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Penname: EmoryB123 [ Contact]
Real name: Emory
Status: Member
Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman
I live near Charlotte, NC.
Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!
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Summary: 
The McCarty clan was known as a wild bunch in the hills of Anderson County, Tennessee. They worked hard and played hard, and were well respected in the community. What happened when the most popular of the seven McCarty boys disappeared?
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 26128
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The McCarty clan is Scots-Irish. -- Me, too! I like to stress the Scots part, though. I live in NC.
Then there was Ruby. She’s been through all the older McCarty boys now. ---- AND she hit on Big Daddy McCarty. I would say she qualifies as a T- R-A-M-P.
Good start!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
It is remarkable what memories he is able to retain from his human existence. ---- Yeah, I had thought about that. He really did remarkably well, except for getting really mad.
He could remember his family just fine, but he couldn't remember how many people lived in town. I liked that contrast.
Before Carlisle mentioned that he was in the area because he was hunting, I was picturing him in his whilte medical coat! Silly me!
I had never thought about none of the Vamps being able to say goodbye to family before Bella. I like the way you set up Emm to be able to do that.
I have really liked this story and set it as a Fav. I have read it in one day, which I rarely do for a multi-chapter story!
Would you want to write a story of Jazz/Alice ? I am thinking of it concentrating on the time they are alone before they join up with the cullens. But then you could have them get to the Cullens, because Alice threw Edward out of his room, and that would be really funny!
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Jasper and Alice really don't do it for me the way Emmett and Rosalie do, so no. I probably will not write a Jasper/Alice prequel story. There is already a fantastic one out there called Singularity that I view as the ultimate J/A story. I would never be able to push the events of that story out of my head. Thanks for the suggestion and the wonderful reviews though. That really means a lot to me!
Summary: 
Jasper is a university Professor of History. Alice is his new student. He has been alone for a long time, afraid to love. Can Alice teach Jasper that they could be something special? Can she give him a second chance at happiness?
Banner by ObsessiveJasperDisorder @ TA
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges: Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 104075
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2009 Updated: October 17, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: June 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Yay! I am glad that Bella is in there! I know they are not the stars, but I hope you are going to be giving attention to B & E as well!
Great start to this story!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: June 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Bella was having Edward’s name sewn over her heart in tiny crystals.
---> That is TOO lovely!
NINE INCH HEEL?!?!?! #1, I didn't know those exsited. #2, how on earth does Bella think she could walk in them??
Good job!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: June 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I have been to Seattle twice, and went to Pike's Place and the park each time. It is a great place to visit!
Good chapter! I was glad to get a taste of Rose!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
That was a hot lemon! Especially after the fight they had earlier!
Those poor parents! Not the kind of situation most parents want to walk in on. I hope they treat Jazz well when they see him again.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
That was a hot lemon! Especially after the fight they had earlier!
Those poor parents! Not the kind of situation most parents want to walk in on. I hope they treat Jazz well when they see him again.
Summary: 
A one-shot looking at Charlie's character and exploring the reason why he likes Alice so much. Non-romantic. Canon. Set between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.
Credit for the gorgeous banner goes to Anne Cullen
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Charlie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1241
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: June 25, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great to see this side of Charlie! He gets overlooked too much! WaSn't he great in the new movie??
Summary: Bella is reunited with her childhood friend Alice under unlikely circumstances. When sparks fly between Bella and Alice's older brother, will she be able to resist? And what secrets is he hiding?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132141
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Hustler
That bet was pretty good!
Edward sure does want to keep a lot of secrets! But I guess I would do whatever he asked, too....
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Caffeine High
How could Alice do that to Bella! This Alec is 4 inches shorter than Bella?? That will NEVER do!!
I hope Edward dumps lauren next chapter. Of course, more likely that she will dump him!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Do Not Pass Go
Bella's dates are hysterical!! I love that she tells them to Edward, too!
Emmett is TOO funny about the boardgames! My version of Monopoly is so old that the game pieces are made of wood!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Dish It Out
Lauren is terrible! She is def seeing someone else (probably at work), so why does she want to keep Edward around?
Belly + Eddie!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Ante Up
Edward was perfect, as long as he listens to his own reactions and gets with Bella soon! How DID he know exactly what ice cream to buy??
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Shiny Happy People
Great chapter! They are finally together - YAY! I can't wait for the big date!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: House of Cards
I can't believe that Alice didn't call E right away to clear things up! Now it will take forever for E to come around! But there will be plenty of angst, I am sure!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Exposure (V)
Good lemon! I was wondering if it would ever happen...
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Exposure (V)
Good lemon! I was wondering if it would ever happen...
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Exposure (V)
Good lemon! I was wondering if it would ever happen...
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Exposure (V)
Good lemon! I was wondering if it would ever happen...
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Exposure (V)
Good lemon! I was wondering if it would ever happen...
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Forward (V)
Good lemon last chapter! (I couldn't get review to go through there.) I was wondering if it would ever happen...
Drunk Bella is funny! And who can resist Domestic Edward!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Exhale (V)
“A naked candlelit picnic?” --- Whoa! That's hot!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: For the Future (V)
HEy, hey, hey! This was an excellent story! THANKS! I am glad that Carlisle and Esme got to be in the last chapter! I just love them!
Loved the final flashback! That was a perfect ending and was just fine as an epilogue!
I am reading Girl with a Red Umbrella. I hope that there will be an update soon! Things really seem to be coming to a head!
Keep up the good work!
Summary: Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!
Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners! Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on! You all are the best!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Stupid Happy
Good chapter! Lots of activity, which I love, and a good length.
I can't wait for the meeting with Charlie. I am trying to remember, did Bella tell him yet that she is pregnant? I am thinking not.
Looking forward to the next update. Please make it soon!
Author's Response: Charlie hasn't been told yet. Next chapter, dear. It's gonna be lots of fun! So glad you're enjoying this story!
xoxo,
Jen
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