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Penname: ghostwriter [ Contact]
Real name: Ally Kraai
Status: Member
Member Since: January 12, 2010
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I am a 39 year old female that lives in Minnesota, I have been writing short stories for the last 20+ years. None of my works are published, but I hope to someday publish one of them.
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Summary:   Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? AU/AH/OOC/adult language and lemons ensue!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 131791
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2011
Reviewer: ghostwriter Signed
Date: October 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Waiting
I like what you've written so far; however, I'm a little confused.... near the middle you wrote that we would find out what Jake would tell the family about Aro's connection to this whole situation, but, then you wrote "over the next week, Rose's condition was touch and go" with no mention of what Jake was going to tell the family...
Reviewer: ghostwriter Signed
Date: October 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Waiting
I like what you've written so far; however, I'm a little confused.... near the middle you wrote that we would find out what Jake would tell the family about Aro's connection to this whole situation, but, then you wrote "over the next week, Rose's condition was touch and go" with no mention of what Jake was going to tell the family...
Author's Response: i did do that. it was intentional. i wanted this chapter to be more about rose. next chapter will back-track slightly and go over what we missed about aro. we will have our answers, promise. bear with me. thanks you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Summary:
Bella Swan has spent a lifetime putting everyone else's needs before her own. Could a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger begin to change all of that?
Warning: Some dark scenes and subject matter at times, will try to post warnings on each necessary chapter.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 172047
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2010 Updated: March 16, 2011
Reviewer: ghostwriter Signed 
Date: September 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Undisclosed Desires
All I can say is:
YOU BETTER GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP QUICKLY!!!!! :) Now, I gotta go take a REALLY cold shower.
Reviewer: ghostwriter Signed
Date: July 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Caramel
Normally I usually save the review till the last chapter that's been written. Fortunately for you, (and unfortunately for me) I'm going to go take a very long COLD shower.
You've definitely made me interested in wanting to read more!!!!!! Author's Response: I'm happy to hear it! Hope you enjoy it all!
Summary: In All of Me, Bella chooses to serve Edward as his 24/7 consensual slave, but while she serves his needs, Edward is always looking for ways to fulfill hers. Exploiting the voyeuristic tendencies of their gardener, Jacob, is just one way Edward does that.
In this sideshot, we get to see Jacob's perspective, as he is looking from the outside in and learn how this arrangement came about. It is best read after Chapter 22 of the main story.
WARNING: This story contains strong, graphic language, graphic sexual situations and BDSM. Please read with caution.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 4414
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2010 Updated: May 22, 2010
Reviewer: ghostwriter Signed
Date: May 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I LOVED it!!! Especially the ending. Great job!!!
Summary: 
Banner by cheeseiscool - You my dear are AWESOME!!!!
 
Nominated at the Emerging Swan Awards - Best Drama/Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Complete
Nominated at the Tomato Soup Awards - Juciest Peach (story that makes your panites wet), The Bloody Mary Award (Best Vampire Story), and the Tomato Juice Award (Best Vampire feeding scene).
Abandoned by Edward and Jake, Bella runs away, right into the arms of danger and the Volturi. Can her new family help her heal? When the Cullens come back for her, which side will she choose, and who will win her heart in the end?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie, Sulpicia
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 234759
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2010 Updated: September 06, 2011
Reviewer: ghostwriter Signed 
Date: March 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Warfare
I am so mad at you right now!!!! (seriously I'm not!! *smile*) HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US WITH A CLIFF-HANGER like that?? All I can say, is you better bring on the next chapter and soon!!!!
Reviewer: ghostwriter Signed
Date: December 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Apart
I have to say you had me rolling at the end when the girls had their "talking smack" time with Bella. I love what you've written so far, but I REALLY enjoyed this Chapter the most!!!!! Author's Response: I had to insert a little humor. So much of what has gone on so far has been heavy - and of course we are coming up on some more angst...but it will be okay in the end...and you will see a little more of their humor...
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