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Penname: Belindella [Contact]
Real name: Belinda
Status: Member
Member Since: January 08, 2010
Website: http://twitter.com/Belindella
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Behind the Reel by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1458]
Summary: Feature

"Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."

A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.

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Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy cow! I love it! I've had this in my faves for so long, but was afraid Kris would be all girly like another T&K fic I've read. But you really nailed her. I just added casket4mytears to Twitter, and she rec'ed this out on her sight. And I clicked as to why your penname sounded so familiar. Amber said you got Kristen's voice right, and boy was she right! I just read a thing where she said something like how she loves wearing mens clothes : "and when I see Rob in a nice pair of tailored pants, I'm like 'I want those pants, man!'" She's so cool, and I can totally see her in this chapter! Love the little bit of angsty-ness going on, too.

Oh, also, Robs funny, goofy personality - it really came off when he was asking her to text him. Great!

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, finally the site's working again! Phew! I don't know if my last review sent adn I don't remember what I went on about, but it was all good.

*crosses fingers and hope I get to the next chapter* Grrrr

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"Kris, there is nothing ‘Edward’ about what I want to do to you." <--- god, that was hot! Loved the whole chapter! Hanging on your every word.

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving all their talking! You do their voices so well, I can really picture it.

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, me thinks I'm going to have good dreams tonight! It's offically 1:13am and I'm sooooooo ready for that dreaming. Night. Catch you @ chap 6. ;)

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOL a guy. Her ex? Oh, Rob. *snickers*

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

"Oh yeah. Zero to hot and wet in,what, five seconds? Damn he was good." <--- I'll say! wow. ;) And I just want to say thanks for being my quick fling VB, now that Amber's back, we must part. *tear* lol. The lemon next chapter sounds mighty fine. What a thing to wake up to. lalalalala!

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

You get one of three things: skilled, slobber, or completely clueless. <--- God, that was absolutely priceless! Loved it! hahaha

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

"It’s not theater." <--- I adore her little quirky lines like that. :)

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, that end line was a classic! Ha - so funny. :)

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh, so happy they made up at the end of the chapter! Yay! Okay, I remembered where I left off and might be able to sneak one more chap in before bed! Yay! :-)

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, a chapter full of sex, what a nice surprise before bed! lol. Thanks so much for that! :-) Awww, and the ending was so lovely. <3

 
Aro's Heir by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1901]
Summary:

Aro's Heir

 

Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori .  Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice.  How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?

Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...

AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.

~*~ warning ~*~  story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter.  if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue. 

If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN http://apps.rainn.org/ohl-bridge/

Disclaimer:  I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Twilighted Supervisory Beta: psymom        Twilighted Validation Beta: Lion_in_the_Land

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2012


Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (Jan 2012 edit)

Holy cow! Can't wait until I have the time to get into the other chapters!!!

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

“Vengeance will be sweeter than blood.” - That was so super satisfying to here, I almost cheered. So tense and emotional!

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

What they stole from us…” <---- Oh, my heart was breaking. Amazingly captivating story. So well done.

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

100% captivated. It'd be really great if Jane ended up befriending them and defending them against the V. That'd be a different twist, but whatever's going to happen, I think it'll be great by what you've already got going on. A more realistic pregnancy timeline would be better than what it was in BD - Bella's skin would have torn in half, especially with all that blood under the surface as well as an infant. With twins, I hope she at least has some months for her skin to stretch realistically. LOVE the twin thing, too! I hope they're both boys or that they don't have a Renesme *shudders*. lol

Great chapter as always

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

Wow - I can't help but thinking that this isn't a miscariage, but B's body adapting to the unusual pregnacy. C already asked about the twin thing. I love that it's making B realise she really does want the baby/s. So gorgeous, her whole thought process.

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

Awwwww - dying to know that she is actually still prego! I can't fathom that she's not. Gah! Excellent!!!

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

Ahhhhh, I was thinking 'why doesn't she just go on top.' Clever, clever.

 
Summary: Feature

Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs.  Canon pairings, AH/AU

This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes.  It is intended for a mature audience.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010


Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Alice

I've been meaning to get into this story for some time. All the characters so far are just so loveable. And poor B. Of course, I'm hanging out to see who hurt her and how she can heal.

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Overgrown Barbie Dolls

Ohh, Edward sounds like a catch! lol

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Nachos and Margaritas

Oh, an AxJ lemon - I wasn't expecting that! Had to skim it for some reason. Alice just seems too sisterly or somthing to read about her like that. Yeah, I'm strange. lol. Jeez, she really found a catch in Jasper if he knows what gossamer curtains are. lol. They're perfect for each other! :)

 
Summary:

 

Bella is left in a world of darkness after Edward leaves her. But just when things start to look bright again, weird things begin to happen. She wonders who could be the cause, knowing only one person could-Edward. But why after he promised to leave forever? An AU version of New Moon starting during her "blank page" period.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 73511
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010


Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Road Trip

You have my encouragement to continue on with interesting story. :)

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Seeing The Light

Oh, that was really lovely. You almost had me crying to the end there.

 
Reviewer: Belindella Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A New Day

Very interesting, and I loved the use of the book's dialouge.

 




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