Reviewer: kiki-twilighter-ever Signed
July 25, 2010
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ohh...I loved Carlisle's thoughts on Edward and how he looked at him. And about how Edward never treated Bella as his equal was so right. And then how he did change after Eclipse was spot on too. I really just loved this o/s and you totally got the emotion right, at least for me. Good job. =)Author's Response:
Thank you so much. There is a delightful story about Bella getting back to 1918 and trying to save Edward from the flu. But the real point is that he is - like many young men at the time - quite the male chauvinist, arrogant and controlling. However he is changing . as he changed in Eclipse. I am not sure that the film, that is spectacular an a joy for the eyes, did manage to catch how Edward grows ....
Now I can't wait for for the updates of YOUR story.