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Penname: EmoryB123 [ Contact]
Real name: Emory
Status: Member
Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman
I live near Charlotte, NC.
Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!
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Summary: Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny. Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret. Can they reclaim what was lost? All human.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010
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Thanks Roo, for the amazing banner!
And more keep coming in! Thanks to m81170 for this lovely piece of art:
Here's another amazing pic that fits in with Dark Side of the Moon perfectly -thank you to JohannaL for ID'ing the author: http://smirks-works.livejournal.com/ check out her (I assume) other manips - she's a genius!
Updated November, 2009
This story is now COMPLETE!
Dark Side of the Moon is my version of New Moon from Edward’s point of view. Witness how Edward agonized over leaving Bella, hunted for Victoria, faced the Volturi, and came to realize that with Bella was where he was meant to be.
This tormented story has been a part of my life for about a year and a half – and what a ride it’s been! Meant to be canon and in character, I hope you enjoy angsty Edward and his suffering during New Moon. As unhappy as Bella was during this time, Edward suffered so much more (I think). So be sure and crack open a fresh box of tissues before reading!
Thank you to everyone for all the reviews, especially to those of you who reviewed each and every chapter! Your support and loyalty have been the driving force to me getting this project finished – and I hope it’s lived up to all of your expectations.
Love you all,
blondieakarobin
PS. As one last thank you, I’ve posted a formatted, printable copy of Dark Side of the Moon at http://bit.ly/2vLHMi, as will also post as an electronic version suitable for viewing on a kindle or MobiReader. I’m also posting a ‘Director’s Cut’ that includes citations of all of Bella’s quotes from Twilight, research notes, and even funny comments from my betas in this version in the same directory.
blondie
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Use of the dialog from the series is just for clarity - Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight! I'm making absolutely nothing from this work.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163080
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2010
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue: Bad Blood
Built like a man, but with the tact and manners of a indignant toddler, Jacob Black was undeniably the most dangerous thing in Bella's world.
-----> Take THAT, Jacob! Team Edward (loved that line)
SUCH a good story! I loved Edward's point of view. You captured it just right! Thanks so much for a wonderful read!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Heaven and Hell
Great job! I know what has to happen, but my stomach is still tied in knots! That means fantastic writing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Dead Man Walking
So sad! How can I bear it??? Oh Edward!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Preface
Edward is heading back to the Volturi to learn their decision after he had asked for them to kill him. Seems obvious - am I missing something?
LOVE this idea!!!!!! If Steph is not going to do it, I am glad that YOU have!!!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Birthday
LOVED Emmett at the store -- that was PERFECT! And he and Edward "talking" --PRICELESS! Great job!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Party
Love the Romeo & Juliet scene - more intense than the BOOK!
How about a story of how Rosalie came to be a car person? not what one would have expected before she was a vamp...
Great party angle - Jasper & Edward's conflict was great! Loved how Edward blames himself for everything yet again.
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Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Stitches
Go mama Esme!!!: "Stop it, Rosalie, you are incorrigible,” Esme scolded. “Edward, let him go,” Esme commanded, but I ignored her.
Uh, oh. I am feeling the need for tissues coming on. How will I manage???
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Decision
Oh so sad!!! I know I will be upset by this story, but I love Edward's angst and POV too much not to read it! Great job so far!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Domestic Disturbance
Edward's angst is KILLING me! But I am loving the story!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: The End
I had thought about the truck radio and wondered why E did not take it - thanks for your explanation!
SAD!!! BUt gotta love E's angst! Good job. I never thought about E leaving his car behind, but it makes perfect sense!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Distraction
Oh EDWARD!!! How can I stand it? But how I love you!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Trick or Treat
This is so good! I have never thought much about what edward would have done other than the brief comments he makes to Bella about tracking V.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Adeste Fidelis
Thanks for recommending strider. Her work is great!
Great chapter. I love what you are doing with Edward. I kind of hate this was not in the original book!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Speechless
I hadn't erased my existence - I'd erased hers.
Oooooo---That was a great line!
I loved charlie here! E got the full picture, since in NM, Bella was out of
it or asleep!
Great job!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Awake
Wow.
That was an amazing chapter. You captured the raw emotion so well. Charlie and Edward and Bella. And it was awesome how you worked Jasper in there. Seeing what happened with the Cullens while Edward was gone was the perfect touch.
Thanks.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Epiphanies
Great chapter. I love hearing the Cullens' thoughts.
LOVED the part about the TV. I couldn't figure out why Alice said don't install until next day, but you made that perfectly clear!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Proposal
Awesome chapter! You have done such an outstanding job with this story. It is def going into my FAV's!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Missing
Good outtake! Poor Charlie! You did a great job of capturing all that he went through while B was gone.
Jacob wolf cameo: Was that when Charlie thought he saw something in the woods? If not, please tell what the cameo was!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: You got it! He watched over Charlie, just like Bella asked. Glad you enjoyed it!
blondie
Summary: Carlisle has had it with his children's constant bickering, so he sends the Cullens to Family therapy. Suicidal Edward, Bella's fear of committment, Alice addicted to shopping, Rosalie's hostility, emmett and Jasper's gambling... who will survive?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 65189
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: An Unlikely Alliance
This is one of the funniest things I have EVER read, Twilight or not!!!! --->“It was really scary Bella, I dragged Jazz to the ...oh my god...I dragged him to ...Walmart! They had so much stuff...it was a Super Walmart and I just ran through the aisles throwing things into the cart as fast as I could. When I filled one up, I hurled it at Jasper and got a new one. People thought I had won some sort of radio contest and only had 2 minutes to shop. " I guess Alice has never been to Walmart before - beneath her??? I guess so!! LOL!!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Girl Talk
I thought this was funny:Alice was hysterical at this point, she looked like she was having a breakdown and the doctor looked like he was considering committing her right then and there.
---> it was funny because Alice had been committed as a human due to her visions! Good one! Rest of it was funny, too!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Homework Sucks!
I never bet against alice but she sure did LOSE it!!!!
---> "IgottagoshopnowwhileIstillcanbeforeIcan'tshopanymore.Isawagiftshopdownstairsgottashopbye!”
I can't WAIT to read about the homework! Alice will be DYING, I know that! Jasper is going to torture everyone! Emmett may explode! TOO good! FUnniest Twilight and fiction I have read - and I have read a lot!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: What is his name?
Total craziness!!!! But you are doing a great job! Poor Dr. ben Dover!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Boy Talk
The Civil War breaks out again in Dr Dover's office--TOOOOOO funny!
I am LOL, TOTALLY!--->“Jasper is a cross dresser!” He screamed as loud as he could.
I heard Alice scream “What?” from the waiting room. Edward, what are you two doing in there? First the war and now this? We didn't to anything that bad to Bella...well Rosalie did, but I didn't unless you count Buzzy... oh never mind.
Jasper the cross dresser! Ha - he does let Alice give him makeovers and he did wear that dress when he lost a bet. Good one Emmett. Rosalie thought
This was great stuff!!!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Yummy!
Poor Carlisle! He will be mortified and the boys will give him all kinds of grief!
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