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Summary: Renesmee is finally "fully grown" and ready to start living. How do the people she loves most react when she is ready to be a woman?
Gravity Gravity!
So, I recently was reading through Gravity, and I realized how bad some of the begining (like the first thirty :]) chapters kinda...well, SUCK! so i'm going to be reposting the edited chapters of Gravity over on FF.net. same story, just better!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 174580
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: August 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Unification
This was an awesome story! My favorite Jacob/Renesmee yet. I haven't been reviewing all along because its complete and I didn't see the point, but now that its over, I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading it. Thank you!
Summary:  You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.
This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life? Would she have found happiness with Jacob? And would Edward be too late?
* First in a series of stories
~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~
~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~
Winner of:
Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No
Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 72: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
I think a nice imprint, not involving Bella... maybe involving Mike Newton????? would be great! Just do it quickly, pretty, pretty please. I can hardly wait to read the rest of the story! Author's Response: That would be funny, but I don't know that it's possible. Leah's already seen Mike, and since she didn't imprint then, she can't now. Plus, he's probably a little scared of her. That leaves the male wolves...hmmmm....
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 70: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I just stumbled on the summary... I had been thinking about doing a story starting from a similar point and I wanted to know what yours looked like. I'm really glad I found it. Author's Response: I should warn you that this is a very common, almost cliche theme for the Jake/Bella part of the fandom. I'm pretty sure that everyone who devotes their stories to Jake has written something that covers what might have been if Alice hadn't seen Bella jump or Edward didn't go to Volterra or the Cullens just didn't come back. That's not to say you shouldn't write it, but it has been done A LOT. I know a lot of readers are getting into the all-human stories, though, and there certainly aren't enough of them that include Jake as a decent guy who's with Bella.
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 67: Closure: Bella's POV
Nice twist... but I do feel sorry for Jacob
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 53: Nuisance: Bella's POV
OK, not only do I LOVE the story, but I adore the comments. I'll try to be better about reviewing. I'm actually just so engrossed that I just keep hitting the next button. Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: September 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 76: Diversion: Jacob's POV
It doesn't matter whether the BPOV and JPOV are together or separate as long as you post them together so we can read them back to back. I can't wait to see how this ends and now I'm already looking forward to the sequels. So whichever way you decide to go, don't leave us insuspense for too long, okay?
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 73: Distractions: Bella's POV
I am so glad that you finally got the new chapter up! But it was worth the wait. I laughed outloud when Embry hid in the back of the truck. I can hardly wait until Jacob's POV and shopping with the girls!
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: July 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 75: Diversion: Bella's POV
Its still a gret story!I wish it hadn't been so long, but I'm glad you were able to post this. I can't wait to read about Jake in a friller apron!
Summary: Edward Cullen is an anomaly as far as Bella Swan is concerned, defying all her preconceived notions about the whorishness of hockey players. Through incessant stalking and persistence, can Edward wears down Bella's resistence and teaches her to embrace her inner hockey hooker? A ridiculous love story.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 14519
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: August 19, 2010
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: February 24, 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I don't know if you even still monitor this, but I'm wondering if you are planning on posting/reposting this and Inked Armor on your blog. I have heard nothing but wonderful things about both stories and would really love to read them.
Summary: 
Jacob Black has been in Renesmee's life from the beginning - emerging gradually from the role of protector to best friend.
When Nessie's feelings for her best friend begin to shift in a decidedly more-than-friendly direction, will Jacob be prepared to meet the requirements of the imprinting and respond to that shift? Or will the fact that he literally helped raise her inhibit their relationship from progressing forward?
Sexy CoA banner by the awesome, amazing, beauitful achelle131. Imprint Me banner by the fantastic artbeatsandlife.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles, Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 41069
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2010 Updated: October 31, 2010
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: November 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Consummation
No problem about understanding... just write when you can. I do miss the updates, but it gives me something to look forward to!
Reviewer: lablab73 Signed
Date: August 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Orphaned
So far its great!
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