05:46 PM · On: ...Becomes the Swan

Will this story ever be finished?

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2018 07:17 PM · On: The Naked Guy Upstairs

Lmao!! I forgot how funny the movie scene was!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2018 01:55 PM · On: The Naked Guy Upstairs

GAHH!! He kills me every time I read these two chapters!! Dayum!!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2018 02:45 AM · On: The Naked Guy Upstairs

Lol! Oopsy, she has been found out.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2018 01:56 AM · On: The Naked Guy Upstairs

Lol!!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2018 01:40 AM · On: The Naked Guy Upstairs

I read this the first few times on ffn when I stumbled across it about ten years ago. It’s definitely time for a reread!! 😊

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2017 04:19 PM · On: Illegal Contact

I'm excited that I finally found this again.

Reviewer: misslibby (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2017 02:00 PM · On: Illegal Contact

One of the best stories in the entire Fandom. Seriously.

Reviewer: Sury (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 03:24 AM · On: Beautiful, Dirty, Rich

Thank you!

Reviewer: Kriscmill (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2016 10:07 AM · On: My Brother's Best Friend

It really makes no sense that a 23 year old can't be left home alone. I get you're trying to say that Emmett and Charlie are just so cute and overprotective, but at the point that a woman has graduated college, is working on her masters, and is a self-sufficient adult, it's no longer "cute". It seems controlling and down right abusive. Way to set women's equality back and make it seem normal for a woman to be controlled by a man to the point she's not allowed to stay in an effing cabin by herself for a couple hours without everyrone freaking out.

I really tried to enjoy this story, but the fact that so much of the plot hinges on the ridiculous fact that Bella isn't allowed to be left alone made the whole thing pretty hard to swallow.

Oh, and the level of miscommunication between Edward and Bella is over the top, frustrating, and just not believable. This story might be fun for a thirteen year old to read, but not very good from an adult perspective.

Reviewer: twiclare (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2016 08:09 AM · On: Illegal Contact

Aww, that was sweet! Loved the story, thanks for sharing!

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