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Reviewer: K Landers (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2021 09:57 AM · On: Moonshadow

I'm pretty late to the party, and I don't know if you'll ever even see this, but this was an amazing AU story of Jake & Bella.  Extremely well written and I absolutely love your portrayal of Jake.  Thanks for writing it and sharing it!

Reviewer: Chelle711 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2020 02:24 PM · On: Expectations...

Sweet ending.

Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2019 04:35 PM · On: Moonshadow

I love Jacobs wisdon about life and mending. I think he's an old soul himself :).

Author's Response:

Hello! What a treat to hear that someone is reading this little fic after so long.

This story grew out of a desire to explore the characters more fully--and to live vicariously through them :D Of all the characters in the books, Jake is the one who actually GREW, handled pain and loss instead of running from it (mostly.) I just knew he could turn into an amazing man. One of the joys of fic is developing all the "what ifs."


Thanks for reading <><3

Reviewer: Karmabites76 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 12:04 AM · On: Expectations...

Love it! *Fan girl squee*

Author's Response:

The Muse wasn't done with me it seems ... Thanks for reading <><3

Reviewer: Karmabites76 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2013 11:25 PM · On: Moonshadow

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!!!

Author's Response:

It warms my heart to know that people are still reading this fic! So glad you enjoyed it! <><3

Reviewer: EngagedThompson12 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 09:28 AM · On: Expectations...

Awesome. That ending is so cute. I loved this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing--so glad you enjoyed the fic. It was a real pleasure to write <><3

Just curious, have you read the rest of the Moonshadow Continuum?

Reviewer: AuroraBelle (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 01:04 PM · On: The Color of Rain

Oh wow. I love Seth and Lily! I have to say, I always imagined him being with a Lily too! Something about the name Lily Clearwater.... haha. Great work! - Aurora xx

Author's Response:

I'm usually kind of leary about alt. POV's of the same material, not the least that it's very difficult to get the "voices" right --clear and different enough to give freshness to a plot that the reader already knows. In this instance, Lily was SO VIVID in my head that I simply had to write her experience. These two are just so cute together :D

So glad you enjoyed TCoR, thanks for the reviews. <><3

Reviewer: AuroraBelle (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 12:23 PM · On: The Color of Rain

Fantastic story :) really enjoyed reading - Aurora xx

Reviewer: Sawyer_88 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 12:22 PM · On: Expectations...

This was a really sweet one shot. I enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing :)

Author's Response:

It was so nice to take them on the next step or the journey ... So glad you enjoyed it <><3

Reviewer: seece (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 08:30 AM · On: Expectations...

Beautiful!!  Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! So glad you enjoyed it <><3

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 06:52 PM · On: Expectations...

Diamondheart!  I did the biggest happy dance when I saw this post!!!!  Welcome Back!!!!!!!  I can't wait to read this story!!!!! I love it already! lol

Take care, Dixie

Author's Response:

Always good to hear from you, my sweet--hope the fic lived up to your, uh, expectations :) The Muse was gracious this time <><3

Reviewer: Iridescka711 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 02:46 PM · On: 93 Million Miles (two shot)

Umm.... WOW!!! I'd rate that at 1,000,000 if the site would let me.

Author's Response:

High praise indeed! I felt so ... naughty? daring? empowered? sliding TWO lemons into a single one shot... Glad it was a hit! <><3

Reviewer: twilight_sparkle (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2012 07:32 PM · On: The Fractured Angel

Let me just say first that I am completely new to fan fiction, so when I finally went looking I was thrilled to find such high quality material in existence. In the past few days, I devoured your Jacob and Bella stories. They truly fill a need for one who rooted for Jacob! The characters ring so true that I wondered if Stephanie Meyer was publishing alternate stories (with the steamy scenes left in!!!). Can't wait for you to continue Edward's POV. I hope your life settles down a bit so the process flows easier. 

Reviewer: herperswife (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 05:06 PM · On: Gravity Never Sleeps

Very well written and apt evaluation of how kids see us older folks-we certainly DON'T forget about sex! ; )

Author's Response:

*grin* No, we certainly don't! It's been so lovely to hear from other ficsters of a certain age ... plainly a lot of us felt the lack of this kind of Saga lovin'. So glad you enjoyed it <><3

Reviewer: xfirespritex (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 08:08 PM · On: 93 Million Miles (two shot)

So, this was amazing. And I love you. The end.

Author's Response:

Thank you, darling. Funny thing about a story, there never really seems to be an end... Glad you liked it :D  <><3

Reviewer: babylove 2 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 10:18 AM · On: 93 Million Miles (two shot)


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Reviewer: lovejacob3008 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 03:34 AM · On: 93 Million Miles (two shot)

lemony romantic, definitely


Author's Response:

Definitely what one would call a labor of glad you enjoyed it! <><3

Reviewer: tunde-tre (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Gravity Never Sleeps

I think for once I'm grateful that SM didn't really got into Charlie and Sue's relationship. She wouldn't have done such a perfect job with it! 

I know I'm so late to this, I had it on my 'to read' list for eaons but I'm sooooo glad that I finally read it! I'm not that far from Sue's age and I can totally relate to her feelings about herself as about how Leah would see her.

Muchly appreciated that Charlie isn't a grumpy, it's-all-too-much-for-me guy but someone who was "active" and not abnormally absent from his own life. This Charlie could be a role model for Bella!

Anyway...the lemony goodness was hot and yummy as only after 40 can be!!!

Absolutely fantastic job!

Love, Tunde

Author's Response:

Thank you, darling! So glad you enjoyed it.

In a fandom rife with either double-virgin sex *whew* or porn-stars with the same names as SM's characters I just had to make a stand for reasonable, loving experience - and the fact that grown up sex IS BETTER!!!

The vision of them going about their daily live for years, carrying the sweet secret of being each others' first loves, just wouldn't let me go. Probably the ultimate extended foreplay...

Good to hear from you, Carmen <><3

Reviewer: MrsJacobBlack0028 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Jacob's Ladder

That was amazing! i love Jacob!!

Author's Response:

I love him, too...he's spoiled me for any other man! Glad you enjoyed it! <><3

Reviewer: MrsJacobBlack0028 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Jacob's Ladder

That was amazing! i love Jacob!!

Reviewer: Lyra810509 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Moonshadow

Love it, great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Even tho' I've written several stories since (some are companion fics to MS), nothing compares to the pleasure of writing this particular fic - glad you enjoyed it <><3

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 11:23 AM · On: You Belong to Me

I like your view of Leah. Now I've been deverginized of femslash :)

Author's Response:

I'd never had the slightest idea of writing a slash piece of any type - but the Muse doesn't necessarily let me chose...This scenario kind of makes sense, tho' doesn't it? <><3

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 09:42 AM · On: The Color of Rain

Seth is yummy indeed! Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

Isn't he a darling? I don't know that I could have been as mad at him as Lily was...but then I had the advantage of knowing the outcome! So glad you enjoyed it <><3

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 08:45 AM · On: The Color of Rain

Awe, live at first we know she was there right along with him

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 09:29 AM · On: The Moonshadow Continuum

I just wanted to say that I admire how dedicated you are to your stories even after 2 years! I admit in my 1.5 years of FF it took me awhile to even think about looking at a j/b fic! But I'm hooked! ;) I like your humor, and attention to detail and I look forward to reading everything else on your profile!


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