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Penname: kiki-twilighter-ever [Contact]
Real name: Kiki Sutherland
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Member Since: December 15, 2009
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A man at last by Camilla Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Carlisle


 


This story can stand alone, but I would like it to become part of a series open to other authors. The title of the series would be “Growth” and should address moments of Edward’s growth, from teenager angst to adulthood. This first story is called “A man at last” and is written in Carlisle's POV. It describes the last moment of growth, at the end of Breaking Dawn, recalling briefly what the other steps were.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Carlisle
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Series: Growth
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 916
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2009


Reviewer: kiki-twilighter-ever Signed
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohh...I loved Carlisle's thoughts on Edward and how he looked at him. And about how Edward never treated Bella as his equal was so right. And then how he did change after Eclipse was spot on too. I really just loved this o/s and you totally got the emotion right, at least for me. Good job. =)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. There is a delightful story about Bella getting back to 1918 and trying to save Edward from the flu. But the real point is that he is - like many young men at the time - quite the male chauvinist, arrogant and controlling. However he is changing .  as he changed in Eclipse. I am not sure that the film, that is spectacular an a joy for the eyes, did manage to catch how Edward grows ....

 Now I can't wait for for the updates of YOUR story.

 
Fugue Forgotten by lmbrtvll Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 242]
Summary:

 

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Thanks to the talented falconcranelove for the amazing banner.

Abandoned by her father in a less than perfect psychiatric institution, Bella is barely hanging on. Spurred on by Alice's vision of the girl they're meant to help, the Cullen family begins to permeate Bella's life. Can they undo the damage and find what is lost?

 

Eventually ExB.  Dark.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 18877
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2010 Updated: July 03, 2010


Reviewer: kiki-twilighter-ever Signed
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i know it's been a while since this story has been updated, but would you please think about posting a new chapter? I myself have a story that has kind of been abadonned, but yours is just soo good.




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