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Penname: EmoryB123 [ Contact]
Real name: Emory
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Member Since: November 26, 2009
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45 year old woman
I live near Charlotte, NC.
Twilight fan fiction is FASCINATING to me!
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Summary: 
A Breaking Dawn alternative story. Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon. Complications interrupt and they return to Forks. Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly. This story is an A/U from BD. There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle. It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.
Canon Pairings. Lots of romantic lemons. AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Bella's Revenge
Bella;s revenge was great! I loved seeing Emmett so rattled!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Epiphany
They will travel from Italy by ship. They do not like to travel by air, but prefer the old ways. They will travel the rest of the way by land, stopping during the day, traveling by night.” "Bella coming into my life had been my sunrise, my ascension from darkness into light. She had saved my soul and made me complete again. She had saved me in so many ways"
Author's Response: I'm still enjoying your reviews very much. I take it from these quotes that you liked this chapter and I'm so glad. This was a very important chapter in the story, Edward's Epiphany. It's very special to me and I'm glad you picked out the most important part. Thank you!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Epiphany
I think I missed out on part of what I meant to say earlier: I had wondered in the books how the Voluti traveled, so I am glad that you EXPLAINED this!! GREAT JOB!!!---> " They will travel from Italy by ship. They do not like to travel by air, but prefer the old ways. They will travel the rest of the way by land, stopping during the day, traveling by night.”
"Bella coming into my life had been my sunrise, my ascension from darkness into light. She had saved my soul and made me complete again. She had saved me in so many ways" OH EDWARD!!! YOu made me SOOOOO happy! I love your thoughts!! PLEASE have lots more of your POV!!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Allegiances
Great chapter! i am enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Yay!!! You're back!!!! I was hoping you hadn't given up on me! :) Thanks!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Calm Before the Storm
Excellent chapter! Good mix of humor and suspense.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Absolution
jacob is dead?? Unbelievable. But since i am Team Edward, I am not crying.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
An amazing story! You got the battle with the Volturi in there just like you wanted. I was great that some of the Volturi joined in the veggie lifestyle. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Yay! You're finally done! I'm so glad you enjoyed Ascension! It's was my first and is my baby for sure! Thank you so much for all of your reviews!
Summary: Bella and Charlie move to Chicago and into a very old house. But there's something very different about this place. What if Edward had died in 1918 and what if he never really left his former home? Will he finally have a shot at romance after all these years? And will Bella fall for him? Rated NC-17 for language and future lemons. Usual pairings.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 61919
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: A Peek Into The Past
Very nice, sweet and sad. But great that B & E are together! No harder to believe a ghost and a human than a vampire and a human being together!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Man Candy
Alice and her man candy...you gotta love it! ---> Yep, I do love it!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: It's About Time!
Very good job! YOu keep getting better and better! I am loving & E this way!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Collide
i did pick up on the name Cedric for the dog! Cute!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: A Little Night Music
Let's meet Edward! Good start!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Big City, Big News
Dipping Dots was a great detail!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Explanations, Emotions...and Handcuffs?
Yes, Edward is TOTALLY adorable!! Great chapter!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Thankful
Great job! THis was really cute! I am glad that E is more confident, but I worry about how B & E will work out, his being a ghost and all.....?
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: The Reason
Now that you have teased me, I am expecting to see E turn human so he & B can REALLY be together!!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Someone Like You (Part 1)
So lovely!! I KNOW you will let E stay human -- you just HAVE TO!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Jekyll and Hyde
Great job! I am glad everyone is happy with the prospect of Edward becoming human!! I like E & R in particular--R is being nice!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Breaking Point
Whoa!! Tense! I hope E & B will be together, STILL HUMAN, soon!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Lucky
Great job!! I was afraid there for a moment that E was not going to get to remain human (when he was acting nervous), but I love what you did with the proposal! I am glad Charlie had to have his say -- would not be Charlie otherwise!! Please KEEP ON writing stories!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue: What A Wonderful World
Go YOU! This was great, and I really liked the ending. I just wish that you HAD decided to do a sequel!
Keep on writing! You do a great job!
Summary: Jake ♥ Nessie... Whole.
[chapter 1]
"… I think I’m falling in love with you"
[chapter 2]
“Nessie... Look, I’m your father..."
[chapter 3]
"It broke my heart to think he'd doubted my intense love for him even for a second."
[chapter 4]
"This was so hard. I'd never denied her anything in her entire life. I'd watched her go through every phase in her short childhood. This was just one more step we had to take together- teenage rebellion."
Nessie asks if there were any other men in her mother's life. Obviously, Bella has quite a story to tell . Nessie confronts Jacob and... well, you'll see.
^^^ thanks you Little Miss Mionie for the LOVELY banner!! ^^^
Canon couples, fluffy, please read&review!! ♥
I know what you're thinking, Jake and Nessie, canon, blah blah blah. But please give it a chance!!!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: What a strange childhood...
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 7665
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: July 06, 2009
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Tough Questions
“What exactly would our kids be anyway? Part werewolf, part vampire, part human?”--- > I have thought about that a little; I think their kids/boys would be shape-shifters who look more like traditional werewolves, walking on 2 legs and looking a little bit human. But not wild, and not all the time. What would trigger the shape-shifting is my question....?
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Complications
Please update! I really love Nessie. Let her have more angst and I will be happy! Also, more time with daddy Edward would be great!
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback and suggestions, I might try for angst and i def. love Daddy Edward. I'm fighting with myself whether or not to continue, but I probably will even if I don't really want to... thanks again :)
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: December 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Two Fathers, Two Very Different Reactions
Nice story so far. I hope you will continue to update.
Summary: Almost one year has passed since Edward left and Bella's life has been plagued by one tragedy after another. Bella is feeling desperate and there is only one person who can save her from the abyss that is threatening to swallow her whole.
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 44525
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: December 31, 2008
Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Broken
Charlie is dead?? Whoa! This is really good so far -- on to more reading!
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