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love twilight series..but bella is too dependent and whiny..love that kristen stewart gives her some dignity in the movies...*sad that breaking dawn went in the direction of bella getting pregnant...*interested in other ideas of what could have happened...:D


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Summary:

Bella is having trouble finding a job and when her life seems like it couldn't get any worse, she bumps into a stranger that she is instantly attracted to.

After a heated night together she finds out that her new boss is none other then her one night stand. Can her objection to office romances be broken with the seductive Edward Cullen?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 24590
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: April 18, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: First Day Jitters

hmmm...it would have been interesting if bella had gotten hired by jasper and not edward so she would have ACTUALLY earned it..lol..otherwise interesting

 
Not Meant to Be by klighted Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Growing up at Volturi Preparatory School, Bella always had a thing for Edward Cullen. At times it seemed as though he shared her affections, but after being rejected again and again, Bella decides to move on with her life. Then one night, ten years after graduation, the sparks between Edward and Bella are ignited again. Bella is reluctant to let Edward back into her life and her heart. Will they find happiness this time or are some things just Not Meant to Be?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 25872
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

awww!...even as a boy he was a manwhore!..poooor bella!..lol

 
Second Chances by lislar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 742]
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Renee is a mess and constantly on the move, dragging fifteen year old Bella around with her from one dump to another.  Her life takes a turn for the worst and Bella is sent to Forks to live with the father she never knew existed.  Charlie enrolls Bella into a support group to help her deal with her past.  The support group doesn’t just change her life, but her intense attraction to her mysterious doctor and their subsequent relationship indelibly shapes the course of her future.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 198415
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2012


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Pinpricks of Clarity

I didn't expect Bella to be so shameless with the ice cream fiasco, otherwise I really like this story...Edward should have contacted her sooner..:(

 
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Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Far From Apathy

Heidi is a ho!..lol

 
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Date: March 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: No Turning Back

I really loved this chapter!....but will it end up being Jasper/Bella since Edward is so old?!

 
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Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Family Legacy

Seth is a sweetie!!...and Victoria is actually really sweet!..Mike..UGHHHH..haha

 
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Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Family Legacy

Seth is a sweetie!!...and Victoria is actually really sweet!..Mike..UGHHHH..haha

 
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Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Just the Same Old Bella

did they all know Edward had feelings for her?!!

 
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Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: That Kind of Man

this is the first time that i saw Edward as a bit of a creep, when he's reading the poems to Bella just because of the ones he picked...but i can't wait to see how it progresses...I didn't expect Bella to confess all that!

 
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Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Looking Forward (sixeightshuffle)

Bella doesn't end up with Jacob?..no jasper then?...so Edward?!!..lol

 
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Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Fresh Revelations

Alice doesn't like Jacob?!

 
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Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Painful Confessions

ahhhh..poor Rosalie!...Emmett is such a sweetheart

 
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Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Shedding Guilt

The explanation of the cookie and how Renee didn't conceal her drugs makes Bella's naivity a lot clearer..:)..I hope Charlie doesn't lose too much trust in Bella when he finds out.

 
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Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Forging a Path

Bella was naive, but i'm so glad Victoria helped her!..i thought something was going to happen as soon as Victoria left!

 
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Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Stages of Grief

Edward is trying to figure out what he feels for her!..not going to lie...I read a few of earlier reviews and i'm so happy it has Bella and Edward as adults!..can't wait to get there...love this story..:)

 
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Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Morsel of Knowledge

I'm really curious about Edward's view of Jasper!..it seems like it's turning into a j/b..lol.

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Gifts

this was a really sweet chapter!!...i love bella and charlie is so awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews!  I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.  I love hearing your thoughts.

 
Summary:

 

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Welcome to the city of Miami.  Where the days are hot & the nights are even hotter.  Beautiful beaches, beautiful bodies.  Fake tans.  Strong drinks.  The hottest clubs.  Fast cars, fast women.  The city where money buys you everything.  Where the divorce rate is high, silicone is a necessity & sex is a game.  Let's Play.

Bella Swan 'Newton' is living in Miami.  Her days are filled with her two best friends, sisters Alice and Cynthia Brandon, her boss Jake, and her pending divorce from her high school sweetheart Mike.  After a one night stand with  Miami playboy Edward Cullen, Bella is thrust into what Miami has to offer.  The most beautiful clubs, luxurious dinners, and more money than she could ever image.   There's only two problems.  One, Edward is married.  Two, he's Mike's lawyer.  What happens when the best sex of your life comes from a man who is wanting to destroy you?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 60361
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Ch. 5 - Trash

I don't get why Bella is so stupid..if a guy stuck me with that kind of bill, Sex would be the LASSSSSSSSSST thing I could think about

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Ch. 7 - Spike

hahaha..I was hoping she would take his shorts and leave him there naked!..but the date works too..:)

 
Summary:

Bella is trapped in a loveless marriage with Edward Cullen - a man she hardly knows. When his father dies, Edward uproots them from their life in New York City and moves into his father's now-empty house in the heart of Colorado. Amidst the desolate, beautiful landscape Bella begins to realize that perhaps there is more to her cold, apathetic husband  than she thought.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 41782
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Storm

awww...Edward is showing his feelings now..:]

this is reallly good!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Office

reminds me of the scarlet letter lol..when her husband hates her when he turns up in town..:O

 
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Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Dinner

aww...it's depressing...but it looks like edward is starting to love her again..:]

 
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Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Driveway

that's horrible!..he's soooo mean!

 
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Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Mother

awww..hope edward forgives her soon!..:O

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Office

was really bummed because of no updates recently, but apparently this story has been being posted on fanfiction.net...it's a lot farther down the plot now for anyone who was keeping up as much as i was..:D

 




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