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Penname: EmoryB123 [ Contact]
Real name: Emory
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Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman
I live near Charlotte, NC.
Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!
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Summary: 
Bella is a nurse working in the NICU who tries to take care of everyone before she will admit that she is missing something. Until she meets the new doctor at the hospital, only then does she realize that she was missing something.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 43106
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Finding Strength
WAHHHHHHHHHHH!! I miss Charlie! But I know you did what you had to do. Now I am ready to see Edward do some major COMFORTING with Bella!
Keep up the good work!
Summary: 
Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Other Character, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Word count: 169441
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2009 Updated: September 23, 2011
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
So they are falling in love with each other. *sigh* That is perfect! i hope they tell each other soon!
I loved the flowers and that the opening day went well.
That citrus was hot, too!
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it. Things will be becoming much more clear to them both soon, and they will get a bit more action, I promise. ;)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
It is special for large families to make it a point to have family portraits done. Good call!
Sweet puppies! Great idea!
Good Christmas chapter! I am glad everyone is so happy!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Good chapter! I am glad that Bella was able to graciously accept the system from Edward!
Their exchanging keys was sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Great chapter! I am really enjoying this story ! I am looking forward to things getting SERIOUS between E & B!! Please update again REALLY soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the quick read & review! :D Keep in mind that E & B have only known each other for a very short time! hehe There will be some dates and hanging out (ok, and some making out ;) ) before anything TOO serious! *grin* There should be another chapter soon after christmas, I promise!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed 
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
....pausing only long enough to give Edward a quick kiss as he stood elbow-deep in dishwater.
This great kitchen has to have a dishwasher! Maybe they are washing the pans that won't go in.....?
"Dude, the boy part goes into the girl part. It's not that hard!" Emmett cackled as he cleared the dining table.
"Or is that the problem?" Jasper grinned. "Is it not hard enough?" LOL!!! Good lines!
I liked the entire dinner and the video games! It was great to see everyone together and having fun!
I can't remember: Have we had Carlisle and Esme in this story so far? I would love to see them!
I hate James!
I like that news about A & Jazz's house! I look forward to their moving in, but I would like to see the move concentrate on the new house more than on the place they are leaving.
I can't WAIT for the night out dancing!
Please update again soon! This story is getting hotter all of the time!
Author's Response: Hehehe Yeah, let's just assume it was the pans that wouldn't fit. ;) Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D We haven't seen Carlisle & Esme yet, but we will. ;) And yeah, the moving chapter will concentrate more on spending time with Angela & Ben, rather than the packing up and moving. heh
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Poor Bella! What a terrible sight for her to have to see. I should have known, too, that nasty ol' James would be involved in anything BAD that would happen!
Edward is being such a dear. I hope that their moving in together will work out well. 24/7 togetherness is something they will BOTH have to work at.
I am glad that Esme went home with Bella. She is a wonderful mother!
Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: April 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Here you go! Where is my red Edward rose???? (Actually, I would prefer a tulip.) Actually, though, I would like what you wrote about E:
"I went to the bedroom, stripped naked and jumped in the shower."
Whoo-hoo! Just give me some Edward / Showerward time!
Alice is too much! I love her! Let's see her, and the rest of the famitly, more and more, please!
Edward and flowers: Bella will be falling HARD!
I can't wait for the date! I wonder if you will borrow from the book or movie???
Please update soon! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: LOL Thanks! Edward will be there soon with a tulip, just in time for your shower. ;)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Victoria the realtor! How neat! And Bella is a Volvo driver! You are too much! I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: ROFLMAO I had fun throwing Victoria in there, and decided to not make her evil. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
SO glad edward doesn't want to be called Eddie. I don't care for that myself, either. He is WAY to classy to be an Eddie---I mean, he's no Eddie Hascal, for Pete's sake!
Author's Response: haha Eddie Hascal. Nice reference! :D
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yeah, thanks for not expanding the painting any more than necessary! But great way to have Edward SAVE bella yet again!!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I expand their shopping probably way more than I should have, but I had a lot of fun with it. ;) Yes, Edward is always rescuing poor Bella, isn't he? LOL Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed 
Date: December 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
This is really good so far!! I am so glad that E & B have met and HIT IT OFF!!! Please update REALLY soon! THANKS!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the reviews! I'm VERY glad you are enjoying it! Chapter 8 will be up in a few days. :)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
So sweet!! This Edward is JUST TOO MUCH, and I LOVE him!!!! Please get E & B REALLY together REALLY soon!!!!! Loving it!
Author's Response: Hehehe Thank you for the review! It'll be awhile til they are uh, intimate, but they do grow closer soon, I promise! :)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update! I love this story!
How about A & J getting a rescued CAT since R & E have the dogs??
I hope E will have a dream about Bella like B had a dream about Edward!
PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY, really SOON!!!
Author's Response: LOL That's a cute idea about A&J and a cat. :) I haven't written the part about them having moved yet, but that's something I'll definitely take into consideration! :) Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Ha, ha, ha!! Great line!!---> guys reclined on the couch, watching some show about when bears attack.
LOVED this chapter! You are doing a great job! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!!! I really like this story!
Author's Response: LOL Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update! It is OK for the 3 to end living together: I am ready for B & E to be together! I can't wait to see wait you do with them!
Keep up the good work and please update again soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
the individual strands like we used when I was a kid --- I remember those. And I did NOT like putting them on! I put them on in too much of a "clump" for my dad to tolerate....
Alice to the rescue with the clothes!
The ring presentation was perfect!! She was so surprised! I look forward to their egagement period.
Author's Response: Hehehehe Yup, same here about the stuff for the trees. LOL :D
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
"Bella, remind me to tell you the story of how Carlisle and I met sometime, okay? Trust me when I say it wouldn't bother us in the slightest." ----- I can't wait to hear that!!
Author's Response: Thanks! That may be an outtake for a fundraiser compilation. :D
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Sweet! Edward is to die for! I am looking forward to Bella being in her new place so she and Edward can be together (almost) all the time!
Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Trust me, LOTS of togetherness soon, including a makeout session. ;)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
The house sounded great. I am glad that Carlisle and Esme are having Charlie and Sue over along with the "Kids."
"Sears opens at four in the morning, so if it's okay with you, we were thinking of hitting there first."
"Emmett convinced Jasper he needed a pool table," .... "They've got a lot of cute clothes on sale, too," Alice told me. ----- Somehow, I can't see Alice shopping for clothes at Sears.....HA!!
Good chapter! I got behind on this story, but I hope to get caught up in just a little while.
Author's Response: Hahaha @ Alice and Sears. I know, but it fit, so... *shrug* :D
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: November 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Good chapter! I look forward to all of the parental contact!
Nice pool lemon!
Loved the fun with the dogs!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Yay! Now E & B can really get together for REAL!!! Wonder where they will spend most of their time?
I am glad that the move is over! On to better and more FUN things!
I hope that Grand Opening goes well! I anticipate that Edward will do something sweet to commemorate the occasion!
Please update again soon so I will know how E & B get along when they are right next door to each other!
Author's Response: Hehehe Thanks! Still lots more to come!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Emmett was beside her, tears streaming down his face, as he tried blindly to wipe them away while he chopped onion. ---- That was SO Emm!
Author's Response: Hehehe Thanks. :)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Yum! This was my kind of chapter! Thanks for letting them get together. I can't wait for the dinner. Of course, at some time, I expect they will experience angst between themselves!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) I'm writing chapter 22 now, and there is a TINY bit of angst, but nothing really at all. This is really just a happy go lucky story. lol
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