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Reviews For White Night
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 07:54 PM · On: Phoenix Rising

Was always curious how Edward would take the news that Alice and Jasper lost Bella.  Especially since Alice claimed they could take care of her and watch over her.  Very surprising that Alice didn't see Bella's decision to leave them before she did it. interesting that Edward stole a car to reach the dance studio.  Nice knowing his thoughts as he sucked the venom out and drank her blood.  Very hard decision on his part to stop before he actually killed her.  Since her blood was so fulfilling for him.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 04:16 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

So nice to see a carefree and happy Edward.  It's so unusual.  It's refreshing and delightful.  The immense joy he felt when he heard the words "I love you," from Bella in her sleep talk.  Also the the feelings of getting one over on Rosalie.  Edward having  more control than taking Bella in the meadow and being completely happy with Bella to bout.  Making Rosalie angry in the process additional bonus.  Surprising your stud brother that you have not only a singer, but you were able to kiss her and she's still alive.  Amazed the entire family with the exception of Alice, who already saw it all.  Edward and his happy feet making swift steps back to his beloved.  Looking forward to additional Edward POV's from Twilight.

Reviewer: dc_author (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 04:21 PM · On: Phoenix Rising


Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 10:06 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps


Reviewer: Lur2 (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2010 11:15 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps

That was beautiful! Is there any more chapter. Love your writing.

Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 03:57 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

My favorite part is everyone's reactions & thoughts when Edward comes home-  I love reading 'happy Edward'.

Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 12:36 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps

What do you think Bella was dreaming about when she says 'Not for me' in her sleep?  Look for the answer in a soon to be created forum for my writing here on

I think that was her reaction to Edward's perfection, in her mind.  She never thought she was good enough for him, and that seemed to the subconscious manifestation; "Edward's not for me".  It seemed obvious to me.

Author's Response:

And you're right!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 08:26 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

Dear Blondie,

first heard First Light on iFic, love your writing. I am too uncool for the forum but I'd guess "not for me" refers to when Edward said that things would be better if Bella stayed away from him. I dunno, but you rock my socks! Who needs lemonade when you've got awesome edward POV!!




Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 10:54 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

I first saw your work as a result of  I very rarely read fanfiction because it's usually so untrue to the author's intent.  I am thoroughly enjoying everything you've written, mostly because it feels like Ms. Meyer could have written it.  Thank you! for sharing your work.  It is a joy to read.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the high compliment!  I'm glad you're enjoying my stories - SM created such interesting characters, I think it's fun to explore them as they are (for the most part).  I do dabble outside her definitions occasionally, but it's her Edward and Bella I love most, and strive to stay true to them in all my canon writing.

thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 09:37 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps

nice place 2 stop the storry.(joking) is there a sequil?

Reviewer: linda (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 11:38 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps

Precious interpretation.


Reviewer: cilou6 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 12:03 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

I won't be very original though...

Thank you!

Reviewer: swross (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 01:48 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

I am reading this for the second time- read it as one of my first fan fics several months ago on and just found you again on twilighted. I think your pieces are some of the very best fan fiction out there- you definately have Edward "in your head" and you write very well. I would love to see you do Eclipse and Breaking Dawn in Edward's POV!!

Reviewer: jo4twilight (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 05:48 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps

What a great way to capture Edward's love of Bella.  Love seeing into EPOV!! Thanks!  I will be reading more of your stories...can't wait!

Reviewer: beck943 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:14 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

I really liked this!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Phoenix Rising

Hey!! How about the PROM from Edward's POV? I have not seen anyone tackle that...... You did a great job with Phoenix Rising!! Thanks!!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Phoenix Rising

WOW!! How tense! SO good!! I love E's pov, and you did a great job! Keep on writing! PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 06:42 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

EXCELLENT!!! Loved this. I LOVE E's pov!!!!

Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:13 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

This was so sweet.  When Edward said, “Better than I had ever imagined," I seriously gaffawed.  It is charming how excited he is about her coming to the house.  I would love to know what Edward was thinking as she met his family and saw his room for the first time.  (Perhaps that could be your next one-shot.)  : )

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:14 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps

First of all, an enchanting PoV, but of course the Twilight obsessed reader cannot forget the pain  to come. New Moon has yet to happen...

I cannot access the forum, dammit. I cannot make the so called Edward (he wishes) to answer me and the password I was given does not work, nor do I know how to change it to a simple and manageable one.

What should I do? I am so frustrated...

Reviewer: kkendall (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 12:55 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps

Wish it was longer...

Reviewer: sleeplessnight (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:34 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

wow that little one shot filled me with love =D you truely are an absulutley great author

Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:40 AM · On: As Bella Sleeps

Nicely done.  You write Edward so well.  Why can't human guys be like him. Where is my Edward? Sighs...

Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Phoenix Rising

Love, Love, Love it!!  I wish you would continue it!!

Reviewer: 17KCullen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:54 PM · On: As Bella Sleeps

loved it

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