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Penname: shanno716 [Contact]
Real name: shannon hoelmer
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Member Since: December 30, 2009
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Summary:

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This is my vision of the wedding starring of course, the Minister, Emmett Cullen.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6538
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2008 Updated: July 31, 2008


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Minister Emmett

this was great and funny

 
Afterglow by jacklynnight Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 346]
Summary:

When my mother found me, fate seemed to link us together. Not only was I the daughter she never dreamed she'd have, I was unusually unappetizing for a human. However, being raised by vampires does not come with out conflict. This is my tale about growing up Cullen and finding love in the most unexpected place.

The world's largest coven is about to get a whole lot larger!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 67140
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2011


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Kiss of Death

Keep it up.  So she's changed?  Now what?

 
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Date: March 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Dancing with Danger

good chapter!!  I assume she had the date rape drug given to her

 
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Date: March 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Grow Up!

still cathcing up, but its keping me going

 
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Date: March 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Spilled Soy and Bad Blood

Will they change her before its too late?

 
Summary:

Bella Swan was leading a pretty normal life. A couple months shy of her eighteenth birthday, she learns her parents made a deal with the king of England. Now she's forced to move there and to meet the prince, Edward Cullen. What's his secret?

Thank you to the fabulous heatherdawnc for this beautiful banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 96157
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: December 31, 2011


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Long Live the King

i very much enjoyed this story

 
Summary:

Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate.  His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet.  When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.

This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.

A little lemony, but not too graphic.  Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters. 

 Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

great story, great ending.

 
Boot Camp by Almis Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1317]
Summary:

 

When you’re young you’re supposed to have fun, law be damned. At least that’s how Bella Swan, Rosalie Hale and Alice Brandon saw it.

Three friends’ hell bent on having as much fun as they can while they are still young. Only problem is, what they find fun normally gets them into trouble with the law.

Now their parents have had enough and have come to a decision to send their teenage daughters to Boot Camp for six months.

Alice, Bella and Rose are certainly not pleased with their parent’s news and vow to make life very interesting for all those at the correctional facility. With the help of three boys, who love causing just as much trouble as the girls, they don’t have a hard time keeping to their unspoken vow.

 

 

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Characters are quite OOC but the couples are the same as always.

Rated because of foul language, there shall be a lot of it. Also underage drinking, law breaking and shenanigans like that.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 110414
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay

great story, had me really laughing.

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

i love this story.  i need more... please soon

 
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Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

can you make it ten more chapters till the story ends?  I love this story and do not want to see it end.

 
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Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

I really liked the insight.

 
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Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper

This was another great chapter.  Will be patiently waiting the next one.

 
Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes

I was a huge fan of this story and i'm glad to see it finished.  I loved it and can't start reading it again from beginning to end without having to wait for updates

 
The One by demeterloves2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 210]
Summary:

This is my version of the Twilight Saga, Bella, Edward, and the rest of the Cullen's. There are familiar things and a LOT of twists.

Bella has moved to Forks, WA. and is convinced that she's being punished, even if she did come willingly. That's before she meets Edward.

Edward has never taken much stock in his sister Alice's visions about his so-called soul mate. He was convinced that he was meant to spend the rest of eternity with his family and nothing or no one else.

*thank you Ysar for the grammer heads-up :)

 


Categories: Twilight, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 49081
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2009


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think you did I fine job on the lemons.  I'm very much enjoying this story

 
Reviewer: shanno716 Signed
Date: December 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Is Bella pregnant or is she changing?

 
Summary:

Alice and Bella are in high school, and to celebrate the commencement of their junior year, Alice is throwing an end of the year party. After much begging, she gets Bella to attend. Unfortunately, someone spiked the drinks, and Bella gets drunk. She ends up being seduced by a beautiful bronze haired boy, who she can't remember ever seeing before. A couple weeks later, her mother, Esme, announces that she's remarrying. Bella's going to have a new stepbrother. This stepbrother is none other than the handsome stranger she fell in love with at Alice's party. And to top it off, she discovers that she's pregnant...  

Rated NC-17 for teenage drinking-nothing explicit

Thank you to TaintedDarkInuShemeeko for the awesome banner!!!!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 44596
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Crazy

Lets see the next chapter

 
Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Preparations

Are they going to move forward on their relationship

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso

This was great.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down.  Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.

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Thanks to katmom for the great banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

this is a great story

 
Summary:

 

Bella is soul-searching at a quiet lodge in Forks and she meets the secretive, tormented Edward Masen. Just as their relationship transcends friendship, Edward’s past comes back to haunt him in the most brutal way. B&E are human, but oh…there will be vampires. AU.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 291742
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2011


Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Black Magic & Blackout

i'm glad to see B&E are really moving forward in relationship

 
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Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Crushing Blows, Velvet, & Stone Pt. 2

His is a very very good story.  I need the next chapter like something terrible.

 
Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Cordial Confessions & Familiar Fire

love, love, love this story.  cannot wait for more.  This was an excellent chapter.

 
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Date: June 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Eggshells & Grand Scales Pt. 2

great chapter. now we are getting somewhere.

 
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Date: December 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Distant Dark Places Pt. 1

another great chapter

 
Reviewer: shanno716 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Loose Ends, They Tangle Down

another great chapter.  Is Mr. Miller a vamp?  I think he is...

 




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