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Real name: Illnevertell
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Member Since: December 26, 2009
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A bio. Let me see...
I'm a more "mature" Twilight addict, living in the suburbs of Chicago. I work hard, play hard, and really only relax lately by writing fanfic. I'm single, a rabid Chicago White Sox fan, a musical mish-mash (including the 80s and classical), and a tomboy - golf being my addiction at present. Vodka martini's, extra dirty, blue cheese olives my vice of choice.
My dream is to meet RPatz and have a smoke with him in a dark alley. Rob, please PM me here when you're in Chicago. I've got just the place...
I also dream of writing a trilogy someday, fiction, but unabashedly romantic, and slightly auto-biographical, about the colorful past of my maternal ancestry. Something with a happy ending. I haven't had mine. Yet.
My fic "Of Swans and Silence" just won the Judges pick for the Darkella's Darkest Temptation Contest held by the genius of the girls over at "The Temptation of the Naughty Muses", a combined effort of The Twilight Muses, Jasper's Naughty Girls, and Darkest Temptations. (If you're into everything Jasper, or everything naughty, or both, you should check these ladies out.) To say I was shocked would be the largest of understatements. It was my first-ever contest. The fic is not for everyone, though, and I highly suggest if you're not over 18, or if you're my mother, that you DO NOT read it. It's over at ff.net, but I will be posting it here just as soon as possible.
"Second Chances" is my first endeavor into fanfic, and my baby. Charlie is the reason I started writing, this fic being born out of the need to give him his due. His opportunity. It is a labor of love and continues.
"I Will Love You" won the "Pop My Cherry" contest, an idea for a fic that I'd requested from my stellar mentor, fngrcufs, who promptly turned around and told me to write it myself - more eloquently and diplomatic than that, however. (Please do go read her stuff on ff.net. The Story of Us will make you weep. I did.) It is posted over at ff.net as well.
Finally, if you'll allow, I want to just give a permanent shout-out here to my superb friend, Alexis Danaan. If it weren't for her, Second Chances would never have been posted.
Feel free to follow me on Twitter: (at)EdwardsChipper, although if you're not into foul-language, general perviness, or the occasional song lyric, follow at your own risk.
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Summary: 
Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori . Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice. How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?
Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...
AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.
~*~ warning ~*~ story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter. if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue.
If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN http://apps.rainn.org/ohl-bridge/
Disclaimer: I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2012
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (Jan 2012 edit)
Summary: When Bella takes a long overdue trip back to Forks, an unexpected detour helps her find her way home. AU/AH ExBxJ M for adult themes and lemons. This is a story about a poly(amorous) trio. This means that there are sometimes moments where they all three have sex, sometimes BxJ, sometimes ExB, and sometimes ExJ.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 217268
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010
Reviewer: Chipper Signed    
Date: January 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Omigosh. Ok, so I'm tearing. I can't WAIT for the sequel. Thanks so much for this - it's a beautiful perspective and I'm sure it took a lot for you to write it. I'm glad, though, that I found it late last year and didn't have to tortuously wait through a year for updates! ;) Again, wonderful. I'm going to go search out your other masterpieces now! Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I have a few other stories I need to complete before I begin the sequel, but hopefully it won't be too terribly long. Also, there are still out takes and prequels to be posted, so be sure to check back or put me on author alert :)
Summary: What if Edward wasn't strong enough to resist the temptation of Bella's blood, the first time they met? What if, instead of leaving, he changed his mind and went to her house to kill her?
What if Alice got to them in time to stop him, but not in time to keep Bella human?
Rated NC-17 for probable violence and smut in later chapters. I'm pretty sure it will end up E/B, but might take a long while to get there.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 97229
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010
Reviewer: Chipper Signed    
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Countdown
LOVE IT! Love the fact that Charlie will able to be there, but something tells me a clue will slip and he'll attempt to attend in person? Ah, but no matter. I have an idea what her 2nd gift could be, but I'm too much of a prude to write it. ;) I am without a doubt, though, a whore for a clue! HEE!
Summary: ATO for short. This is an alternate New Moon. Edward and the Cullens are gone. A vindictive Victoria takes away all that Bella has left, including her humanity. Bella must leave Forks, but where can she go when she has no one left? All vampire. EdwardxBella
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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 134491
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: January 08, 2011
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: April 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Say What?
Great, great Esme. Superb. Loved the Charlie insight. It's exactly what goes through your head when your Dad goes too soon. Yes, I have experience there.
Great job.
Summary:
“My name is Bella Swan. This is the story of my freefall into hell without any chance of capture.”
Bella is miserable in her abusive relationship but feels she has no escape and no where to turn. Her older brother Emmett has always been close but with the introduction of his new roommate Edward Cullen, Bella feels even more hopeless in her future. Can anyone catch Bella before she slips too far out of reach?
Rating: NC-17 for strong language, physical abuse, sex without full consent and of course, the good stuff, sexual scenes!
(Many amazing thanks to ms_ambrosia for the beautiful banner)


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 73461
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2009 Updated: September 28, 2010
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: July 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: "Crescendo"
Ahhhhhh. That was...delicious.
The convo between Rose and Edward was fabulous.
Way to go, baby.
Reviewer: Chipper Signed    
Date: June 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: "Breathe"
I don't think I've ever reviewed your story, luv. You know I love it. I absolutely want to STRANGLE you right now for bringing Jake into this moment.
Tell me my Edward's gonna kick his ass. Please? Pretty please? :)
Mwah.
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: June 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: "pressure release"
a) You even fuck with my Charlie, you're dead meat. ;)
b) I hate your Jake more than I already hate Jake. Didn't know that was really possible. I just want someone, anyone, preferably Emmett, to beat the shit out of him.
c) Sugar. Cupcake. Nice shoutouts. ;)
d) Jasper. Um, yeah. You know where my loyalties lie, but gawdamn girl, if his number was in the phonebook next to therapist, I would come UP with a reason to see him. This line:
"Sugar, if he hasn't had you screaming his name in pure ecstasy, then he hasn't made love to you, and quite frankly needs to a lesson or two on the female form."
Holywet-my-panties.
Oh, and I love Edward, too, of course.
Nicely done, wifey. ;)
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: July 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: "Intermission"
This: "Well considering Edward is downstairs in only his drawers, yes. It's damn frosty down there and I don't just mean Rose's attitude."
Why is it that I keep loving lines from your Jasper? I'm an utter traitor! Gah!
Great chapter, darlin'.
Oooh. And update soon! (I just had to do that.)
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: September 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: "Free Dall"
Darlin, don't worry. I'll protect you from the lynchmobs. ;)
This: " I wanted to choke him until his tiny sized head popped clean off his body. The thought gave me a small smirk."
It gives me a smile everytime I read it.
Marvelously maddening. Great job.
Summary: If Here the villains often win and heroes play the fool
If Here reward feels random and friendship just a tool -
If There two lovers, star-crossed, can take each other's hand
And when worlds fall around them, they make an honest stand -
If Here mercy is fairy tales and faith's a funny joke
And kindness Never Never Land and poets all are broke -
If There the fight is worth it and family never dies
And sunlight shines down on you from gray and rainy skies -
If Here is what there really is and There's mere fantasy,
Then sometimes I'll abide There. Come, friend; abide with me.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73258
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Glory
Bravo! I have eight favorites saved - and yours was one of them. It took my breath away. A thousand thank you wouldn't be enough to you for sharing it. Author's Response: The scariest part of writing is doing it. The second-scariest part is sharing it. So thank you for making that part worthwhile.
Summary: It’s been months since Bella Swan showed up on the doorsteps of the Cullen home resembling little more than a broken doll. It’s taken her a long time to get to this point in her life; the point where she feels safe at night, where she feels loved and accepted. But her demons aren’t far beneath the surface. What will she do when life throws yet another challenge in her path and those demons come back to haunt her in the flesh? AH, AU, OOC.

Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 87723
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Trying
Ooooooh. Worth the wait. Yes, definitely. I know this is a set-up chapter, but damn. I can not WAIT to find out what you're doing with this. I have ALL SORTS of ideas, heh, heh, heh.
Oh the tangled web of my filthy mind. And yours. ;)
Now get back to those papers . . . Author's Response: Hahaha, and you say that I'm good for your head? You're going to inflate my ego to the point where I won't be able to get out the front door! But I'm glad you liked it :)
And my mind is not filthy! It's...it's....okay, it's filthy too lol Just you wait! There's a "Peeping Tom" moment of Jasper's that's coming up soon ;)
As always, thank you! Here's your teaser:
EPOV I started to laugh, not expecting Angela to start cracking jokes, “You’re something else, aren’t you?” “And you’re not as mean as you’d like people to think, are you?” she countered with a smile. I shrugged, “I plead the fifth.” She laughed outright then and covered her mouth with her hand. I realized in that moment that Angela Weber was really rather beautiful in an unassuming way. Her eyes, lit up with mirth, were sparkling and vivid, her smile beautiful, her laugh feminine but not annoying. How had I never noticed this before?
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Opening Up
PLEEEEEASE write more! Author's Response: :D I have, I'm writing as we speak! Here's a teaser from the next chapter to keep you company:
I got up out of my bed and threw a shirt on before opening the door to my room and padding the few short feet to Bella’s door. I listened for a second, wondering if she had fallen back asleep. Then I heard her cry out louder and knew that she hadn’t. I was just about to open the door when I heard her tumble from the bed and her feet running towards the door. It flew open and there stood Bella, her hair looking like a nest, her t-shirt twisted around her body and her eyes wild. She took me in, standing there with my mouth open, and flung herself at my chest. My arms came around her instinctively and I could feel her shaking. I pressed my lips to her hair and rubbed soft circles into her back, feeling the dampness of her shirt. “Shhh, it’s okay Bella, it’s okay now,” I whispered softly, trying to encourage her to release her death grip on my chest. I was seriously starting to reconsider teasing her about her abilities to hurt Emmett. She had a hold on me that rivalled a vice grip. “Shhh...it’s okay now,”
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: February 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Klutz Gene
I am TOTALLY team Edward, but dammit if you haven't made me think twice about Jasper. I didn't leave a review for the last chapter, but that in-the-bed-with-Jasper thing had me tingling. I'm working on my very first fanfic, and as soon as I get the stones to post some chapters (I have 6 of around 30 finished), I hope you'll take a look.
Absolutely adore this. Can't WAIT for more! Author's Response: WOO HOO! A possible convert! I love it! :D
I would love to take a look at your story! If you would like I can take a look at it before you post but that's totally up to you. You can drop me a line here, on FF.net (Alexis.Danaan) or on Twitter if you do the Twitter madness (AlexisDanaan).
I'm so happy that you like it! Esp since you're a Team Edwarder! Here's your teaser from the next chapter!
EPOV
“C’mon you Neanderthal! Move those hips!” she laughed and, letting go of my hands, grabbed my hips instead. I could feel the warmth of her palms spread over my skin as she forced movement out of my body. “Okay, okay! I’ve got the hint Bells!” I laughed and began moving on my own. My movements were rather awkward, kind of the way Bella had looked previously when she was dancing with the oaf. He had been invading her personal space then; here Bella’s personal space had been blended with mine. I was totally okay with that. I stepped closer to her and placed my hands on her waist as we began to move in sync to the song. I couldn’t help but focus on the softness of the body I was touching. I could feel the muscle and bone moving under her skin, feel the warmth radiating from her body, hear the breaths she was taking. She twisted and turned her body as the song continued but I kept at least one of my hands on her at all times. Bella kept a safe distance between our bodies, never letting herself get too close to be inappropriate, for which I was simultaneously thankful and bitter about.
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: February 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
Ok, I'm making my contribution. ;) But oh, you just can't do that! You can't give Jasper, uh, and then Edward too! On the same dancefloor! It's just not fair to a girl's heart.
This can't end well, although I can't WAIT to see how you work this out. Author's Response: Haha! If you think that was bad darlin, wait until you see what I have in store for you!
Here's a little taste of what's coming up next:
“Jasper, I saw you dancing out there with Bella, you looked like you were doing the tango or something?” Ben turned to me, half shouting to make himself heard. “Salsa actually,” I told him, I stepped closer to Bella on the pretence of making myself heard to Ben. He was sitting across from her. “Did you take lessons or is it just something you picked up?” he asked. “I just picked it up. I’ve never taken dance lessons in my life,” I made a face and he laughed. I kept my eyes on him as I slowly brushed my hand along Bella’s shoulder and down her bare arm. She shivered. “Well it looked good,” he laughed, “Until Bella fell into you!” I chuckled as my hand reached her waist. I could feel her entire side pressed up against my chest and the warmth from her body mingled with my own, “Yeah, we always tease her about her ability to tip over air.” “Well, this time she has an excuse! You were making her fly out there!” he laughed again and I squeezed her hip with my hand. “That I was,” I agreed.
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Your Touch
OMG! I should've never read this on my lunch hour! I love how the boys rallied around her, even Edward, after witnessing the whole Jasper/Bella touchy-feely scene. He is, after all, Edward. ;)
You're killin' me! Author's Response: Haha! I am honoured that you read my story on your break! I'm glad you noticed how Edward doesn't even bat an eyelash at Jasper helping Bella and holding her hand, I was hoping people would realize that he doesn't consciously think about his jealousy when he knows that she needs him to be there for her. Ten points to you!!! lol
I'm killing you and you're LOVIN it! Admit it! ;)
Here's your teaser!
He rubbed his hair with the towel for a few more seconds, trying to get the dampness out, before tossing it onto the bathroom counter without a care. He flipped off the switch for the light in his bathroom and softly padded over to the bed. He bent down as if he were going to get into the bed but then paused. “Would you prefer it if I wear a t-shirt?” he asked me softly. I couldn’t see his face because my eyes had not yet adjusted to the darkness of his room but I could hear the trepidation in his voice. “No,” I whispered back, “I just need you to hold me.”
ps- I'm reading your chapters RIGHT NOOOW! <3
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: February 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Falling
Ok, I read this at 3 am this morning when I returned from my, uh, evening out and realized that it would probably be better if I read it sober. ;) So, here's my question. Bella's "been" with Jasper twice now. Shouldn't Carlisle and Esme be a little worried about that, since her abuse? I sense a very important discussion from Carlisle to the boys coming, especially one with Jasper. I also sense a pull back from Jasper that reels Bella. Am I close? Or, I sense Emmett beating the sh*t out of Jasper after he mistakes something he sees between Jasper and Bella?
All I wanna know is, when does Knight-in-shining-armour Edward come into play? Does he? Argh, the anguish. Author's Response: Haha, darlin, I have to disappoint you. Edward is no knight in shining armour...at least not at this point in the game! He has a lot of growing to do as a person.
Bella's late night visits with Jasper are flying under the raydar of Esme and Carlisle at the moment. It won't always be that way though. As for Bella's abuse...she was never sexually assaulted, I'll tell you that. James def abused, her but she was never raped or molested so she has nothing to fear from Jasper sexually.
I can't tell you if Jasper's gonna be pulling back or not...nor can I tell you if Emmett's gonna beat the shit out of anyone ;) I can't spoil that for you!!!
I have to keep you in anguish for now darlin ;)
Here's your tease:
EPOV “Emmett, he threw her down a flight of stairs, kicked the shit out of her, broke her face and then let her crawl out the front door in the middle of the night. He didn’t take her to a hospital and give them the good old “she fell” line, he let her go outside knowing that she would most likely pass out in a bush somewhere and bleed to death. He didn’t give a shit about her life. But she got away and she’s happy now, so he’s going to want revenge. He’ll know that the only way to keep her away from us will be to kill her. You really think he’ll hesitate to end her life?”
Emmett shifted uncomfortably under my gaze and the possibility of Bella’s death, “Beatings are one thing Edward, but murder? How do we know he’s not just some punk ass who likes a power trip but wouldn’t actually risk federal prison time?”
“Doesn’t matter,” Jasper spoke up, his face was hard and his hands were clenched into fists at his sides, “Even if he doesn’t intend on killing her, he nearly did last time. Edward’s right, he’ll be pissed that she got away. With that kind of anger he’d probably kill her by accident.”
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: I Got You
You. Are. Brutal. That's ok though. Bella can have Jasper, cuz then I can have Edward. ;)
Have I told you lately I love how you write? It's almost like you have a metronome on in the background. Tell me that Lauren's gonna get hit by a meteor or something. That'd be terriff! Author's Response: BAHAHAHA.
You. Are. Hysterical! I just pictured Lauren being smoked by a meteor. Nearly choked on my cookie, woman!
And I'm so glad that you enjoy the way that I write, I often worry about my style so it's great to hear that someone besides myself enjoys it! :)
Hope your travels are going well and that you get home safe!!!
Here's a teaser to keep you company :)
JPOV “See? You don’t have an answer either. If we pursue this we risk alienating our family...the only family either of us have Jazz,” she pulled away from my grasp and looked up at the green canopy, “Even if they accept it, if it doesn’t work out between us we could still end up ruining our family.”....
“The question now is whether or not it’s worth it,” her gaze lowered to mine and she looked dejected.
“Is it?” I asked, softly.
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: April 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Tension
So, can I say just how uncomfortable that was? The whole chapter. From Edward and {gasp} Ang, to the couch thing? Bravo.
I am a wee bit confused by Bella's skittishness outside the confines of school and home. Because Jasper isn't with her? Is this a James thing? I can't wait to find out!!!!
What will my Eddie do? {sigh} Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm glad it made you uncomfortable, it was supposed to!
And you'll see more of Bella's skittishness and I think you'll come to understand it better. Not gonna tell you yet tho ;)
As always, thank you for your support with this story! <3 Here's your teaser:
JPOV I sat up suddenly and grabbed my hair, tugging on it sharply because I was frustrated. Yes, of course Bella knew that she could trust me. Of course she did. Right? But what was it about her past that she was so hesitant to tell me about? Was it because I had never sat her down and told her my whole story? Was there something—something besides the fact that James beat her—that she was hiding?
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: April 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Control
Ohhh. OHHHH! You're right. Read alone. Or at least with, um, reinforcements next to you. Man I'm coming over to Jasper, pun intended.
Nice. Can't wait tho, until Emmett kicks his ass. ;) Author's Response: Muhahahaha!
I'm glad you liked it!
Here's your teaser:
BPOV Without looking at Jasper I turned and opened the door, “Yeah Em, I’m okay, why?” He was standing here looking at me nervously and I saw his eyes dart into the room beyond. I opened the door farther to assuage his fears and hoped to god that Jasper was composed and not lying across my bed in any pose that suggested any kind of sexual activity. “I just...nothing, I think I’m losing it,” he said to me but he was looking at Jasper.
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: May 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: The Banshee
I'm seriously affronted you didn't name her Chipper. ;)
Adored the Emmett on the couch like an um, er, scaredy-cat. ;)
So is this really James? Dun dun duh. Author's Response: Hahaha, well if YOU would have answered my Twittercall maybe the cat would have been named Chipper! ;) Mind you, I think I wrote this before you had a Twitter account, can't be sure though. I had fun writing Emmett in this chapter, I usually do enjoy him, but Edward's running commentary was also fun to write!
And you already know the answer to that question, lol.
Here's your teaser darlin:
BPOV Later I would have no idea how long we stood there, probably making quite the scene, as Jasper attempted to sooth and I trembled steadily. Later I would barely remember Edward and Emmett coming out of the pharmacy and telling us that there had been no sign of a man fitting James’ description in the pharmacy and that none of the staff had recognized such a description either. Later I would only remember the feeling of the panic swelling up through my stomach, making me feel nauseous, and clawing at my throat as it suffocated me. Later I would only remember Jasper’s arms and his sweet scent.
Cinnamon. Old Spice. Leather.
As always, thank you :)
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: June 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: The Champion
Oh, yeah. I'm mean, OH, yeah. Loved the fact that you had them getting all hot and sweaty, fightin', before... Oh yeah.
I know some of those moves, and you are correct, they do exist. I understood by your descriptions, but maybe cuz that's cuz I know them!
There's one you forgot. A paralyzing finger in the fleshy part under your chin - I call it the one-finger move. Heh, heh. An army guy taught me that one. ;)
Great, great chapter. Author's Response: I don't know that one! Tell me more about it so I can use it... er... later ;)
I'm glad you like it! I don't have a teaser for you yet but I er *cough* am working on it... :D
Summary: Now Complete!
Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored. In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side. While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor. EPOV.
Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.
Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.
Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!
Thank you Lace for the Banner!
“There was no other blood like this. Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp. But if I stopped now, she would heal. Her body would make more. The blood would replenish. I could drink again. The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010
Reviewer: Chipper Signed   
Date: December 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Shop and Kill
Absolutely fantastic! Keep going!
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Calm and Control
This is a great twist on the old story. The dialogue, both inner and outward, is nearly perfect. I love this Edward and Bella as much as I love the original. I wish I could write as well as you. Someday I'll take my chance on here. ;)
Thanks for a great addition to the site - can't WAIT for the update!!!
Reviewer: Chipper Signed    
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Play and Pray
Gah! I LOVE this story. Absolutely adore the "So much for. . ." that end the chapters. Brilliant. Please tell me Edward is on the cusp of redemption. You simply MUST write faster or I'll go mad. ;)
Reviewer: Chipper Signed
Date: April 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Cope and Hope
I'm reading this chapter at work. NOT A GOOD IDEA. I think I need to go out back for a smoke . . .
Great chapter!! Author's Response: Save one for me! :) Thanks for leaving a review!
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