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Reviews For Baby Sister
Reviewer: RebeccaJ1973 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2018 11:39 PM · On: Growing Pains

This story has been the best of the four in this series.  I soooo wish you'd finish it.  Normally I won't even begin a story that is not complete, but having read the first three, I figured I'd go ahead... never realizing that this one would be much, much more attention-grabbing.  **sigh** Now I won't get to find out how the Volturi situation plays out. :(

Reviewer: RebeccaJ1973 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2018 07:35 PM · On: Dreamwalker

"...why in the name of little green apples..."  lol!!!  Never heard that particular expression before, but I'm going to try to remember to use it the next time something like "why in the world" or "why in the name of God" comes up - just to see the other person's reaction if nothing else. :D

Reviewer: sarahaimee (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2014 08:45 AM · On: Growing Pains

When are you posting the next update??? 

I'm loving what you're doing with the story, and mixing canon with au. 

Very well written :) 

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2013 11:38 AM · On: Rebellion

  Hey, Becky!  I was feeling nostalgic of some old favorites, so I'm rereading the Baby Sister.

  And, since I didn't comment it first time, let me say that I liked you jumping the whole birthday fiasco, going straight to what I like to call "the good part", Leia returning for Bella.

  Also, that she was conscientious enough to not presume anything.  She, at least, checked if Edward was right before intervening.  He should have done that, the arrogant fool.  But he evolved visibly along your story, which is another point in your favor.

  So, oh loved author of mine, any chance we will hear more about Leia, Adam & Co.?        ;)

Reviewer: Black Poyzen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Growing Pains

hi! i just found ur series n have read all of them in about aweek so could u pretty please finis this story i cant wait to see what happens next! and actually this is one of my fav chapters since charlie gets to meet nessie. thanks

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2012 08:35 PM · On: Rebellion

I just realized that in the book they arrive in Italy on St. Marcus's Day. They don't here because it was the meadow scene that led to this. Is it sad that I said all of Aro's lines out loud in his voice after I read them the first time? And then I went over the origional scene from the movie in my head, with the voices and the movements... "Goodbye, my young friends!" -RPW

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 12:58 PM · On: Growing Pains

There's one thing Lizzy and I have in common: We both hate shoes.

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 12:29 PM · On: Growing Pains

IT'S ABOUT TIME, ADAM!!!! We've beenwaiting for, what? Three books now?

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 11:53 AM · On: Growing Pains

I translated the Italian words and, well, someone needs to wash out Felix's mouth with soap! I'm sure Adam would be more than happy to volunteer! ;)

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 10:16 AM · On: Growing Pains

Did Jake seriously just... I mean, he really... What was he?... Why did he?... Oh, I need to sit down!... *mumbles incoherently about stupid boys*

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 09:49 AM · On: Growing Pains

Thank you SO MUCH for keeping it PG-13! I've made the mistake of reading several NC-17 stories before checking the ratings, and, um, yeah... Anyways, LeiaXAdam "FOREVER AND ALWAYS" LOL

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 08:15 AM · On: Growing Pains

Are they gonna call her Lizzy or Renesmee? Cuz so far in this story they've used both names, and, well, yeah...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 06:56 AM · On: Growing Pains

I was all "Grrrrr! Really!" When she didn't start having contractions when she dropped the cup! Seriously, Edward! Why'd you have to hold her back?

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 06:28 AM · On: Growing Pains

Daaaaaaawwwwww! I just hope they don't get too smutty...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 05:56 AM · On: Growing Pains

I swear to God that if I had been in the room when Alice said that about Adam and Leia, I would have smacked that spikey-haired head right off her shoulders. You know, if I were capible of doing such a thing...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 04:29 AM · On: Growing Pains

The least you could have done was make Bella ask Leia to get Rosalie on board with it! I mean, seriously! I just had a thought! If Bella actually had Renesmee in Alaska, then Irina will know that it's not an immortal child. So where will the Volturi come in? I'm confused. Also, funny you should mention orange juice in your end notes, cuz I'm drinking some right now, LOL.

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 03:12 AM · On: Growing Pains

Oh! Question! Does Seth imprint on Renesmee? That would be cool!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 05:05 PM · On: Growing Pains

"Ooh! Strawberries!" I love straberries, too! Why don't I get strawberries? But I really like your story. I'm obbsessed with the Baby Sister series! No joke!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Growing Pains

That last bit made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! Which is a rare feeling fo r me because I'm not a very mushy person, so...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 04:26 PM · On: Growing Pains

There is a line between selflessness and stupidity, and I think Bella has crossd that line way to many times...

Reviewer: laurieglory (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 08:17 PM · On: Growing Pains

Hello~ I have read all of the Little Sister stories in the past week. SO GOOD!!! Noticed in the AN that you mentioned possibly finishing by Christmas. Its June 2012 now so I was wondering if you were on hiatus or maybe not finshing the story?? Thanks for writing such a wonder series :)

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 01:07 PM · On: Turning Point

And now Carlisle knows what every father of a teenage girl goes through! Glad he got the complete experience... lol

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 04:11 PM · On: Turning Point

I am so jealous of Leia! Why does SHE get Adam? I want him, too, ya know!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 11:30 AM · On: Rebellion

I knew that Leia would have to suffer through dinner with the Volturi as soon as Aro said to wait for Heidi... OMG poor Leia!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 06:12 AM · On: Dreamwalker

Yay! I love this story! It's so cool!

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