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Penname: EmoryB123 [ Contact]
Real name: Emory
Status: Member
Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman
I live near Charlotte, NC.
Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!
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Summary: Renesmee has grown into the full-body of a 19 year old girl and people have definitely noticed. Two people in particular. Now that she understands love and seems impossibly immune to imprinting, she’s caught in a love triangle between two guys who seem impossible to pick from. Add understanding grandparents, aunts and uncles who are all of a sudden comedians, parents who give you way too much space and hilarity and romance will ensue! A full-length drama, but very funny.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Marcus, Nessie, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 8020
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2009 Updated: January 04, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Let's Take It From The Top
Whoa! THis gets more and more mysterious! I do hope you are going to continue to update! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Mother - Daughter Secrecy
Good chapter! Looks like things are starting to get rolling. Please update again soon!
Summary: Edward Masen is a former NFL football player who was injured and could not return to playing. After taking some time off to figure out what he wanted to do with his life, since playing football was out of the question, he decided to go with coaching high school football. He leads a simple, quiet life with his friends in Forks until he meets the woman that will change his life forever. Bella Swan decides to move back home with her younger brother when she gets a teaching position at her old school in Forks. AH/Canon Couples/alternating between Edward and Bella POV. Rated M ;)
Huge thanks to Jessica1971 for being my beta once again. I could not do this without her. :)
Disclaimer: SM owns Twilight.
Thank you to Heatherdawnc for making another terrific banner for me. =)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 170353
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Another Big Step
I was beyond thrilled that she was leaving with me. I came back to Forks wondering where our relationship was headed, praying that we hadn't taken a step back after all that had happened. And now we were engaged and closer than ever before.
--- That was SOOOO sweet! It was perfect for B & E: They don't know everything, but they know that their life is starting together! Sometimes life takes a turn for the BEST thing!
The wedding sounds like it will be perfect! What spontaneousty!
I wonder what Seth will do at the wedding? Give away Bella, I guess!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Cheap Wine and Rum
Nothing slips by Rose! +++
Now how could two smart people like Bella and Edward NOT figure out that they were going to the same cook-out? HA!
I am glad you called it a cookout and not a barbeque.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
They are really moving along here! Already sharing a tent - YUM!
Reminds me of the Eclispe tent scene - DOUBLE yum!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: July 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Dancing, Drinking and Decisions
Hot chapter! I look forward to B & E getting it on!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: July 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: A Rainy Kiss
Good job! I am glad that B & E went to the dance, but it looks like we are almost back to the first chapter. I hope they will be together soon!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: July 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Opening Up and Letting Go
Good job! Great lemon! I knew the story was nearing the prologue!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Pillow Surprises and Late Night Calls
Poor E & B! I hate that they have to be apart, but I am sure that they will figure something out!
I live near Charlotte, NC. I like Dallas fine, but my TEAM is the Panthers!
I love reading about Footbal!
Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: August 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Future Questions
I was close to tears during the last half of this chapter. Poor Bella! I hope Edward can convince her of his love and his wishes for the future with her. Good job.
Summary: What was Edward feeling when he whispered "Forever" on Isle Esme? Follows the events of BD pgs 81-108 from Edward's perpective.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 10567
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: September 04, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like what you did with th bruises. it bothered me that they showed up so quick, if Edward had made them that first night. Let's blame ALL problems on Jacob!!! Good job!
Summary:
When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins. He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own. This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction. Can they find their way back to each other? And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?
HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No
Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: April 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Running to Stand Still
yay! Jazz to the rescue! He was awesome; he just took things into his own hands!
Bella needs to get a grip and do something! At least Jazz is really pushing here.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hmmm... well imagine it was your good friend suffering. Someone you knew that was this depressed and needed help. Would you be frustrated with having to be patient with them? Probably. Would you be angry with them? We doubt it. It's not Bella doesn't want to do something, she just needed some support and someone to put her on the right track. Jasper was the perfect guy for the job.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Far Away
I don't hate Edward. He is not that much of a Douchenozzle.
I am glad he stopped himself and looked for help right away. He really is trying.
I take it that at this point, Edward does not know about Jazz visiting Bella? I have a feeling he will be as upset about that as he was about the calls between Esme and Bella.
I do look forward to hearing more about Jazz's visit.
I so like reading Edward's POV. But I think seeing more than 1 POV is helpful.
" His head hit the concrete walk with a sickening thud, and blood bloomed out from a small cut on his temple. "
----> Emmett's head hit the CONCRETE??? Thank you that he did not get any more hurt than he did. That could have been disasterous.
Naomi is cool. Good job.
I love e-mails and messages between characters. Please keep that going.
Looking forward to next update!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed 
Date: September 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: It Won't Seem Like Christmas Without You
Great job! You surprised Edward and me with Bella's sudden appearance! I guess that is why she was acting strangely---she was trying to keep a big secret, and the more she interacted with Edward, the harder she knew it would be to keep the secret.
"I want those simple moments again. I don't need an epic love story or grand gestures. I need to wake up every morning to your hair on my pillow. I need quiet walks in the woods with you and eating supper together each night. I need to make new memories with you, ones we can both cherish for their ease and simplicity." ---- Oh, that was just lovely! Edward has learned a huge lesson, and you presented this so well.
"Emmett had even managed to get me a straggly little tree, reminiscent of that from the Charlie Brown Christmas movie." --- GREAT! THat is totally a true Christmas classic!
Eejit. --- That was a good name!
"Tex to Pixie. The doctor is headed to the shower. I repeat: the doctor is on the move." ----- That was so funny! Fits in with Major Jasper. Only Alice would think that up.
But I bet it came about because they were all in on Bella's trip, and Alice had to make it into a huge secret mission!
Keep up the good work!
I want to recommend a story to you.
Title: Walking Out of the Still Life By Pbroken ON FanFiction
Summary: Bella drifts through life alone, keeping everyone at a distance. Dirty Edward breathes only for his girl, the one he can't stop dreaming about & painting. When a chance encounter forces them to stop existing & start living, will life prove to be too hard? AU/AH
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama
Pbroken is one of my FF buddies and recently started this story. If you would check the story out and review it for her, I would really appreciate it!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: October 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 38: My love
Thanks for the update! They are finally together and not afraid -- YAY!! This will be their best Christmas ever!
I look forward to lunch with Charlie!
I am dying to see them together for good and all!
Cool picture!
Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I had destroyed her.
My cruel words had shattered her and driven her away. I knew that now.
My fault.
Oh my!! Looks like we are going to have Angstward here! Please be gentle....
Author's Response: There is definitely angst here, as well as lemony freshness and fluff. But lots of angst....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: 1997-New kid
"fantasmagoriffic" ??????
Author's Response: Kids say the darndest things....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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