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Penname: EmoryB123 [Contact]
Real name: Emory
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Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman


I live near Charlotte, NC.


Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!


 


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Reviews by EmoryB123
 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Losing My Religion

Six hours later, I was standing out in front of the Lodge, waiting for our ride to show up as Carlisle danced in the road, belting out a scary rendition of “Get Low” by Lil’ John..... Chief Swan jumped around with my uncle when he hit the chorus, the two of them singing, “To the window, to the wall, to the sweat drop down my balls,” in a high pitched voice.

C & C DRUNK and singing & dancing in the street?? That is PRICELESS!! NEVER have seen that in any other FF!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I'd come for you

I need the wedding! And I want to see Bella as the old Bella, confident and loving Edward.

This has been great so fat! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

We've definitely made strides in ther right direction!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: As Time Goes By

What a cliffie! Please update soon so I don't have to wait long!

Author's Response:

Hopefully we'll be able to update shortly!  Lots of stuff happens during the "surprise".

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Hallelujah

That was so good! I can't wait for your next update! Will they go all the way? I am thinking, YES!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Nightingale

Too hard to take!! Please give them a HEA!! And please update soon!

Author's Response:

Hang in there!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Words I Couldn't Say

Poor Edward! He has a hug from me!

I hope they are together soon!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: I'll Be There for You

Poor Edward! Poor Bella!

Well, Poor Edward until the bar. He had better not do anything with that Tanya - that would ruin everything! And what would it do to Bella? But I trust you in writing the story and in the HEA that you promised, so I will just wait - impatiently - for the next update.

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and for trusting in us to do what needs to be done!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Everything Under the Sun

Lovely!! I hope that E & B get to be together soon!

Kitten: Twilight? Midnight? Little Bit?

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Wishing Well

Wow! That song at the beginning of the chapter is really perfect!

Bella is doing well, it seems! By Christmas, can't she go home for good? What are they waiting for? They NEED each other!

I have to recommend this story. It is so powerful emotionally, and Edward and Bella are both great! Edward had major trauma in his past. And it is written by a friend of mine!

"Colliding With Fate" by Pbroken on FanFiction.
www.fanfiction.net/s/5757982/

Eclipse count: 3 times in theater; a few times on line.

 
Summary:

 

Haunted by her past, Bella is broken and alone. Starting over in a new city, can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist, or will his own personal demons destroy them first?  AH/OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 20367
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Yeah, the blond bartender was not Rose! (At least, that is what I am telling myself.....)

Poor Bella! She has her demons. So does Edward, it seemed. I will have to see what you have planned for these two...

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Storm is Coming

Great start! I didn't know if would like a tattoo story but you captured me with this chapter!

I love that the guys are in business together, and Alice even works there! Cool!

I hope the plastic blond is not Rosalie, but you can do whatever you want...

Bella and her shots reminded me of Marion in Raiders of the Lost Ark.

Pics from RPattz's new movie:
http://www(.)twifans(.)com/profiles/blogs/new-pics-from-rob-at-water-for-1

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Poor Bella! Poor Edward!

But at least he finally got his cupcake...

(It is hilarious that he is a cupcake junky!)

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

WHat a hot chapter! SHe is going to have to tell him that he makes her feel better so he will stay around more so they can 'get some.'

I love that Kitten! It is cool that she is calling her by Edward's name for her without even knowing what it means!

I wish I could read this story all night, but I will have to be satisfied with reading more tomorrow!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

The grief and the fear and the anguish spilled out of her and onto my shirt as the storm inside her swelled and exploded.---> Alice knew it was coming! POOR BELLA!

I hope it does not turn out that James was the murderer! OR that he instigated the break in with someone else.

Here is a rec I must mention:
Title: "The Moment of My Dreams" by dlpash. On FanFiction.net
Story URL: http://www(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/s/5728066/

I was surprised that Rose let B get so strung out. But i guess Rose thinks that with all Bella has been through, she deserves any kind of relief she can find!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Great date! Edward already knows her so well!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

I love Carlisle! I am glad he will be in the story more!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

"I didn't bother to try and hide the fact that I was staring at his chest, at the ink and the way his muscles rippled as he stretched his arms over his head and yawned, holding onto the top of the door frame as he stood just outside the kitchen. I wished he would walk around half naked all the time."--> Yeah, I think we would all like for that to happen! I wonder if we will get some Shirtless Edward in Eclipse?

A PORCHE??? I think everyone is going to want Edward for a boyfriend. Not that we need any extra encouragement to feel that way.....

Good chapter! Bella is looking like the strong one now. Edward is really messed up at the moment.

Are you ready for ECLIPSE????? I am so eager for that movie, I can barely stand it! I have seen a lot of pictures and clips, and it looks like it will be totally amazing! I wish I could buy the DVD the day after I see it! I bought my on-line ticket Saturday!!!! I will see it at 10:00 am on Wed! I found it playing at an IMAX theater about 15 miles from me. I will see it there too! That will be a great experience! ENJOY!

Twilight is my brand of heroin.

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor

Excellent FF. I am so amazed by all the things you had happen during it; It was a roller coaster of emotions. But you did a fantastic job. I look forward to continuing to read your work.

 
Summary:

What if Bella Swan wasn't given an opportunity to brood over the mystery that was Edward Cullen after their initial meeting? What if his siblings – instead of leaving her severely alone – made a conscious effort to "smooth things over?"

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Take a quick look at Bella's arrival and first couple of weeks or so at Forks High seen through the eyes of Emmett McCarty Cullen.  It's mostly canon with an AU splash in the absence of Rosalie Hale.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Emmett
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5195
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Emmett is a walking, talking MESS! But gotta love him! EMMETT saved Bella from the van accident?? That was great! I was afraid that Bella was going to end up falling for Emmett, but you didn't go there, Thanks for that! Great little story!

Author's Response:

Hi! :)

I love him in this story. LOL 

No, I never intended for it to be a romance. In my private imagination, it's an Edward/Bella romance, but with Emmett having a much more up-front role in it all.  He will always be, to me, her big brother. 

Though I do try to read Emmett/Bella fics.  I do try.  I just always feel a little like I'm watching an incestuous relationship. Ew. TMI. Sorry.

:)

LJ

 
Meant to Be by juliebee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 611]
Summary:

A life-changing event drives teenage Bella from her home in Arizona to live with her father in Forks. Will she be ostracized for the choices that she has made, or will she find the love & acceptance that she craves for her and her new baby?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 68831
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2010


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Planning for the Future

Thank you for the update! It sounds like things are falling into place! I am wondering how quickly the action will move to New hampshire. Oh well, I will just have to wait and see!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Planning for the Future

thanks for the update! And i am def putting you on Author's alert hree And on FanFiction!

Author's Response:

Oh I'm glad you liked it!  Yep, I have more stuff over on FFn than I do here :)

 
Summary:

The Cullens have to wait for a thunderstorm before they can play baseball.  The thunder helps with one of the logistical requirements allowing them to play and disguising the sounds of their hits and collisions.  But the real question is: how do they know Edward actually caught the ball?

 

“Edward is very fast.”

 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1019
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2009 Updated: September 16, 2009


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: There's No Way He Caught That!

Poor ol' Emmett!

Author's Response:

I know, but I love Emmett so much! Thanks for the review.

 
Sway by Hibbleton Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 719]
Summary:

Single mom Bella finally has life under control again when a new PD starts working at the same radio station and teaches her that she doesn't have to be alone to take care of her responsibilities.

Epilogue posted!

Sway

Huge thanks to Shug for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 194808
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2011


Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Everybody Knows

Good job! I am glad taht B & E are so happy! Hope there is another update soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Next chapter is already out for beta'ing!

 
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Date: April 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Stays in Vegas

"I don't think this is what they meant by ‘what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas,' but I'll gladly take it."---> Hee, hee! That fit in perfectly there!

I am glad that the boys let Chad have it! It was really good that they confronted the dweeb together!

I am glad that this chapter included Bella's presentation. That was well done. We didn't have to know everything about the entire seminar, so just getting in when Edward did for questions was great!

Poor little guy! I think I would have been upset at that too if my grandpa ate a fish that I caught!

Good job! Next time we will hear about the night on the town in Vegas! All right!!! Maybe there will be a wedding before it is over....?

Please update again soon!

Author's Response:

Sorry, no more Vegas... didn't want to write what would essentailly repeat the first part.  But we do get the visit to Charlie's up next!

 
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Moving Forward

I am so glad that B & E are finally together!!!!! I am glad I didn't find this story until it was written to that point! I love this story! it is going into FAVS right now!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks again for all your reviews!  You picked a good time to start since I've apparently been driving people crazy, making them wait for months for that kiss.  In the story, everything through chapter 12 happened over only 3 weeks, so it wasn't that long...but for readers, that dragged on for months!

Again, thanks so much for reading!

 




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