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Real name: Emory
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45 year old woman


I live near Charlotte, NC.


Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!


 


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Reviews by EmoryB123
 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: It Won't Seem Like Christmas Without You

Great job! You surprised Edward and me with Bella's sudden appearance! I guess that is why she was acting strangely---she was trying to keep a big secret, and the more she interacted with Edward, the harder she knew it would be to keep the secret.

"I want those simple moments again. I don't need an epic love story or grand gestures. I need to wake up every morning to your hair on my pillow. I need quiet walks in the woods with you and eating supper together each night. I need to make new memories with you, ones we can both cherish for their ease and simplicity." ---- Oh, that was just lovely! Edward has learned a huge lesson, and you presented this so well.

"Emmett had even managed to get me a straggly little tree, reminiscent of that from the Charlie Brown Christmas movie." --- GREAT! THat is totally a true Christmas classic!

Eejit. --- That was a good name!

"Tex to Pixie. The doctor is headed to the shower. I repeat: the doctor is on the move." ----- That was so funny! Fits in with Major Jasper. Only Alice would think that up.
But I bet it came about because they were all in on Bella's trip, and Alice had to make it into a huge secret mission!

Keep up the good work!

I want to recommend a story to you.
Title: Walking Out of the Still Life By Pbroken ON FanFiction
Summary: Bella drifts through life alone, keeping everyone at a distance. Dirty Edward breathes only for his girl, the one he can't stop dreaming about & painting. When a chance encounter forces them to stop existing & start living, will life prove to be too hard? AU/AH
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama

Pbroken is one of my FF buddies and recently started this story. If you would check the story out and review it for her, I would really appreciate it!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: My love

Thanks for the update! They are finally together and not afraid -- YAY!! This will be their best Christmas ever!

I look forward to lunch with Charlie!

I am dying to see them together for good and all!

Cool picture!

Keep up the good work.

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Fields of Gold

Those final lines were beautifuL!

Yep, it was good for me! But Edward is ALWAYS good for me!

Excellent chapter! I am SO GLAD that they are together, and I expect for them to stay that way.

PLEASE!!!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I had destroyed her.
My cruel words had shattered her and driven her away. I knew that now.
My fault.
Oh my!! Looks like we are going to have Angstward here! Please be gentle....

Author's Response:

There is definitely angst here, as well as lemony freshness and fluff.  But lots of angst....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 1997-New kid

"fantasmagoriffic" ??????

Author's Response:

Kids say the darndest things....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 1998 - The Dance

How did you ever think to make Edward fat? Chubward is cute, but I mean, what the hey?

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: 2001-Goodbye to You

Poor Bella! And I bet you won't share the grad party!

WAAAAAAH!

Author's Response:

We are going to move fairly quickly.  It would take forever to take folks through every moment of their lives, so we're having to be selective.  But there's lots more to come!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Stolen Away

Oh Poor Bella! I was almost in tears!

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!

Author's Response:

Bella is a hot mess, that's for sure.....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Cry

Now you've done it. Tears running down my face. This is harder to handle than Not Like This, I think. But it was difficult the handle too.....

Author's Response:

Not Like This deals with one, albeit huge, trauma while this story deals with more of a lifetime of smaller traumas.  Just a bit of a different story.  A lot happened to make them both this way....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Losing My Religion

Six hours later, I was standing out in front of the Lodge, waiting for our ride to show up as Carlisle danced in the road, belting out a scary rendition of “Get Low” by Lil’ John..... Chief Swan jumped around with my uncle when he hit the chorus, the two of them singing, “To the window, to the wall, to the sweat drop down my balls,” in a high pitched voice.

C & C DRUNK and singing & dancing in the street?? That is PRICELESS!! NEVER have seen that in any other FF!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I'd come for you

I need the wedding! And I want to see Bella as the old Bella, confident and loving Edward.

This has been great so fat! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

We've definitely made strides in ther right direction!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: As Time Goes By

What a cliffie! Please update soon so I don't have to wait long!

Author's Response:

Hopefully we'll be able to update shortly!  Lots of stuff happens during the "surprise".

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Hallelujah

That was so good! I can't wait for your next update! Will they go all the way? I am thinking, YES!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Nightingale

Too hard to take!! Please give them a HEA!! And please update soon!

Author's Response:

Hang in there!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Words I Couldn't Say

Poor Edward! He has a hug from me!

I hope they are together soon!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: I'll Be There for You

Poor Edward! Poor Bella!

Well, Poor Edward until the bar. He had better not do anything with that Tanya - that would ruin everything! And what would it do to Bella? But I trust you in writing the story and in the HEA that you promised, so I will just wait - impatiently - for the next update.

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and for trusting in us to do what needs to be done!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Everything Under the Sun

Lovely!! I hope that E & B get to be together soon!

Kitten: Twilight? Midnight? Little Bit?

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Wishing Well

Wow! That song at the beginning of the chapter is really perfect!

Bella is doing well, it seems! By Christmas, can't she go home for good? What are they waiting for? They NEED each other!

I have to recommend this story. It is so powerful emotionally, and Edward and Bella are both great! Edward had major trauma in his past. And it is written by a friend of mine!

"Colliding With Fate" by Pbroken on FanFiction.
www.fanfiction.net/s/5757982/

Eclipse count: 3 times in theater; a few times on line.

 
Summary:

 

Haunted by her past, Bella is broken and alone. Starting over in a new city, can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist, or will his own personal demons destroy them first?  AH/OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 20367
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Yeah, the blond bartender was not Rose! (At least, that is what I am telling myself.....)

Poor Bella! She has her demons. So does Edward, it seemed. I will have to see what you have planned for these two...

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming

Great start! I didn't know if would like a tattoo story but you captured me with this chapter!

I love that the guys are in business together, and Alice even works there! Cool!

I hope the plastic blond is not Rosalie, but you can do whatever you want...

Bella and her shots reminded me of Marion in Raiders of the Lost Ark.

Pics from RPattz's new movie:
http://www(.)twifans(.)com/profiles/blogs/new-pics-from-rob-at-water-for-1

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Poor Bella! Poor Edward!

But at least he finally got his cupcake...

(It is hilarious that he is a cupcake junky!)

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

WHat a hot chapter! SHe is going to have to tell him that he makes her feel better so he will stay around more so they can 'get some.'

I love that Kitten! It is cool that she is calling her by Edward's name for her without even knowing what it means!

I wish I could read this story all night, but I will have to be satisfied with reading more tomorrow!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

The grief and the fear and the anguish spilled out of her and onto my shirt as the storm inside her swelled and exploded.---> Alice knew it was coming! POOR BELLA!

I hope it does not turn out that James was the murderer! OR that he instigated the break in with someone else.

Here is a rec I must mention:
Title: "The Moment of My Dreams" by dlpash. On FanFiction.net
Story URL: http://www(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/s/5728066/

I was surprised that Rose let B get so strung out. But i guess Rose thinks that with all Bella has been through, she deserves any kind of relief she can find!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Great date! Edward already knows her so well!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

I love Carlisle! I am glad he will be in the story more!

 




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