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Penname: colleencullen [Contact]
Real name: Colleen
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Member Since: November 27, 2009
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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: colleencullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Ghosts

Hurry! next chapter please :) i absolutely love, love, love your writing and i need more! keep up the good work!

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5437]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: colleencullen Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 64: Separation: Jacob's POV

That was great! Keep the chapters rolling!

Author's Response:

thank you!

 
Reviewer: colleencullen Signed
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 65: Unexpected: Bella's POV

hurry! i need more :)

 
Reviewer: colleencullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 67: Closure: Bella's POV

loveeeee it! keep em coming!

 
Reviewer: colleencullen Signed
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 68: Closure: Jacob's POV

wonderful, as always. how many more chapters are you going to post before you start the sequel? and what is the sequel going to be like? do you know what you are going to call it? i dont want to miss it when you start posting!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I honestly don't know how many more chapters there will be.  I know exactlly what has to happen before it ends, and I've got sections of it already written out, but every chapter just kind of makes itself, so I never know where exactly one will end and the other will begin until I ger there.  I'm not sure about the title to the sequel either.  I have a title in mind, but I have a tendency to change things at the last minute.  As for not missing it, you'll need to add me to your favorite authors and make sure that within your account preferences, you have the box checked to receive emailed updates.  That's really the only guaranteed way to know as soon as it's posted.

 
Midsummer Sun by jacksons98 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

 

A Midnight Sun like story with an AU mythological Bella. Loosely follows Twilight only in this story Bella is the mystery. I have always wondered how long it would have taken Edward to figure our that he was falling in love with Bella if Alice hadn't spelled it out for him. To some extent this story explores that theme as well.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31736
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: colleencullen Signed
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 part 2 (sirenastarot)

wow! this is so great! i've read numerous stories on this site but this one is by far one of my favorites! keep posting! i can't wait to see what bella is capable of!

 
Blue Moon Dust by twi-night Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 349]
Summary:

What if Bella had given birth to twins? Would Renesmee’s twin be pushed aside as Jacob focused on Renesmee, or would he have been imprinted on by one of the other wolves or vampires they know? Would he feel like he was on the outside? Find out how it’s all played out three years later.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Marcus, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 97451
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: April 30, 2011


Reviewer: colleencullen Signed
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Arrival

preferably leah and seth, i don't really care about embry haha!





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