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"In a moment’s time, I’d be his, entirely. The one thing I’d wanted more than anything itself. The pain, the pleasure- it was worth it knowing I’d be able to claim to be his…at long last.

 

"The silence in the room was deafening. The intimacy of this moment made the world hold its breath in anticipation. Time ceased to exist; the only fathomable concepts were Edward and me."

For all of us who read Breaking Dawn, closed the back cover and said; "Yeah...not what I expected..."

This is my version, my ending of the Twilight Saga. In short, it's purpose is to show how Edward and Bella meet the trials and tribulations of being newlyweds, Bella being a newborn as well as other things life has to offer. It's meant to highlight their love, devotion, the strengthening of their bond as well as how they grow together emotionally and physically.

Rated NC-17 for Mature themes, language and adult and sexual content.

WARNING: quite a few lemons here ;]

 

ON HIATUS!! LOOK FOR MY NEWEST WORK AND THE FOCUS OF MY ATTENTION, "Love Story" !!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Beginning
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 132794
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2009


Reviewer: Sweetface Signed
Date: March 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Tortured Doll

I think this is my absolute favorite fanfic so far.  FAN-fucking-tastic....sigh.

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13657]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: Sweetface Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Very nice!  I LOVED the jaw lick since I picture Rob Pattinson as Edward & his amazing jaw line is my absolute favorite part of him.  How I would LOVE to lick it myself....sigh.

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Unexpected

Great chapter.  Very hot!  Too bad there can't be some side bar with the list because I can't remember what #10 is.  Going to have to scroll back up & look.  Great job.

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Love, love, love it.  I wish it had happened like this in Breaking Dawn.  So loving, so romantic, so sexy.  Well done.

 
Summary: Feature

Blood & Lust banner

EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.

Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.

Golden Lemon


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: Sweetface Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Everything's Biological

I am slowly making it through my lenghty fanfic to be read list.  Really liking this so far.  I love the recap with the Midnight sun feel to it.  I'm going to try to review a lot since I know that's what you all like.  Got the idea to read this story from the Twigasm podcast.  Better late than never.

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Purgatory

DAYUM!!! That was HOT!  I think I'm gonna have to read it again.  One of my fantasies is to be 'asleep' while someone touches me, so I particularly liked that.  Well freaking done.  Whew!

Twilight Junkie

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Exquisite Torture

Whew.....<fans self>  pardon me while I drag my husband upstairs for some release.  Thank you!

twilight Junkie

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Wedding Bell Blues

WOW....just wow! First of all, I was so glad that you glossed over the whole wedding.  I know what happens & just wanted to skip ahead to the good stuff, so thank you.

Secondly...that ending was fucking amazing!  I have read so many fanfic 'honeymoons' that I wasn't expecting him to lose it like that but it really makes sense. 

I also love in lemons how he always 'licks his fingers clean' - that's pretty sexy. 

I realize that I am a bit late to this party, but I am also reading a fic called 'Oso Bella' by Myg, which is very good & I LOVED, until I started reading Blood & Lust.  So, today when I read the updated OB chapter, I just thought...."meh...it's no Blood & Lust".

Well done.



Author's Response:

Haha, well I'm very flattered!! I'm happy that you finally started reading. I hope you like the rest of it.

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Honeymoon is Over?

Really loving how you are tying it into the original books (I think, unless I'm getting it confused with other fic) - I couldn't remember if the black lace was in BD or in another fic.  No matter.  Great job once again.

Twilight Junkie



Author's Response:

No, this is all straight from BD. I went through that thing with a fine tooth comb for a year as I wrote these chapters. I would pick a section that I thought needed some EPOV or a missing lemon, and I sort of stuck it right in, but the major details are all the same.

 
Fire and Ice by Franny Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 336]
Summary:

This story begins by re-imagining a favorite scene from Eclipse, in which Edward and Bella are stuck in a blizzard and must call on Jacob to keep Bella warm.  The original scene hints at Bella's curiosity, Edward's awareness, and Jacob's lust, and the possibilities that lie within that love triangle.  This version asks, what if Bella took what she wanted? What if Edward's long-dormant humanity were finally sparked? And what if Jacob's fantasy finally came true?

"Anything I had ever felt, allowed myself to feel, had been only a hint, a taste, a glimmer of that all-consuming heat.  That heat that Bella had plunged me headlong into, mercilessly immersing me in Jacob’s subconscious, ruthlessly repaying me for her months of frustration.  Teaching me desire in one cold, confusing night."

 

happy to see my local Blockbuster advertising my fic for me:

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 54025
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2010


Reviewer: Sweetface Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

So freaking HOT!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an anomaly as far as Bella Swan is concerned, defying all her preconceived notions about the whorishness of hockey players. Through incessant stalking and persistence, can Edward wears down Bella's resistence and teaches her to embrace her inner hockey hooker? A ridiculous love story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 14519
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: August 19, 2010


Reviewer: Sweetface Signed
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Jeebus, Edward's a fucking moron.  As soon as I heard what Aro wanted him to do, I thought for sure he would immediately call Bella & explain why he had to present that to the media. Angst.....arg!

 And seriously....what's up with the glossing over of the sex.   Still loving the story though. 

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

FUCK.  I hate when I'm reading a story that isn't finished.   It's like torture. 

love it. love you,

Twilight Junkie

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

YAY!   Fucking YAY!

LOVED this chapter! 

Randy Dick, Randy Balls, punching the Cullen Beaver, Butt puck....giggle snort...good stuff.

FUCK, why can't this story be complete???

xoxo

Twilight Junkie

 
Reviewer: Sweetface Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 27 - Public Love Professions, Communication and Makeing Up Are Wicked Fun(Ninapolitan)

I fucking loved this chapter SO much!  Sigh, you rock my world. 

WHEN DO WE GET MORE TWI (FOUR)GASM PODCASTS????  And, yes, I'm shouting. I have a 10 mile run to do this weekend & I NEED to listen to you funny bitches while I suffer.





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