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Penname: carog91 [Contact]
Real name: caroline
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love twilight series..but bella is too dependent and whiny..love that kristen stewart gives her some dignity in the movies...*sad that breaking dawn went in the direction of bella getting pregnant...*interested in other ideas of what could have happened...:D


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Broken by Ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 458]
Summary:

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 32789
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Dead Souls

Ughhh...I kind of feel for James, even though I know I shouldn't!

 
Summary:

Edward Masen is a former NFL football player who was injured and could not return to playing. After taking some time off to figure out what he wanted to do with his life, since playing football was out of the question, he decided to go with coaching high school football. He leads a simple, quiet life with his friends in Forks until he meets the woman that will change his life forever. Bella Swan decides to move back home with her younger brother when she gets a teaching position at her old school in Forks. AH/Canon Couples/alternating between Edward and Bella POV. Rated M ;)

Huge thanks to Jessica1971 for being my beta once again.  I could not do this without her. :) 

Disclaimer: SM owns Twilight.

Thank you to Heatherdawnc for making another terrific banner for me. =)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 170353
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Fireworks and Late Night Talking

ummm...hotttt...lol....i want edward

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

yay prologue..haha

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF

omg...ew..disgusting...hahahaha...why didn't he just ask her out when she slept at his house again!!!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF

omg...ew..disgusting...hahahaha...why didn't he just ask her out when she slept at his house again!!!

 
Summary: Feature

A story about love, about death, about keeping secrets, and dealing with the consequences.  Bella and Edward meet at a hospital when she is diagnosed with a life threatening disease and he is recovering from knee surgery.  She confides her fears to him; he changes his life because of her.  This is a story about their journey through the confusion, awkwardness, pain, and beauty of first love.

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Excerpt from Chapter 2:
“What are you most afraid of?”  Edward asks one last question.

“I'm not afraid of dying,” I answer truthfully.

“You're not afraid of dying?” he repeats, incredulous.

“No.  There's so much more.  I'm afraid of losing my hair but that's not my biggest fear.  I'm afraid of leaving my mom and dad all alone.  I'm afraid that if I survive, I'll never have children of my own.”  I yawn again.  Edward is quiet and I think for a moment that he's fallen asleep.  “Edward,” I whisper, in case he is asleep, “What are you most afraid of?”

“I'm afraid I'm falling for you,” he whispers back so softly that I'm unsure if I've heard him correctly. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 82940
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Butterflies

this is cute..:]

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart

i'm 18..but i prefer 90s music..haha..CURE ROCKS..*friday i'm in love..:DD

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Doubt/No Doubt

gone to NO concerts...but so glad no doubt is back together...really want to make it to one...:D

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Homecoming

prom-my date was too shy to ask me so i asked a girl friend...and i ended up going with both of them so it was totally awkward cuz i wanted to spend time with him myself...hahaha...*tear

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: A Sort of New Moon

new moon and twilight are the best of the series..:]

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Sweet Ginger

u don't want me is overused...but it actually fit in this one..lol

 

and there are tooo many favs. in twilight..:]

 
The Ties That Bind by yesyov Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary:

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What happens when your past collides with your present and changes your future forever? Come read The Ties That Bind.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 367368
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 - Planning the Future

:(...i can be patient and wait for updates!..but I understand..:)...I adore the ending to this chapter..!!....i'll put you on my author alert in case you ever have time to make a sequel!



Author's Response:

Hello! The final chapter has just been sent into the queue here on Twi for validation.  Thanks for reading.

 
Summary:

 

She was standing by the bar looking beautiful. I hadn't seen her in two years. She smiled at me and tried to say hi. I couldn't say anything to her. Memories were racing through my mind, of a time when we were happy...

banner by heatherdawnc! Thanks hearther!

http://twi-ficpromotions.blogspot.com/2010/04/sometimes-it-is-not-enough.html


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 112640
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18- Comfort

so glad for an update!!..so long..lol..it was great..!..:D

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- In the Beginning

haha..the prologue makes it seem like bella hurt him, but now it would make sense as to why!.:D

 
Summary:

fanfiction breaking dawn twilight saga forever dusk poster

PRESENTING:

What Should've Happened in Breaking Dawn

Picking up right from where Eclipse left off in the meadow, Bella changes her mind. Instead of marrying Edward and having him turn her, she decides to go to college with him instead after they make love for the first time. But upon hearing about this, the Volturi kidnap Bella. But what plans do they have in mind for her?

In the meantime, the Cullens and the wolves team up to find Bella. But complications arise between Edward and Jacob who seem to be getting closer and closer to killing one another. They both have secrets that they've been keeping from Bella. But what will Bella do when the Volturi reveal everything to her?

 

Forever Dusk turns the world of The Twilight Saga completely on its head. It's darker than any of the original books and presents a twist that will change your view on the entire series forever.

 

It's time for Bella to choose...Life or Death?

 

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Categories: Pre-Twilight, Post-Eclipse Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Eleazar, Elizabeth Masen, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Leah, Marcus, Other Character, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 19769
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Love

lol..i think renee was right

 

 
Summary:

Edward is a sugar addicted seventeen-year old who thinks he is a vampire. He is in love with Charlie Swan, who drives in the town's supply of sugar every week. But when Bella arrives, she decides to destroy their relationship and take Edward for her own.


Categories: Crackfic Characters: Bella, Billy, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 13672
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2009 Updated: June 16, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Honey Bear

wtf???>.....hahahaha...this is insanely funny!...LMAO...ROTFLOL...SO RANDOM....HAHAHAHAH

 
Gates by amp23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 441]
Summary:

Edward with book

Do you like stories where Bella is sweet and kind and mature beyond her years?  And when she and Edward meet they fall in love immediately and have lots of smexy times? And Jake is their dog?

If yes, then this is NOT the story for you.

But if like stories where Bella is insecure, moody, argumentative and occasionally thoughtless, or stories where Bella is kind of involved with both Edward and Jacob at the same time and dealing poorly with the situation - then you might like this story.

Here's what it's about:

Bella has just started her freshman year at Yale after taking a year off between high school and college. She is trying to balance her relationship with her long distance boyfriend, Jacob, while making friends at school and dealing with her classes.  She is also trying to manage the problem that caused her to take the year off before starting college.

And then she gets a ride from a Yalie named Edward Cullen . . .

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 121361
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Going to Brown

lol...this is the first fan fic i've read where bella is actually in love with jake!...:DD

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Game

lol..edward as a player?...*and bella so judgemental!..hahah...:D

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Finals Week

gasp...Edward WAS kind of a douche..and Bella did keep telling him she can't do anything with him, so it's his fault for pushing her..:O

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - New Year's Eve

jake seems great but when he let her get drunk at the drama after party, i really started to hate him!..

i hope bella chooses someone soon!

 
Facebook Friends by GreenPuma Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1208]
Summary:

Bella is shocked when her sexy but standoffish lab partner, Edward, friends her on Facebook.  Will her best friend, Alice, convince her to accept Edward’s friend request?  Or, will she write it off as a prank of the conceited, spoiled rich kid she knows Edward to be?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 71379
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2009 Updated: April 23, 2011


Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: If I Were a Boy

lol..why are edward and bella taking facebook so seriously?!..haha..it's cute!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: If I Were a Boy

hahaha..wanted to comment on the first chapter!

 

old high school teachers, managers from work i didn't know liked me, and ex-boyfriend who i hated(but now myspace regulary..haha)

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Little Earthquakes

aww..lol..it's funny how friending someone online can be so awkward!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: It's a Fire

awww!..it's cuz he liked her!...this is sooo cute!

i love it!

 
Reviewer: carog91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town

haha!...cute!!...i don't listen to pearl jam...but have heard them..

i'm thinking of giving them a try now...hahah...

 

and maybe radio is a good depiction of their relationship...*creep, karma police..lol

and smashing pumpkins...*1979,  today, tonight, tonight

 

lol..!

 




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