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Penname: EmoryB123 [ Contact]
Real name: Emory
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Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman
I live near Charlotte, NC.
Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!
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Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed 
Date: February 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Perfect!
I hope you have more epilogues/outtakes planned for Not Like This!!!
Author's Response: There should be 4-5 more with a slight delay as my computer was wiped out, including written/unpublished chapters last weekend. But there is a little more to come...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 55: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Cute! Jasper was a basket case huh? Alice was good and crafty about the name! Don't know anything to guess about the next chapter, but I will look forward to it.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Alice definitely pulled a nine-month mind f*ck on her man! Jasper is such a blast to write...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I read your latest epilogue and then ended up reading the whole story again! It was much easier to read the second time - I knew where things were heading and never was confused by the different points of view. Also, it seemed to move along much faster! The first time, it sometimes felt like the story was moving slowly, but not a bit the second time! Thank you for this story. Who knows, I may end up reading it again sometime!
Author's Response: I think when you have to wait between chapters, when there is no enormous plot progression in any one chapter, it seems like it drags. When you can see it all together, you (hopefully) can see the purpose without the frustration....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 57: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic
Good epi! I love Disney!!
I think the next epi will be from on of the kids, probably Elizabeth.
Looking forward to next epi!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I love Disney as well!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: March 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 58: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Daddyward is so great! This was terrific. You don't really have to stop, you know......
Elizabeth is fine, but I don't love her like I do the rest of the Cullens! I have spent so much more time with them, i guess!
I guess there was no Jake in the main story, but I didn't remember that! At least he got to make an appearance!
Great job! Keep up the good work, potato!
Author's Response: Nope. No Jake in the main story. The LAST thing this angst-fest needed was the extra complication of a love triangle!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: July 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 60: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
OH BOY!!! ANOTHER outtake! I love it! You are the QUEEN of writing chapters AFTER the main story is complete!
I loved this! Bella and Edward were too cute - Bella with her serenity and Edward with his overwhelming overprotection! I loved Elizabeth's being SO calm as Bella's labor began. She did NOT inherit that from Edward!
It was interesting how nervous Bella was at the prospect that she was pregnant again. But once she knew, she was cool as a cucumber. Except for her mood swings.....
".....maybe I did not need to buy her a new vehicle originally manufactured for foreign diplomats fully loaded including bullet proof glass and a roll-protection frame as well as a seat belt fitted to accommodate her expanding waist line." >>> Good job, working in a tidbit from Breaking Dawn!! Edward is SO paranoid. But we love him that way!
"When one hears hoof beats in the forest, always assume the horse and not the zebra." .>>>>> I have never heard that before. Did you make it up? What exactly does it mean?
"... like a reclined king on his Tempurpedic throne. " >>>> You come up with the BEST lines!
THANK YOU!! I look forward to the next outtake!
Congrats and best wishes for the birth of your second child!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
The "zebra" line - someone said that to me when I was young and it has stuck with me. What it generally means is to look for the simple solution before jumping to something complex and unlikely. Like if you have a blemish, assume it's a zit rather than leprosy first;)
My second is now 5 months old! That's how behind I am!
Summary: Edward's perspective of his wedding day (and maybe a little more) - all in-canon. Written for the "Support Stacie" author auction winner.
Thank you to Icrodriguez for the awesome banner!!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 6455
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: April 28, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have read this before, but i just love it! Team Edward all the way!
Author's Response: Couldn't agree more - thanks!!! :)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
How sweet and romantic! I am loving this!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: After suffering heartbreak at the end of her relationship with Jacob, Bella decides to play the field on her own, disappointing Alice and Rosalie. Morning after morning, she finds herself stumbling office after a long, unfulfilling night. That is until Rosalie and Alice take her to a charity date auction and help Bella bid on the gorgeous Edward Cullen. Used to going after what she wants, Bella finds herself falling into bed with Edward with complete disregard.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Makenna
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7675
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: May 11, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Auction Block
Good story!! I just love seeing E & B meet in different ways!!!
Summary: What did Edward, Bella and Rosalie do while Jacob was joy riding in the Vanquish? Edward certainly gained a new perspective on things.
"I was astounded and amazed that I was suddenly as in love with this budding life as Bella."
Here's their missing scene from Breaking Dawn. Edward's POV
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1307
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Edward's Epiphany
Great job!
Summary:  
EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.
Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010
Summary: Chapter 20 from Eclipse (Compromise) from Edward's POV.
Bella was intent on seducing Edward, but somehow he managed to get a ring on her finger. His side of the story may surprise you - or maybe it won't!
Go get him, Bella!
Written for JAustenlover - she was the winning bidder for my services in the SupportStacie auction. Be sure and send her some love for requesting this piece, and for her generosity. Love ya, JAl!
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Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Totality
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 10184
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2009 Updated: May 18, 2009
Summary: 
Set after Breaking Dawn, the ongoing story of Renesmee and Jacob, Bella and Edward, and all the Cullens. Coming of age is hard enough, but half-bred Nessie faces choices no human should have to make. Romance, angst, drama, all the stuff you love from Twilight! Read and enjoy, feedback is awesome, flaming makes me cry! XD
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 47930
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 (vjgm)
YES! This will create all kinds of havoc!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Good story! I am glad I found it as part of the Nessie and Jacob Archives!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11(vjgm)
Jasper??? you right, never saw that coming!!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 (vjgm)
One thing: Nahuel didn't know Alice's name? But Alice and Jasper brought Nahuel and his aunt to Forks when the Volturi showed up. I don't quite grasp that.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (vjgm)
The birth and baby were wonderful! I loved that! Now on to the epilogue.
Summary: 
The McCarty clan was known as a wild bunch in the hills of Anderson County, Tennessee. They worked hard and played hard, and were well respected in the community. What happened when the most popular of the seven McCarty boys disappeared?
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 26128
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Appalachian black bear ----- I agree completely!
Good description of the attack. I was afraid that Emm would be in the woods with Georgie, and I don't think I could have handled that!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Emm was making up a story for the little guys. How sweet! Another reason that Rosalie won't be able to resist him. I was thinking he was reading books to them.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
THANK you for adding Rose and Edward and Esme. I love that!
Tough birth! I hope that they got all of that blood cleaned up!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Georgie really is too cute! And of course I love Emm. I would like for them to run into Willie -- literally!
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! I'm glad people are still reading my little story!
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