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Penname: sase [ Contact]
Real name: sarah
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Member Since: November 28, 2009
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[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: July 14, 2009
Reviewer: sase Signed
Date: February 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I really liked that you had Jasper and Alice leave by choice while planning to return rather than just because Edward said to leave and never come back.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!!
~Twivamp :)
Summary:
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Sequel to Event Horizon: Edward's side of New Moon. This is Eclipse as told from Edward's point of view. Canon, but there are several extra scenes that were not in the original novel. This story reference certain events in my previous story, Event Horizon, but you don't have to read it first. Dialogue from Eclipse is used in places out of necessity. All of this is the property of Stephenie Meyer. I do not own the characters or the situations, and I will not profit from this work. :)
Thanks so much to FrozenSoldier and TheTwilightAwards.com for the amazing banner. You should check out all of their work.
This story has been nominated for a Bring Me to Life award in the Red Ribbon category.
Also on fanfiction.net.
Thank you qjmom for working so hard!
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 185996
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2009 Updated: January 21, 2011
Reviewer: sase Signed
Date: November 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Partnership
I L-O-V-E Edward's POV!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you like it.
Summary: Bella never jumped, Edward never returned - but Victoria did. Not even the intervention of the wolf-pack can stop her from attacking Bella. Now entering her first year of college, Bella has some major decisions to make about her life.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Edward, Jane
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 31999
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: October 21, 2011
Reviewer: sase Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Finally a story worth reviewing. I really like the flashback and would love to hear more about what happened with Jacob after that. Keep it up.
Summary: 
As Bella and Edward approach their wedding day, Rosalie knows that Bella is an accident waiting to happen. Determined to keep her brother's wife safe, can she prevent the inevitable?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Word count: 10676
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2010 Updated: March 12, 2010
Reviewer: sase Signed 
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Capturing the hunt
I just started reading fanfiction a few months ago and despite pleadings this is the first time I've felt compelled to leave a review. Rosalie is my favorite charecter in the books. I don't think that most people really understand her. Usually people make her very one dimensional but I think you are capturing her correctly and am enjoying reading your story. I would like to read longer chapters though. Slow down and really dig into Rosalie to get the "why"s out of her. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I think Rosalie is very misunderstood, and it's been fun revealing more depth to her. As far as the chapter length, I agree, they're short. I suppose I could have put it all up as one big one-shot, or maybe split it differently, but it just kind of happened the way it happened. My plan *giggle* was to have only two chapters, but things didn't go quite the way I expected. Next story I shall try to make the chapters longer (assuming that the characters cooperate).
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