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love twilight series..but bella is too dependent and whiny..love that kristen stewart gives her some dignity in the movies...*sad that breaking dawn went in the direction of bella getting pregnant...*interested in other ideas of what could have happened...:D


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Summary:

 

***BANNER BY MsTwiSwe***

 

****NOW COMPLETE****

Bella Swan is a second year law school student. She goes on an interview that she feels pressured into by her law school advisor, Carlisle Cullen. Who she meets at the interview throws her perfectly orchestrated world completely off balance.

What happens when you think you know exactly what you want and life throws you a curve ball??

AH/AU, OOC, Canon Couples. Lots of Lemons and a description of violence. Nothing too dark, though. The real world is hard enough!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 148187
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: May 03, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Hanging by a Moment

haha..i love the random women with advice!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - No Air

hahah..this is soo funny and random!...i would totally marry edward if i were bella!...*who can say no to that?!..hahah..:DD

 
On a Lonesome Road by valeri29 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 506]
Summary: Feature

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Thanks to RavynNightstorm for the fantastic banner.

 

During her freshman year, Bella Swan's mother forces her to join the Forks High band.  Instead of the torture Bella was expecting, she actually meets the five people who will become the best friends of her life.  But amid the flirting, jokes, and pranks, something unexpected happens to Bella.  She finds herself unable to escape one devastating mistake and fears her life is over forever...at the age of fifteen. AU/AH.  

One is not free to make mistakes in a small town like Forks.  The tiniest misstep, the smallest indiscretion is fair game for the gossip mill for years.  And the mistake I had made was certainly not a small one.  I would never be able to escape the shadow of what I had done; and worst of all, absolutely everyone knew about it.

There will be no teen pregnancy or illegal drug use in this story.  Anything else that could realistically happen in a high school setting is a possibility.

Finalist for Best Secondary Characterization and Best Action or Drama Story:

Indie TwiFic Awards


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 177490
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Happy Birthday?

edward should have said happy birthday!..lol



Author's Response:

Yes, he probably should have.  But he had his reasons for keeping his distance.

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Morning After

emmett was right..lol..edward doesn't have the right to be offended when he's dating tanya in front of bella...:O



Author's Response:

Edward really doesn't have a leg to stand on.  But that doesn't seem to be deterring him from being jealous.

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Goodbye to You

lol!...so glad bella didn't fall for edward's mood swings!



Author's Response:

Me too!  The girl needed to preserve some dignity.  Thanks so much for the review!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Confrontations

gasp!!..does edward realize she's lying??!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Cocoon

awww..haha...happy birthday!!...love that edward and bella ARE finally together!!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - You'll Be My Downfall

gasp!...i just wonder how Edward is going to deal with things!..maybe Bella should see a shrink..:O

 
A Kick in the Balls by mutt229 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

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Bella is entering her senior year of college with her two best friends and roommates, Alice and Emmett. Her final year in college is going to be one for the recordbooks, as Bella and her crew invite two new roommates to share their house with them.

 

Rated M/NC-17 for adult themes and lemons. AH/OOC

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Claire, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Heidi, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 147307
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Hot & Cold

love the double bicycle...so funnny

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Not Ready to Make Nice (born2speakmirth & shabbyapple)

gasp!..can't wait for next update..:D

 
Tutor by Mentalistecbm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 180]
Summary:

The Cullens move to a new school, in a new state, with new students. Edward is… pretty much a nerd. Dweeb, Geek, Turd, Loser. Whatever you wanna call him. Bella isn’t. She already goes to Forks High. Well-known, actually. Not your average Nerdy Edward/Slutty Bella fanfic. Originality is all over, babe. So read.

 Thank you to ebonyy and PosionousGarden! (: original two inside. this one is just to perfect.

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 46201
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hahaha..random..but when he played new boys to annoy rosalie i thought he was gonna play I'M ON A BOAT...*that song is badddd ass..and love this chapter..:D



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

what's UST??...i'm seriously out of the abbrev. messaging system and i'm a teenager?!



Author's Response:

UST= Unresolved Sexual Tension. It's a fic thing.

Thanks for reading... :)

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ohhhhh..hahaha...good to know!

thank u!



Author's Response:

you're welcome! glad i could help.

 
Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9900]
Summary: Feature

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.

 


Banner by steffyxxface



Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hahaha...i hope he helps?..:D



Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out. :)

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

haha...no flying object here!...i really like this story.:D



Author's Response: Yay! Thank you.

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

getting fired from a shrink??...omg..that's awesome..



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

this is my favorite chapter!..



Author's Response: So happy you liked it. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

yes i still want to listen!..:DD

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

sighhhh..i hope edward gets better..(:



Author's Response: In time... Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

edward fell asleep..cute..haha



Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

awwww...i hope Edward finally tries to get help soon!..:O

this is one of the best chapters..:D

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

yay!..hopefully Edward??!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

hahah...this chapter was cute!

 
Summary:

An old friend calls the Cullens to Italy.  The Volturi have discovered a secret of Demetri and Heidi’s: they possess a potentially powerful weapon and the Volturi want it as their own.  Carlisle, owing Demetri a favor, takes the family to Italy to collect the item to bring back to Forks for safekeeping. 

Little do they know, the item is a 16 year old human girl named Bella, who already possesses amazing abilities in her human form.  Edward falls instantly in love with the girl but is it an effect of her amazing abilities or has he finally found what he has been searching for his entire existence? Will he risk his own life and family to protect her from the Volturi?


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Esme, Heidi, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 27787
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Forbidden

hahaha...edward is a DORK



Author's Response:

Yeah, Ed is such a dork...what's new.  He can be so frustrating sometimes...lol  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

What if it wasn't bloodlust that drew Edward to Bella in the beginning? What if he had recognized her as his soulmate from the very moment he saw her? This is the story of how a lost soul finally came to be with his one true love.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 23043
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i like it!!!



Author's Response:

YAY!!

Thanks for reading!

 




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