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Penname: newmommyak [ Contact]
Real name: JLKoenig
Status: Member
Member Since: December 20, 2009
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Summary: Bella is a newborn vampire in Volterra with no human memories and an aversion to human blood. Aro decides to send her to live with the Cullens. Will Bella ever uncover her past? will she find what she is missing? What is Aro's master plan? Story came in second place for Best Vampire Bella at the Twilight Awards.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 135619
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed 
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Forever
I loved this story!
Summary: Click here to watch the video trailer created by lilabut.
At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks. Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night. Edward/Bella/Jacob
A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: June 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: His Hand
Thank you for the rest of the backstory! Author's Response: No problem. It was pretty necessary by this point. Couldn't leave you hanging forever.
Thanks for comment. :)
Summary: Bella woke up in the Phoenix hospital and couldn't remember how she got there. A year later, she's living in Jacksonville with her mother, but she still has no memory of her four months in Forks. Can she recover what she lost by returning?
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Word count: 49326
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2009
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed 
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
I loved this story. I look forward to more from you!
Summary: 
What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.
Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.
Dying By Degrees on discussion forum. http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
So loving your story. Thank you for writing again!
Summary: 
Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori . Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice. How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?
Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...
AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.
~*~ warning ~*~ story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter. if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue.
If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN http://apps.rainn.org/ohl-bridge/
Disclaimer: I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Twilighted Supervisory Beta: psymom Twilighted Validation Beta: Lion_in_the_Land
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2012
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Aro's Heir
"They were all was oblivious."??
I love what you are doing here. Making the babies more like babies, letting Edward hear Bella (not sure how that's going to work - but you've done such a good job with the rest - I'm trusting you to have not left her unprotected).
I love this story. It's difficult and heart-rending, but seems very true.
Summary:  
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: The Vision
I'm a new reader and I'm very impressed!
Summary: 
Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...
Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take
I just read this story to date today. I am loving Southerncomfortward! Bella with a backbone & some maturity is nice, too. I'm glad someone brought up the lack of obvious condom use a few chapters back and that you've been writing it in (for the most part) ever since.
Just wanted to write an express my appreciation for your fine storytelling! I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Coming and Going
Is Bella going to drop a hint that Edward should finally pop the question?
Summary: Summary: AU. A powerful group of humans know of the existence of vampires and werewolves and strict rules are in place for the uneasy coexistence between the three kinds. Transforming humans without tacit permission is banned and all violators and victims are ordered destroyed. Bella was attacked when she was eight years old but miraculously survived. She returns to Forks during her junior year in high school and encounters the Olympic Coven. Against her will, she is drawn to Edward Cullen and into the dangerous world of shifting loyalties and deadly intrigue.
Thanks to JO (Cullenitis) for the AWESOME banner!
Thanks to another JO (sleepyjo at ffnet) for reading and editing the first 13(!) chapters.
Please direct your thanks to her for saving you from the whiplash that is born from my confused tenses and wonky grammar.
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73297
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: February 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Full Circle
This is a really interesting take on the characters in a very well written novella. I hope you write more, you have quite a talent.
Summary: Bella Swan, a young registered pharmacist from New Jersey, takes a job in the Forks, WA Regional Hospital, determined to start her life over. She meets the handsome, brooding Edward Cullen, who also works in the hospital's pharmacy...but on the night shift, of course.
Will Edward be able to control his agonizing thirst for Bella's blood? How will the emotionally wounded Bella react to her increasing attraction to him? Can Jacob be effective as a minor, if consequential, character? And most important, can Serendipitous refrain from the gratuitous use of hokey questions to attract readers?
Huge thanks to the talented and generous Anne Cullen for the banner!
Canon pairings; the Cullens are still vampires. Edward's and Bella's ages are advanced to their early-mid 20s, to give them more adult sensibilities. Other than that, the story parallels "Twilight," with some new adventures in line with the characters' ages and situations. The chapters alternate between Edward's and Bella's POV. While it's not a *funny* version of "Twilight," there are definite sparks of humor in it.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 206646
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Bella, Chapter 11
I hope that this doesn't go as terrible as it did in the books. No stupid running with several fights. A 23 year-old Edward has just got to have more sense than that.
Otherwise - great chapter! I love this Bella! Author's Response:
Hmmm.....I can't say very much because I don't want to give anything away. Edward does want to get Bella out of there ASAP, which makes sense -- why tempt fate? They'll make it back to Washington, but I won't say anything more about that yet. I do hope you'll enjoy it.
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you like Bella.
Summary:
Bella is soul-searching at a quiet lodge in Forks and she meets the secretive, tormented Edward Masen. Just as their relationship transcends friendship, Edward’s past comes back to haunt him in the most brutal way. B&E are human, but oh…there will be vampires. AU.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No
Word count: 291742
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2011
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: April 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: The Light & The Dark Pt. 2
:) I'm sympathetically eating comfort foods with you.
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: September 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Black Magic & Blackout
Very nicely written. I like the not-too-much-detail on the intimacy.
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: January 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Crushing Blows, Velvet, & Stone Pt. 2
I'm absolutely loving your story so far, as painful as it is. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: April 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Difference a Day Makes
So glad to see another chapter! This is such a lovely story.
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: May 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Eggshells & Grand Scales Pt. 1
Another great chapter! I'm excited to see where the Cullens fit into this.
Summary: We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.
"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!" ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails
Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: June 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Fists and Fur
I liked how it played out - all of it. Thanks for not changing Bella just because of an accident - I always find that annoying. Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! No, Bella was never going to be changed because of this accident. I know a lot of people that she would be and they were especially annoyed at Edward's hesitation about it. Bella's certainly going to have something to say about waking up and still being human though. ;) Thank you so much for sticking with me during my absence, for reading and also reviewing. I deeply appreciate it. =)
~Lisa
Summary:
"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.
But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.
Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.
To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.
He'll find her. He has to.
HE HAS TO."
- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received. THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here. It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)
Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted. Does it want her back? What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...
Rated for later chapters.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Set
Awesome chapter! I love the witch-doctor. What a neat character.
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: March 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Go
Finally! :)
Summary: 
EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.
Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Training, Trust, and Christmas
I love this version of the "untold" bits from EPOV. I think the relationship is a lot more believable than the overly sweet one in the books.
Double-checking BD - the Voltari overthrew the Romanians over fifteen hundred years before, not fifteen thousand. Author's Response: I even knew that, but for some reason typed thousand! LOL. I was thinking one thousand five hundred, and before I wrote the hundred the thousand part stuck! Grrr!! Thanks for pointing that out!
Summary: 
*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*
After receiving an invitation to write the biography of the severely reclusive author Ethan Church, Bella develops a reluctant obsession with his novels and by extension him. When she accepts his offer, the old, dying man she's presented with and the young, too perfect man she comes across on the nearly empty estate have her convinced she's missing some very important parts of the story.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Word count: 36732
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: May 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: The Other
I love this story! So glad to see you updating again! Author's Response: Thank you :)
Summary: The Cullens return to Forks to keep an eye on a new generation of Quileute shape-shifters. They find this new pack of wolves to be not only large, but led by the impulsive Jacob Black. When Edward falls for Bella Swan, who just happens to be Jacob's girlfriend,what will happen between the Quileuetes and the Cullens ?
Amazing banner by Anne Cullen
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Aro
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 79824
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: March 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue
I like your Edward. I'm not really into the super-angst thing. You changed some things but were not entirely out of left field with it. I hope to read more from you.
Summary: 
THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.
After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?
Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!
Favorite review so far:
Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.
Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I'd like to see them get more intimate. It's unreal when they go from fairly chaste kissing to sex in one night. Not a way for a vampire to build up his self-control!
I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Just to let you know, this story is on a little hiatus. Like a 6 month hiatus because I'm getting married in 6 months and everything is coming down at once! Thank you for the review!
Summary:
The dim memories of being pregnant shook me to the core, and before I knew it, I was snarling at him. The sounds flowing from me were animalistic, feral, and very frightening. I was like a vicious dog, a screaming cat, engaging another of my kind in a brilliant display of nature.
The only sounds in the meadow were the wind and the leaves tossing back and forth; the animals, sensing the coming violence, had fallen silent and retreated further into the woods. Even the sunlight, which had been shining brightly in La Push, had become muted by the sudden appearance of cloud cover. Nature was cowering in anticipation of what was about to happen.
In an act of desperation, Edward conspires with Carlisle and the pack, to save Bella's life. The plan is simple: The wolves provide a distraction so Edward can drug Bella without the interference of his family. The plan is put into action, and, when it's all over, the only thing that remains is an unquenchable desire for revenge.
Banner provided by the lovely, talented Frozen Soldier.
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 126318
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2009 Updated: October 07, 2011
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: February 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Lambs Become Lions
So is the child not dead or something? I'm confused.
Summary: "Should a man be sentenced to hang, he may be saved by a virtuous maiden who agrees to marry him." -Early French Colonial Law
E/B, AU, AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Word count: 79344
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2009 Updated: November 17, 2009
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: March 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Home - EPOV (v)
Loved it!
Summary: **CURRENTLY ON HIATUS**
Two roads diverged in a wood
And I took the one less traveled by
And that has made all the difference
~
Robert Frost
Devastated by Edward's departure, Bella is left broken and alone in the small town of Forks. She turns to Jacob Black for friendship and comfort. Instead of shirking his advances, Bella finds herself wanting more and embarks on a relationship with Jacob. Will their fledgling relationship be able to withstand the trials of fate?
Meanwhile, Edward is tracking Victoria in South America, but he soon discovers that the hunter of one may become the prey of another...
When you're broken beyond repair, what will it take to fix you?
Non canon pairings, twists on existing New Moon events with some surprises along the way.
Rated for later chapters.
*Nominated for the Indie Twific Awards*
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 50748
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010
Reviewer: newmommyak Signed
Date: May 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: A Dustland Fairytale
I'm really enjoying your unique take on the story. I look forward to reading more when your life settles down a bit. Good luck!
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