I am loving this story, I am all caught up now though which mean I have to wait to read more, sob

Please please please pretty please update soon

I came across this story months ago and loved it but lost track of it so never got past the first chapter, I;m glad I found it again.

I loved the image of the Cullens having a snowball fight especially the Very Powerful image of Edward alone and huddled against the cold, despite the fact he can't feel it, it give the impression of him needing to shield himself from the perfect family moment before him.

OK I understand it a little better now but still... WHY couldn't one of them gather themselves to say on flipping word?

Despite my moans I am really enjoying this story

I am very curious about where Bella works,

Our dear friend Aro - Please please please let that be Aro Volturi, she is one of my favourite characters in fan fiction

Soo good, When Bella said the prayer for the Cullens I nearly cried

Oh my god, Oh my god, Oh my god. I can't believe you killed her

Another awesome chapter.

It's ironic that Rosalie, the person who was the most vocal in her disapproval of Bella, is the one comforting the others and maintaining that Bella still loves them. I don't think she is wrong about that but the betrayal and pain has overwhelmed those feelings so much that Bella cannot feel the love. I think that is why her bonds with them refuse to completely break.

I thought Alice already knew what Edward has said to Bella when he left, in chapter one it seemed like she had ‘seen' him talking to Bella and that is why she had such a volatile reaction to him when she saw him resulting in her taking a snap at him.

As fun as it was to see Esme taking a swing at Edward seeing Emmett and Jasper pummel him was way more satisfying, it's a shame Carlisle  stopped them. Disappointment aside, it was interesting to hear Jasper's observations of the others vying for Bella's affections. Poor Demetri.

Another awesome chapter.

Bella's second power is kind of cool and very original too.

Alec checking out Bella is very creepy, though to be fair it must have sucked for him and Jane to be changed so young. Stuck with all those hormones for an eternity? No thanks.

Poor Carlisle, I loved when he and Bella were speaking Italian it's a shame Bella wasn't able to maintain her grip on the present. It makes sense that Carlisle is the easiest to speak to, he is the most compassionate yet also as coven leader he's more detached from the emotions Bella has to the rest of the family.

It is hard to read the scene when they are looking and Didyme's portraits. Marcus is so affected by the mere image of her; I cannot understand how he can be capable of mating with Bella when he is still so distraught about Didyme.

This is my favourite story ever. If given a choice between Stephenie Meyer finishing Midnight Sun and you finishing this story I would totally choose this story. This prologue is the reason I still check my inbox every day hoping for an update despite the hiatus because I am dying to know which side she chooses. I have read and reviewed on both Twilighted and fanfiction.net and I am looking forward to reading and reviewing the story here.

I love your writing style and the suspense in this Prologue is intense, it has you dying to read more. It has the same lure as the ‘I'd never given much thought to how I would die' line from Twilight or my personal favourite and the more powerful ‘With ice in my heart, I watched him prepare to defend me. His intense concentration betrayed no hint of doubt, though he was outnumbered. I knew that we could expect no help - at this moment, his family was fighting for their lives just as surely as he was for ours.' from Eclipse. When you read those lines you are immediately hooked into the story and you prologue has the same effect.  

Another awesome chapter.

Though Edward is clearly suffering greatly I find it hard to summon any sympathy for him when he is the plonker that started this whole mess. His family are suffering too and Bella so he’s bottom of my list for sympathy.

I love Emmett’s analysis of the Ancients ‘Caius looks like he’s about to break out into a fit of giggles. And the other one, Marcus, is lookin’ like he’d like nothing better than to burn you himself.’ I would have loved to see Caius burst into a fit of giggles.

Another awesome chapter.

Using Jasper's POV for this chapter was very clever he is the best person to get the first look at vampire Bella. With his empath abilities we get an interesting look at the relationships and feelings Bella's incites within others. Of all the Cullens he is best able to give a unbiased analysis of Bella as a vampire and the changes in her character that have taken place. Other than Rosalie perhaps, he is the only one that would not be too clouded by the shock at seeing her again and the surprise of her transformation to immortal to be able to observe the differences. Also from Bella's perspective, it is best for her to see Jasper first. Of all the Cullens she had the least interaction with him and Rosalie and unlike Rosalie he didn't make a point of expressing dislike towards her. As we saw in the last chapter Rosalie's goodwill towards Bella soon evaporated when she perceived that she and the other Cullens were at risk because of their allowing her to live after she discovered their secret.  

It is bizarre to see Marcus pleading for Bella's understanding, bizarre but cool. I like the fact that Bella Swan danger magnet extraordinaire has changed so much that she has one of the most powerful vampires in the world pleading with her for understanding. Almost as cool is the image of Jasper Whitlock renowned badass being unnerved by her, it is an interesting change of pace from their previous dynamic.

Tanya really is a dumbass; she continues to goad Bella despite having been shown she is beyond the norm for a newborn and they are dangerous enough by themselves without Bella's extra abilities. I look forward to reading the Bella Vs Tanya smackdown that I know happens later in the story.

Another awesome chapter.

I liked seeing Bella's interaction with Siobhan and her coven, although so much has changed in Bella's personality the way she chats with Maggie shows that there is still a lot of the Bella we knew from before in her personality.

It's bittersweet to see Bella teasing Emmett, before that would have been an ordinary day between them but now because of their absence it shows how much things have changed. She is still affected by his happy energy though and is amused by his antics. Their bond would be one of the easiest to repair I think as Emmett is such a sweet natured person.  

As we see in Through Their Eyes Carlisle is rendered mute by the sight of Bella again and the differences in her personality, Bella is just as affected and her ‘urge to throw myself into his fatherly arms and breathe in his warm, familiar scent' illustrates that. The dance with Carlisle was my favourite part of this chapter.

I am really enjoying this story, I cried my eyes out at the 'souls' conversation and I am glad the the issue with the treaty was dealt with fast I am not a fan of moody werewolves so that was definitly a plus.

Cant't wait to read more