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Penname: carog91 [ Contact]
Real name: caroline
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Member Since: December 22, 2009
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love twilight series..but bella is too dependent and whiny..love that kristen stewart gives her some dignity in the movies...*sad that breaking dawn went in the direction of bella getting pregnant...*interested in other ideas of what could have happened...:D
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Summary: One Christmas, Alice and Rosalie invite Bella to join them and their boyfriends on a vacation at Lake Tahoe. Little does Bella know that Emmett and Jasper have cajoled Edward into going along as well. Will it be a Christmas to Remember or a Christmas they both wish to forget?
Rating due to Emmett's and Rosalie's foul language and lemons.
Part II (Fool Me Once, Fool Me Twice) has started. I cannot disclose the summary because it may give away the ending to the first part.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 44210
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2011
Reviewer: carog91 Signed 
Date: May 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Springtime Feelings (v)
haha..that would be entertaining..hahah..Never did see When Harry Met Sally tho..hahah
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: May 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Burning Embers (v)
i'm totally a new reader..late even..haha..love it!
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: May 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: It Never Got this Good (v)
hahah..i was wondering about the condom..hahahaa
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: December 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 1: 6 in 10 (v)
Alice is a brat!..Edward lost his chance..hahahah..poor Mike. Author's Response: Alice *is* a brat... and poor Mike, indeed :-P
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: December 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 3: Telling Myself (v)
i don't hate Bella at all!..lol..Mike did kind of go from perfect to disappointing in this chapter...it's already easy to see the appeal in Edward instead..:( Author's Response: Mike's not that bad... just not romantic at all!
I'm glad you don't hate Bella yet. What I meant to say is as the story goes on, some people might be frustrated with her.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: December 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
hahahaha..soooo wrong!
Summary: 
(banner by the awesome m81170)
When Bella moves to Forks, she's surprised that there's someone living in the house across from hers... and even more so that her window faces directing into someone else's! Will these two window buddies be able to get over their naivity and shyness to discover that they're meant to be? AU, AH BxE all the way... enjoy!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 62092
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2010
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
hahah...i couldn't NOT smile reading this chapter....soooo cute...i love Emmett..haha
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
haha..Jacob is just leaving Bella alone!!
Summary: NOW COMPLETE!
Left with nothing more than her memories, Bella tries to live day to day, after the loss of her beloved Cullens. A new family enters and Bella finds relief and solace in her budding friendship with the family's most mysterious member, Aryana-a blue eyed hybrid, with a bit of a temper. Will Bella remain loyal to the past or will she be seduced by Erickson and the dangerous McRae family?
"W-Well," I stuttered a bit, "I'm broken..damaged goods."
"Hmm," he said as he appeared to think it over. Before I could continue though, he moved forward and seized my chin with two fingers. He slowly leaned towards me, the smell of his breath intoxicating my senses. "Then let me fix you."
banner credit goes to the awesome Frozensoldier! Go to her for all your banner needs! Special thanks to PROJECT TEAM BETA, for their awesome skills!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 128830
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: November 14, 2010
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 "Annamorphos"
i must say i have grown attached to Eric!..haha
Edward WHO?..:D Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the rating. I have to admit, I am team Edward too..but I've started to grow
attached to my own character :D
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 "A Tale Of Two Brothers"
hmm..AWKWARD for Bella, i'd say...how does that if Eric likes her!..haha Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the rating! I love putting my characters in awkward situations! MWAHAHA!
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Interim Chapter
wow...i'm glad that bella is angry towards edward instead of missing him!
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 "Family Meeting"
hahah...bella's knowledge of their cars could easily be something she caught onto from Rose!
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 "Blood & Bagpipes"
haha...is rochester an ode to Edward?..like Edward Rochester in Jane Eyre??..lol! Author's Response: Nice catch! Yes and No. I did use his last name (cause I thought it was really interesting that his first name was Edward) but
they both have different personalities. Thanks for the review and the rating.
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 "Blood & Bagpipes"
does Eric really serial date humans?!..and of course they can't all be Edward!...i miss him!!..hahaha Author's Response: Yes, Eric has been quite the ladies man. :) Some see this as a bad thing, however I wanted to make sure everyone knew that he wasn't Edward. (He actually knows his way around women). Thanks for the review and the rating
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "The Eyes"
haha..i just read the date with Eric and it's clear that Edward is NOT coming back!..glad for Bella moving on, or at least trying to..;D Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the rating.
It's true, Edward (and the rest of the Cullens) will not be returning in this story.
It's meant to take place in the four months/pages left blank in New Moon.
The story is also meant to run canon inside New Moon.
Summary: Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.
Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?
Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: May 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
wow..hahahaha...that would MOST likely be embarassing..and AWKWARD...she should have just bought a new one in Denver!!..hahahah
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: May 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - New Home
haha...AWKWARD..once again..POOR BELLA!
Summary: Jasper Whitlock and his two best friends, Edward Mason and Emmett McCarty, are attending college and living the life, as all students do. Things start to get complicated when they meet a trio of amazing girls, as these three boys are hiding one huge secret...
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 22795
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2010
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
lol...was bellas prize winning investigative journalist parent ommitted until JUST now?..lol
Summary: What if Edward wasn't strong enough to resist the temptation of Bella's blood, the first time they met? What if, instead of leaving, he changed his mind and went to her house to kill her?
What if Alice got to them in time to stop him, but not in time to keep Bella human?
Rated NC-17 for probable violence and smut in later chapters. I'm pretty sure it will end up E/B, but might take a long while to get there.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 97229
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Monster
this is soooo good...:]...i love that bella realizes she missed out on aging because of edward and actually hates him, for the time being at least..:D
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Teething Problems
i think the chapter went great...:D
i love the idea of edward changing bella immediately before he really knew her...sdlsdkkd
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Blindsided
this is one of the few fan fics i've read that have been really awesome!!!...the rest always have something off about them...but this one is so perfect...:DD
Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: February 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
yay!..i love Emmett!.. Author's Response: Emmett is such a big teddy bear.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: February 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
this is really sad!..i hate edward!!! Author's Response: It is quite a sad story for a good bit of it. But it will be okay...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: February 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
edward is sooo selfish!
Author's Response: I don't know that *he* sees it that way - he thinks he's made the most selfless sacrifice of all, which is what makes this all the more tragic.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: February 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
iiiiii lliiiiike thissss storrrry..:D Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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