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love twilight series..but bella is too dependent and whiny..love that kristen stewart gives her some dignity in the movies...*sad that breaking dawn went in the direction of bella getting pregnant...*interested in other ideas of what could have happened...:D


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The Little Fish by shellwrx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Life in Beverly Hills is top notch to those of wealth and privilege. To Bella Swan, it is simply a means to obtain the education she needs for the future she has always desired. What happens when a new family moves to town and changes everything she thought she knew about what’s of true value in life? Will she lose everything she’s worked for because she is down and out of district?

 

TLF Banner

Banner by HeatherDawn

AU-AH Canon Pairings - Bella/Edward - Rated M for future lemons.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 85772
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2010 Updated: March 06, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sex, Lies and Volleyball

wow..before the last chapter when Tanya wouldn't answer calls, I thought Edward was awful for forgetting her, but OMG..she was outragous.!!..lol..serves her right..X)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. Yep, Tanya was kind of a psycho. Next chapter is in queue.

 
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Date: November 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Sweating it Out

hmmm...i agree!!..Edward should still work for it a bit more, he really did hurt Bella..:O

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Fine Mess

That's right, she did!..hahaha...She should have at least warned him, but i bet she saw it coming!



Author's Response:

I think you're on to something...

I'm working on the next chapter. Should have it up soon. Thank you for your review!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: I'm Happy for You... Really

hahah...YES!!..let Edward sweat it for a bit!!...poor Bella always finds a reason to blame herself!!

 
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Date: February 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Party Fish

hmmmm..I'm guessing he thought that Bella wouldn't be ok with a dare as their first kiss?!

 
Summary:

What if Rosalie found Emmett after the bear attack but he had already been bitten?

Emmett awakens to his new life with muddy memories of a mahogany haired, pale skinned beauty. He believes she saved him and can't seem to forget her.

What happens when he finds her 80 years later in a new body?

AU! Rated NC-17 for future chapters. Sex, blood, good old fashioned sibling rivalry and maybe death.

Emmett and Bella

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 34754
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2010 Updated: December 18, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-The New Girl Arrives

that only means that Edward wants to kill her, right?!!..Emmett can still be her mate?..lol



Author's Response: Do not fret I am good with happy endings though I promise nothing...LOL!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-My Woodland Sprite

haha..I'm just wondering if Edward ends up falling in love with Bella, too. or if he keeps it at blood lust..:)



Author's Response:

You never know. Things always have a way to twist and turn.

 
Perhaps Not to Be by lorij Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

When he chose another I refused to be broken over it. I went on and made a near perfect life all the while I mourned my loss of who I thought he was. I had found comfort in that we were just not meant to be. Why is he reappearing in my life now?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Riley
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 24505
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2010 Updated: December 24, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

meeep!

 
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Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG!!!....ok...soooo Bella didn't know he was still seeing Jessica when he told her he was marrying her???..and he thought Bella would be ok being the other woman?!!!!

 

 
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Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

uhhh...Edward is divorced or unhappy in his marriage??...Bella and Riley are so cutee tho!

 
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Date: November 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Now

nooooo!!..they can't be unhappy!!..I adore Rilely/Bella!!..haha.

 
Summary:

A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze-haired new kid wasn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide?

Banner by tkegl


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 13153
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2010 Updated: April 27, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

poor Edward!

 
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Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

awwww...poor Edward!

 
Summary:

*NOW COMPLETE*


Bella wanted Mr. Perfect, but he didn’t want her. When Mr. Imperfect comes along, can she look close enough to see just who is more perfect for her?

A story about falling in love with the imperfections.

 

Blinkie by the uber talented RoseArcadia


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 153293
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2010 Updated: May 12, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: He Barely Spoke to Me

Meep....I started reading a few hours ago and I can't stop!..I love Edward!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: He was Pleasant to Me

I adore Edward!!

 
Summary:

Unemployed Bella Swan takes on a temp position. Little does she know it is as assistant to Edward Cullen, a man she despises! Chaos ensues, papers fly, and Cullen Enterprises is turned upside down. AH, slightly OOC. Rate M for Lemons and Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 26544
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2010 Updated: January 02, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Confronting Liaison

wow..hahaha..poor Edward!!..why does Bella have such a grudge against him?!

 
Summary:

 

Edward Cullen, multi Grammy-award winning, platinum selling artist, is back in the studio and working on his newest instalment. Enter Bella Swan; the business' newest recruit and recording her debut album.

With one treading dangerous water after she is thrown in at the deep end, and the other struggling to find inspiration or meaning in anything, can they find the answers in one another?

Throw in Edward's dark past and even darker addictions, their feuding differences in art, and many long nights at the studio and there is bound to be tension. But how can you keep the one thing you'd never want to share to yourself, in a world so crazy with publicity and celebrity?

Rated M for Pianoward, language and dark themes, including attempted rape and drug use.

Amazing banner by FrozenSoldier! :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Felix, Heidi, James, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 83443
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2010 Updated: July 21, 2012


Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Midnight Desires

haha..I feel like Edward's going to vomit on her!

Author's Response:

Aha, it would be pretty funny :P A lot of people think he's going to pass out on top of her too! :L

However, I'm trying to be as little funny as possible, so it's neither of those I'm afraid :L

If you're over on twitter then you'll get a teaser anyway cause I post it over there first :P If not, the next chapter will be up in no more than 8-9 days :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing, as always :)

Sarah xx

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Services Rendered

haha..Edward was a grade A douch!..and Jacob doesn't seem too bad but the ending makes him seem like a rapist!

Author's Response:

Haha, I don't think I'd go so far as to say Jake's a rapist...that's a really strong accusation...but yeah, without giving anything away, I can tell you that he will be a bad guy in this fic...however, he won't be the only one y'all have to worry about :P

*Le sigh* Edward seems to be getting worse instead of better...hopefully things will start to change...even though I'm having too much fun writing assholeward :L

Thank you for reading and reviewing as always! Sorry it took me so long to reply, but you might be happy to know ch.11 will be going up today or tomorrow :):)

Sarah xx

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Life is a Rodeo

haha..Jared Leto in his acting days was SEXY, but in 30 seconds to Mars, totally prefer Edward instead!



Author's Response:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooo....jared leto is soooooooo hot...

And it's not "instead of Edward" :P We're basing our Edward on Jared instead of Rob, that's all :P just to make him a little more rocker like :P:P

Tehe, you'll have to check it out just to see if you like it or not :P:P

Ta for reviewing! The next chapter is still with my beta but it shouldn't be too long before it's up :P

Sarah xx

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Spending The Night

does he think he slept with her and is trying to make her feel like a whore?!!...NOOOOOOO..bad Edward!!..Bella should just clear things up and leave...don't let him affect her!!..lol



Author's Response:

Aha, that made me laugh :L:L

When will we ever know what he's thinking...he just continues to badly surprise and confuse us all! :O

I'm already 1/2 finished chapter 10 so it shouldn't be too long before these two are getting into yet another argument...I wonder how this one will end? :P

Thank you for reading and reviewing, as always :)

Sarah xx

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Recipe For Disaster

U2 of course, but I forget the name..Stuck in the moment..I think..hahha

Author's Response:

You are correct! As always :P :) Lol, you're good at this game :P And you have good taste... lol :P

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Sarah xx

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Signed In Blood

OMG!!..poor Bella!..i hope she checks a statement or two!!



Author's Response:

We all knew Renee had to be up to something! :O Bella will get this sorted out without a glitch, but who knows what Renee has up her sleeve? Apart from me, of course ;P

Thanks for continuing to read and review! :) Next chapter should be up within the next couple of days :)

Sarah x

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Break Away

I thought Jasper would still want to work things out with Bella, or that she would with him! lol. Poor Bella.

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Not That Girl

omg!!..maybe a little Bella/Jasper action before Alice comes into the picture?..:)



Author's Response:

:O Wouldn't you just love to know?????? :O

Lol, I never give things away...so you'll just have to wait and see...

I did, however, make a decision regarding Jasper only yesterday...I'm quite excited by this new angle... :)

Lol, is it evil to drop hints like that? Nah... :P

Chapter 5 wont be up next week, because I haven't got a permanent beta yet, but I doubt it'll be longer than two :)

Thanks for reviewing!!

Sarah xx

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mile High

omg!!..hahah..so much withholding!!..XO..ok..hahah..i'll wait..:)

 




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