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Summary: Living on the streets is hard for Bella Swan but not as hard as putting up with Edward Cullen when he drags her into his world of sex, drugs and rock’n’roll. She needs a lucky break and he needs an image make-over. Will they be able to help each other out before they kill each other?
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Kick-ass banner by Irritable Grizzzly.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Word count: 343376
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2010
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: November 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Alley
I read your other stories, Grasping Darkness and The Diva Diaries, and I really like them. The Diva Diaries is actually one of the best fan fics I've ever read. I checked the other day if you had any other stories written and found this, and I must say this story has the potential to intrigue me just as much as the other two. It will be very interesting to see where this goes, since Edward and Bella are such complete opposites. Thank you for the joy you bring your readers, Kiya.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: November 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast & Belching
Oh yes, these two are probably headed for both bliss and angst. I love their conversations, the snark. I think they're going to be good for each other, even if it will be a bumpy ride from time to time.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: November 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Alice, Asstard and Piss-Girl
I feel so sorry for Edward, he really has some issues. I wonder if Bella can help him with the screamers and maybe the other stuff. And just what will Alice think of Bella? I'm pretty sure Bella won't have any problems with her.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: November 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Big-Tit's Buffet
Oh my, I wonder if Alice's idea is a good one. Edward and Bella are obviously attracted to each other, but pretending to be together will only make that worse. It won't be pretending for long, methinks... Bella is funny, I like her quirky sense of humor, and she sure knows how to handle both Edward and his fans. Perhaps she will be a good little "handler"... That is, if she accepts the indecent proposal.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: November 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Cheap Wine and...the Truth
Bella sure hasn't had an easy upbringing. I wonder what happened to Renee and Phil, if they're still out there somewhere, and if they're holding any kind of grudge. Loose ends are never good. But I'm glad Bella told Edward so that he knows what happened, and I'm glad he wasn't fazed by it. He seems to be a good guy underneath the rock star veneer. I hope Bella's life will be better from now on. A whip-cracking Alice unleashing her organizational beast? Oh my... Better run and duck for cover, LOL.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: November 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Unacceptable Touching
I'm pretty sure these two will break most of the conditions in their "contracts", eventually. Alice really is an organization freak, but I suppose that can be both good and bad. Now I'm really curious to find out what the compromising position is that you mentioned in the AN...
Summary: As a successful writer, Bella prides herself on separating fact from fiction and balancing work with friends. After moving into a new house, strange things start to happen and she starts to believe that fact and fiction are not as defined as she had thought. With help from ghost whisperer Alice and her mysterious brother Edward, will Bella be able to figure out what is going on in her home.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 35792
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: February 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Just found this story and read it all in one go. I like stories that deal with the supernatural, and it will be really interesting to see what happens in this, especially between the two Edwards. Hope you update soon.
Summary: Edward Cullen lacks one essential thing: Good bedroom skills. Enter Isabella Swan, hired sex-therapist-turned-teacher. In her quest to remedy his problem, will their undeniable chemistry and sexual tension affect her 100 percent success rate?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 12499
[Report This] Published: October 13, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2009
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: February 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Unexpected Encounters
Edward must really want to get better if he is - albeit reluctantly - willing to do the things Bella tells him to. But I hope it's worth it in the end. And how long can he and Bella keep it strictly professional? Not for long, by the looks of things...
Summary: Dr. Alexandria Scott-Wyatt is a therapist for celebrities and government officials. She’s the top in her field and in high demand. She thought she was teaching him to be comfortable with his fame and the mass hysteria that followed him everywhere, but Robert Pattinson has other plans for the good doctor. What happens when the one you’re trying to save is the one that saves you?
Banner by: JMCullen (Thanks, girly!)
"What will it take for you to be comfortable in your own skin?"
Categories: Other Characters: Ashley Greene, Jackson Rathbone, Kellan Lutz, Kristen Stewart, Peter Facinelli, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 24632
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Covert Operation
Hi, Stacy!
I read the first chapter of this story a while back, and I was so happy to see there was another one now! I really like the start of this.
I like that you write from both persons' POV, and I like the long chapters. I hope Robert's plan work out in the end, but I guess it won't go so very smoothly at all times. Things like this have a way of backfiring, so it will be most interesting to see how it goes.
Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: October 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Dreams and Reality
Won't waste any words on what I think about Michael - just sayin' that I cheered when Alex punched him.
And I wonder how long Alex can resist our lovely Brit... I don't think I'd last long with the smiles and the pouts directed at me. Hope you post the next chapter soon so we get to see how things go along.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: February 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: REBT with Mr. P
So glad to find a new chapter!
I think both Alex and Rob are in trouble here, but I'm really looking forward to see how it will all work out. I wonder how long Alex can stay completely professional around her yummy client...
I really like this story, and I hope there's another chapter soon!
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: April 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Consumed
Woohoo! I was so glad to see an update to this story, I've been waiting for it! Another great chapter. Loved the banter between Rob and Jackson. Should be quite interesting to see what happens when Jackson comes to N.Y.
Rob is in quite over his head with Alex, isn't he? And Alex is definitely having problems staying professional during their "sessions"... I wonder how long it will be before they find out they feel the same way about each other, and I can't wait to see what happens when they do.
Looking forward to more - so happy to hear the chapters will come quicker.
Summary: The Cullens move to a new school, in a new state, with new students. Edward is… pretty much a nerd. Dweeb, Geek, Turd, Loser. Whatever you wanna call him. Bella isn’t. She already goes to Forks High. Well-known, actually. Not your average Nerdy Edward/Slutty Bella fanfic. Originality is all over, babe. So read.
Thank you to ebonyy and PosionousGarden! (: original two inside. this one is just to perfect.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 46201
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2010
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: April 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Found this story yesterday and have just finished reading all the chapters. I know now that it's not advisable to read this at work, or anywhere else where there are other people, because this is so hilarious that I've been on the verge of laughing out loud several times. I just love how goofy the Cullen family is.
Hope you post another chapter soon! Author's Response: Glad you joined us, bb. And yes, it's really not best. I would know. I write some of the chapters at work. :)
Thanks for reading, bb.
Summary:  Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?
WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes
Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: April 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Things are getting a little difficult now. Bella has just realized exactly what horrible things Edward has been through, and now she has to deal with the fact that Phil is selling the house.
But perhaps this is what she needs to wake up and actually deal with what happened with her mother. And it's so cute that Edward is the one reaching out to her this time.
Still love this story. More soon, please.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: November 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Shit, I didn't see that one coming, even if I know Victoria and James were together in the original story... I really hope she won't take anything out on Edward and make things even more difficult for him than they already are. Good thing Bella is on her way; I think Edward needs her more than ever now.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I liked the way Charlie behaved, and I like his sense of humor. Glad he didn't cause any problems.
And way to go, Bella! She's getting a little possessive, I think. I just hope Edward won't mind too much...
I really like this story. Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy you like my story!
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: October 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
I'm glad to see Edward managed the session. Dr. Weber seems to be the right kind of shrink, and I hope she can help him. He seems to be making progress, and every little step counts. I just hope he can manage without Bella, and that Bella's trip won't be too troublesome for her.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I like this story very much. It's dealing with some really dark subjects, but I think you handle it really well.
I really feel for Edward, and I'm so pleased to see that he's beginning to let Bella in. I think they can both be good for each other. Hopefully, Edward can learn to trust her and open up a bit and get his life back on track, or at least make it go in the right direction.
More soon, please!
Author's Response: I'll post the next chapter tomorrow. Thank you very much for leaving a review!
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
What the...? Why did you end the chapter there? *Growls in frustration*
What is it that Carlisle needs to tell Edward? I hope it's not something that will affect his budding friendship with Bella - they are making such nice progress.
Please post the next chapter ASAP! I need to know what's going on! Author's Response: Next chap is posted, hopefully it will be up soon. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: March 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Well, I for one hope James won't recover. But then again, dying while in a coma seems way too kind to someone like him...
I can understand Edward is upset he wasn't told, but I can also see where Carlisle is coming from. Hopefully, Edward will turn to Bella and she can help him calm down. They have gotten so close, so I hope this won't put a spanner in the works for them.
Even if this story handles some very dark themes, I really like it. Hope you post more soon!
Author's Response: I will. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: March 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
This is so heartbreaking, and yet so beautiful and tender. Will Edward really tell Bella what happened to him? And if he does, how will she react? Will she be appalled, or will she stand by him as she promised?
This is so good. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thank you! And you'll get some answers soon.
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: March 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I've said it before, and I'll say it again - I really like this story. The interaction between Edward and Bella is so sweet and tender, and I love the fact that he's opening up to her.
As for your using quotes from the books: I don't mind, I just think it's fun when I recognize them.
Patiently waiting for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thank you! And you won't have to wait very long for the next update. :)
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: March 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Another great chapter. Just loved the phone conversation at the end. Edward and Bella are so cute together, and I hope they will continue to make progress. I just hope nothing happens that will destroy the trust in Bella Edward is slowly building. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I'm so glad they are still making progress, and I hope they will have a nice first "date". That is unless Bella's dad freaks out... I don't want anything to get in their way now that things are going so well. Author's Response: Thank you very much for leaving a review!
Reviewer: Daybreak Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Ooops... I wonder how Edward will react when Bella tells him he has to introduce himself to Charlie. I hope he can manage it, because I really want these two to go on that date! It will probably be very difficult for Edward, but he has come a long way since he met Bella, so hopefully he will be able to handle this as well. Author's Response: Let's hope so, yeah. Thank you very much for leaving a review!
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